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Work in Progress by Scarlet Ibis
Chapter: The Virus of Life
alým
02/24/2008 12:44 pm
I don't like how everbody is learning what's happened to Spike,one by one.It may cause trouble to him,but,hey,I doubt that you'd let Spike get hurt...right?:)
Also,Harm is smart and even more appealing as you said before,I think I can get used to it;)
Loved the chapter.
Also,Harm is smart and even more appealing as you said before,I think I can get used to it;)
Loved the chapter.
I know...and I apologize. But it was apart of my master plan :D And Harm isn't necessarily smart in this fic, so much pays a good deal of attention to her vampire senses, and has no problem with blood vengeance for the man that she loves. But yeah, she's definitely likeable in this fic, and for good reason. I enjoyed Harm in s5 of Angel, and it shows here. Me, biased? Pshaw...
07/19/2007 10:59 pm
So, Joyce thinks of Spike as one of her "babies." I knew it! lol. When I first saw LMPTM, I was struck by how much Anne reminded me of Joyce. No wonder Spike took to her so readily. She's very much the nurturer, and that's exactly what he needs right now. I can't wait to see a scene between them.
If Harmony can manage to formulate a halfway decent plan, then Riley is in big trouble, lol. Unfortunately, knowing Harm, that's a pretty big "if".
If Harmony can manage to formulate a halfway decent plan, then Riley is in big trouble, lol. Unfortunately, knowing Harm, that's a pretty big "if".
Yeah, Joyce is reminiscent of Anne (which is why Spoyce fics kinda creep me out...)
Oh, and dear, sweet Harmony...well, I'll just say this- I've gotten a lot reviews where people actually say they actually *like* her. Can't wait to see how you feel about it ;)
Oh, and dear, sweet Harmony...well, I'll just say this- I've gotten a lot reviews where people actually say they actually *like* her. Can't wait to see how you feel about it ;)
05/25/2007 11:26 pm
Spike - Employed? Joyce needs to adjust her medication. That scene with Dawn was really icky. I liked it.
LMAO- yeah. But the vampire part and lack of employment aside, I think Joyce could be convinced he's good bf material. Well at least, she likes him. Ah, Dawn's scene- thanks. I know it was kind of convenient for her to see *that* scene of *that* movie, but I figured, what the hell?
sirc
05/10/2007 09:50 pm
well done
Thank you :)
Lou
04/11/2007 12:52 am
Wow -- Harmony's brain cells are on top form today! Go, girl! Great chapter.
Lmao! Thanks for reviewing :D
04/10/2007 12:22 pm
Does Dawn know that Riley's off the guest list? Glad Spike made Joyce's list. So Harmony knows the truth, does that mean she's the one to get vengence for Spike? Is the littlest vampire even capable of pulling it off? Worried about Dawn and Joyce, Riley's not a vampire, he doesn't need an invitation to come in. Great work, thanks.
Yes, cause she was eavesdropping again. And Harmony... well, she has plans ;) She's "the little engine that could," she is. And no worries about Riley- he's a boyscout, right. Right? Hmm... guess you'll have to read and see. Thanks for reviewing :D
Deb
04/10/2007 08:30 am
Looking forward to updates. Glad to see Buffy and Spike in a contemplative and quiet moment. Little worried for Dawn. Liked Anya and Giles thoughtfullness in dealing with Spike earlier at the Magic Shop.
Thank you for your lovely review :D More quality Spuffy time to come.
Dreylin
04/10/2007 06:21 am
And just like that, I kinda like Harmony. Riveting story.
Thank you for your kind review. It made sense in my brain to write Harmony like that- she does care about him, after all. The question is, will she succeed? Stay tuned... (or the equivalent for reading)
Thanks for reviewing :D
Thanks for reviewing :D
kim
04/10/2007 04:48 am
Harmony wanting vangeance? THat's a surprise...a very novel idea.
Ooo, Dawn watching "American History X" - way too young for that movie! And now Riley's at the door, yes?
Ooo, Dawn watching "American History X" - way too young for that movie! And now Riley's at the door, yes?
Of course- Harmony loves her Spikey bear (or some equally, semi degrading nick name). She genuinely cares (perhaps loves?) him. And true about Dawn, but she was captured in by male nakedness- a common lure for a girl her age and burgeoning curiosity. Thank you for reviewing :D
04/10/2007 04:23 am
how quickly everything changed for riley and the beauty of it is he does not know. can harmony, for once be effective? thank you for a fine update.
Yes, he'll be blissfully unaware for a little while... but no worries, someone will jolt him into reality ;) Thank you for reviewing.
04/10/2007 01:59 am
Wow, brutal way for Dawn to figure out what happened to Spike - but I bet it's Riley at the door, so I'm glad she knows just how evil he is.
And loved Harmony at the end - didn't expect her, but the "nobody messes with my boyfriend" attitude is cute. Would love to see her take on Riley (I'm imagining her defeating him by using the hair-pulling technique she used on Xander, lol).
And loved Harmony at the end - didn't expect her, but the "nobody messes with my boyfriend" attitude is cute. Would love to see her take on Riley (I'm imagining her defeating him by using the hair-pulling technique she used on Xander, lol).
Yea, Dawn's smarter than the show initially gave her credit for. Oh and Harmony is... vindictive in my mind, and what she plans on doing won't be funny like that- well, maybe in a sick, twisted way to those who hate Riley... We'll see ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
Thanks for reviewing.
BT_
04/10/2007 12:36 am
I don't know which one of your threads I'm most anxious to have you update - I guess you'd just best do them all... :)
Nothing like a demanding reader, huh?
Nothing like a demanding reader, huh?
Well, I'm trying my best to give in to your demands :D Two down, one updated, and one (hopefully) will be updated and completed soon, though these papers and projects these last few weeks of school are killing me... Thanks for reviewing :D
04/10/2007 12:15 am
Wow nto only does Rily have Joyce after him, maybe some of the Scoobies, Buffy and quiet soon Dawn, now he has Harmony too. Oh, man I can't wait to see what happens next. And please don't tell me that's Riley at the door? I hope he dosen't try to force himself into the Summers' homes. And Dawn's pretty bright I'm sure she's about to connect the dots and know what happened to Spike and who did it. Great chappie, can't wait for more. I can't beleive you typed the "n" word, lol.
Okay, alright- I won't tell you ;) As for the "n" word, well, it was in the film. And if you haven't seen "American History X," I strongly recommend it. Edward Norton (though he's no longer cut like that) is just, well, sexy, even though he's all evil and racist during most of it.
Thanks for reviewing :D
Thanks for reviewing :D
04/09/2007 07:44 pm
Okay, now my minds cheering for Harmony, telling her to make Riley hurt bad.
Wonder what Dawn will do now that Riley has showed up.
Wonder what Dawn will do now that Riley has showed up.
Wonder no longer! Oh, and Harm... yes, well, I still haven't revealed her plan, but she's in this chapter. Thanks for reviewing :D
04/09/2007 03:17 pm
moving the plot along well, love :) can't wait to see harmony's vengeance, and riley's suffering... hehe... glad that dawn and joyce now are figuring out what happened to spike, he needs all the support he can get right now, poor thing...great chapter, love :)
Harm's vengeance- yes, there's just "darkness" all over this fic... (secretive smile accompanied by a wink). Thanks so much for all of your support, and for pushing me to post in the first place :D
04/09/2007 02:46 pm
I could actually learn to like Harmony if she pulled off her vengeance against Riley, instead of heading for Buffy like she undoubtedly will.
But will she pull it off? There's a big TBC on that one, sorry. Thanks for reviewing :D
pretty_in_fangs
04/09/2007 02:40 pm
I have a happy feeling about Harmony now. How... strange. :grin:
And I like the fact that, somewhere in Joyce's brain, the push for Buffy to be with normal and marriageable is fading away.
And I like the fact that, somewhere in Joyce's brain, the push for Buffy to be with normal and marriageable is fading away.
Oh yes, I couldn't resist bringing Harmony in on all of this... And Joyce, well, what can I say? She's a bright lady ;) Thanks for reviewing.
04/09/2007 10:54 am
Interesting an intelligent Harmony! That will be quite a twist (one I sure didn't see coming). Pretty sure it's Riley at the door and I'm worried about Dawnie.
Looking forward to more updates.
Kathleen
Looking forward to more updates.
Kathleen
Well, to be honest, her enhanced smelling came with the vamp package, and though she isn't the brightest lightbulb, the scents just made no sense. That, and it made more sense to me for Harm to be the one vengeance inclined on Spike's behalf as opposed Buffy, cause Riley is still human after all *sigh*. Thanks for reviewing, and sorry for the wait.
Tamara
04/09/2007 10:42 am
Riley doesn't realize it yet but he's got nowhere to run and nowhere to hide. Spike's got a lot more people caring wanting vengeance for him than anyone ever thought.
Spike sure does, though he, nor Riley are not aware of it yet... Thanks for reviewing :D
04/09/2007 10:12 am
This was a good chapter. I liked how you drew parallels between the American History X scene, and what happened to Spike. Both were brutal and heartbreaking. Both characters were what some people would describe as "monsters", and yet what happened to them was horrific. Those scenes had you breaking with the characters.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Great job.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Great job.
Yea, that's why I used it- you feel bad for the "bad" guy, and will he find redemption or some sort? (that, and I love that movie) Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well :D
04/09/2007 09:26 am
Harmony is still in the picture! Her reaction is great, and I can't wait to see what she comes up with.
I also can't wait to find out how Dawn reacts to the person at the door.
Thanks for another great chapter!
I also can't wait to find out how Dawn reacts to the person at the door.
Thanks for another great chapter!
Unfortunately, Harmony's intent won't be shown until the chapter after next, sort of... And wait no further for Dawn's reaction. Sorry for the wait, and thanks for reviewing :D
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