Mementos by TwilightChild
Chapter: Chapter 5

06/20/2007 10:36 am
Just beautiful -- all those memories rushing back and he didn't run. And Buffy didn't punch! Perfect.

Khrystal
06/11/2007 08:08 am
That was soooooooo good!! you should make a challenge to see if there is anyone who can make like an epilogue to this so we can know what happens between them. Unless of course, you wanted to leave us with mystery lol. Well, you can email me back at VHsnoopie2005@hotmail.com to tell me what you think of this idea!.
--Khrystal aka- Snoopy

TGL
05/08/2007 12:29 am
Your writing skills are among the best I have ever read. Your ability to reflect love, romance, sexual tension and desire incl. the very act between these two strong characters are indeed impressive.

Yet in this creation and sequel you choose to call memento you shot your earlier "masterpiece" into pieces. Why you may ask? Because you had really something going here, a great novel taking form, a true love story with passion of almost mythic proportions and yet you bail out in the last chapter with a cheap ending (perhaps to tired or bored writing what potentially could have been a truly unique love story).

What you did was much like painting a master piece and destroying its unique beauty in the end, by selling it to any bypasser for a dollar. How pity...

I hope you write something else though..you have something in very few possess. Never loose faith in that.

Best regards

TGL
I'd like to thank you for your honesty and encouragement. I had a feeling I would muck things up with this sequel, and I was right. If I'd followed my insticts instead of just giving in to what others wanted, it would have ended the way it ended in Seven Days. Ah well, live and learn, right?

Thanks again
TC

04/22/2007 12:28 am
Argh! Now I'm torn between liking the bittersweet ending of Seven Days and liking this one. Both beautiful possibilities of post-canon. Please update soon!

04/05/2007 11:14 pm
lovely read, absolutely beautiful. thank you

04/04/2007 09:55 pm
I'm so glad to see an update - certainly worth the wait!
Beautifully done!

04/04/2007 08:52 pm
awwwww, how very very sweet...i love the memories you chose, very moving, brought me nearly to tears, love...excellent chapter and i can't wait to see what happens next...
p.s.kinda feel sorry for andrew, though, poor boy was between a rock and a hard place... :P

04/04/2007 08:26 pm
Oh oh oh oh lovely...just perfect in every way! I'm grinning like that bird eating cat in the old saying. This is just a wonderful meeting.

Look forward to follow up.

Kathleen

Dark Amia
04/04/2007 03:18 pm
Just read this from the beginning. Great fic, it's good to see them finally meet up. Looking forward to the next.

04/04/2007 02:43 pm
That was just...incredible. Incredible incredible incredible. You evoke such emotion...my heart was so full reading this, it hurt a little bit. Everything about this chapter was perfect. I can't wait to see what happens next.

04/04/2007 01:49 pm
Thank you for the kind words, sweetie. It was totally lovely, well-done and readable long before I touched it. Wonderful reunion scene. :)

Dar
04/04/2007 01:45 pm
That was beautifully written. Bravo

04/04/2007 11:36 am
Wow, that was incredible. Glad she got pissed at Andrew but can't believe you didn't draw out the torture of his secret. Nice touch with the Immortal and ignoring his phone calls. Hope she keeps him all to herself for a while. Maybe calling Dawn so she's not worried. Can't wait for this next chapter and see where they go from here. Thanks for ending our suffering.

kim
04/04/2007 09:39 am
The powers did well this time...dropping a Shanshued Spike in Rome for Buffy to find.

04/04/2007 07:21 am
Whee!!! *looks like a lost puppy* please more?

I loved the update. It was really good. I loved the fact that he got several memories back I hope he questions her about them or finally remembers who he was. And is. Because that would be spectacular!

Keep up the great work and I will be patiently waiting for an update *sits on edge of chair, clicking refresh several times*
Jace

04/04/2007 05:01 am
That was great!!!! I loved the little snippets from Seven Days (lol, I've only read that fic 3 times now) OMG what's happened to Spike?!? Or William should I say? I knew he wouldn't be dead, (and I'm so glad you proved me right!!)but I'm so baffled about HOW he came back... I need more! *waiting impatiently for the next update* :)

04/04/2007 04:21 am
SQUEE! And double SQUEE! And... oh, I'm not coherent enough to leave a sensible review. Just know that my crazy excited noises means I like it. :)

kim
04/04/2007 04:19 am
LOVE love love love this!

04/04/2007 04:14 am
OH! how lovely!