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Insight by cereza 04/08/2007 11:03 pm Well, guess she did stay with him after all but what is their relationship? Friends, lovers are they mated? So many question scared to know the answers. Hope you'll be updating again soon. Great read, thanks. 04/07/2007 08:00 am seems spike has his own team. fun read, thank you. 04/06/2007 10:36 pm oh woww....can't wait to see where this goes from here, love...excellent chapters so far :) 04/06/2007 04:47 pm Nothing quite like a Spike grand entrance. Dar 04/06/2007 01:40 pm Nice story loved Spike's entrance smlcspike 04/06/2007 01:26 pm I wonder who is with him and what happened to him loving Buffy, please tell me they get together, I am not a fan of Spike others. Chomodog 04/06/2007 08:48 am Hey ! A great idea for a story.I have enjoyed your first chapters very much.Keep up the good work SpaceLord 04/06/2007 08:14 am Well a very interesting start, this should be good I think. Kate 04/06/2007 07:29 am Cool start. I really like the premise of this story and am really interested to see how you play it out. I actually buy the fact that the LA gang and the Sunnydale-controlled Watcher's Council would actually have had no contact for the last several years. I love Wes' thoughts about some of that. I also really love Buffy's thoughts about how things post-Sunnydale aren't hunky-dory for her and she does miss the old ways. That is very fitting of the Buffyverse and Joss' philosphy that happiness only last for so long. There were two moments though that felt very out of character for me. The first one is the exchange between Gunn and Buffy. I didn't understand her dislike of him or his weird, rather rude behavior towards her. Cannon-wise they've never met so why would Gunn be mean to her? It felt like a very false conversation between them and totally out of character as well. The other moment is the arguement between Wes and Giles. I know that they had their tiffs and minor battles over authority when in Sunnydale, but I don't think there is any indication that they would have this much animosity towards each other. Maybe Wes would due to the whole Fred/Illyria situation, but you didn't bring that up in Wes' thoughts or words in that scene, which would have helped in my opinion. I'm not saying that Wes and Giles wouldn't butt heads because they definitely could, especially under the pressure they are and being exhausted, but it just didn't work for me in this version. I feel like there are details of info missing that maybe you are planning on explaining later and that's partly why I'm a bit confused. But maybe not. Either way, it just may be something to consider. Looking forward to more. Like I said, really great start! 04/06/2007 05:55 am lmao leave it up to spike to make a show stopping entrance. more please :) anon462 04/06/2007 04:50 am Really liking this story so far!!! Looking forward to finding out who the girls are with Spike. Can't wait for the next update. Excellent!!! Tamara 04/06/2007 04:06 am Great story. I can't wait to see how Buffy and Spike interact. LadyYashka 04/06/2007 03:38 am I like how you've got everything set up. On one side you've got the organised army of Wolfram and Hart, and on the other you've got the fractured army of AI and The Slayers. Then you've tossed Spike into the mix. It looks like things are about to get messy. So nice start and I'm looking forward to the rest. Nichole 04/06/2007 02:48 am Just finished your story so far and i'm liking it alot...i look forward to more soon..N | |||
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