Chirality by yutamiyu
Chapter: XIII

BecomingChosenGirl13
05/04/2008 04:31 pm
I really liked this chapter.

fanxstitch
04/17/2007 06:52 am
This is a beautiful, touching and well done story. I really look forward to reading more of it.
Thank you so much!

04/17/2007 03:08 am
dawn and spike's meeting was very well done. the the reasoning, truthful buffy is refreshing. very good read, thank you.
Thank you! I've been looking forward to the Spike/Dawn reunion for a while. Glad you like it!

04/16/2007 05:37 pm
Great update - glad your feeling better!
Thank you!

04/16/2007 04:07 pm
Glad you survived the root canal hon!

Really happy to read this update. The story is well written and the plot is intriguing. Love the connection between Spike and Dawn and like Buffy giving Spike time while still reaffirming her love. Glad SHE is sure LOL.

Kathleen
Thank you so much! I'm having fun developing the Spike/Dawn friendship, which wasn't really present in S5, as well as exploring the maturity that is present in Buffy, but was not shown for the majority of S6.

Lou
04/16/2007 03:20 pm
Lovely update and well worth the wait. What a different Buffy -- no death and resurrection make for a much nicer person!
No kidding! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

04/16/2007 02:53 pm
Three days!? Ouch! *pets you*

I love Buffy's little talk with Spike at the end, it shows a much matured Buffy!
I fully believe that if Buffy had survived S5, she would have shown a great deal of gained maturity between the seasons. I'm just playing it out...that's MY treat for me. :D

Pin
04/16/2007 02:40 pm
Great story and I relly liked this chapter. Very curious about the magic in Spike. THanks!
Thanks!

04/16/2007 12:35 pm
Thank you so much for the long chappie, but THREE WHOLE DAYS? I sure hope it was worth it. Great talk he had with Dawn, so happy she knows about him, Loved how Buffy told him about her feelings, straight forward and sincere, maybe soon he'll start to believe her. Tonight seems to be a good start. Yup, we've missed this, hoping for another update sometime soon.
Worth it? I'm not sure; there may be complications! I'm hoping to update again soon, too...thank you for the lovely review!

04/16/2007 06:56 am
Great update! I loved Spike and Dawn's reunion. I can't wait to find out why Spike's back, and what that magic is. I'm also looking forward to the changes you're going to make.

And finally, I'm glad you're feeling better. :)
Thanks so much! I feel like I'm starting to string my reviewers along, but honestly, there's just framework that needs to be set before I can actually progress to S6...and it's almost finished, anyway. Glad you're still enjoying the story!

pretty_in_fangs
04/16/2007 06:38 am
Points to Buffy for both being honest with herself about the genesis of her feelings and on knowing when not to push Spike.
I think the whole not-being-dead thing helped Buffy mature in a way she was not afforded in canon; the death of her mother and her new responsibilities were suddenly thrust upon her in S6 after her resurrection; I believe in my version, she's had time to slowly adjust, therefore becoming much more well-adjusted. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

PyroChilde
04/16/2007 03:18 am
Yay you're back, and with an awesome new chapter at that! Can't wait for your next update :)
Thanks! Hope to update soon. :)

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/16/2007 02:55 am
Good chapter.Update soon.I had to have a few cavities filled last year.I cried everytime I got the shot of novacaine.Shots are mean and deserve to die a painful death.
The shots don't bother me; it's the fat-lip feeling that remains for hours afterwards. Glad to see you're still sticking with me!

04/16/2007 02:45 am
awwww, what a sweet chapter, i love how open she's being with him now, and i'm glad he and dawn got things all settled...great job, love :)
Thank you so much! I'm so backlogged on your stories, but don't worry! I'm still reading! Just...kind of...slowly.

04/16/2007 02:36 am
Lovely chapter. I love the way you've turned their relationship in season six on it's head. It's strange but neat to see Buffy being the one trying to prove that she really loves Spike, and Spike being the one who's afraid to believe it's true. And the scene between Spike and Dawn struck just the right note. Glad to hear this this is gonna be a long fic. That's my favorite kind! And it doesn't hurt at all that this is such an enthralling story. I'm completely hooked and can hardly wait to read the next update. By the way, glad to hear you're feeling better. Root canals are the absolute pits.
I just hope the fic doesn't get TOO long. :P I think the chapters might be getting longer per post, so look forward to that. :) Enthralling? Thank you so much!

04/16/2007 02:26 am
Some lovely bits in this chapter - already it's so different. Can't wait to see what you do with it, and how Buffy convinces Spike - now that she's been honest with herself about where the feelings originated.
Thank you so much!

dark amia
04/16/2007 02:09 am
Yay to the long chapter. Really enjoying this fic. Loved Spike & Dawn's reunion.

Great work!
Thank you! I've been looking forward to writing the Spike and Dawn reunion ever since I wrote Dawn being mad at Spike after he jumped. :)