The Fire Within by Eowyn315
Chapter: In You Now

LindsayH
08/09/2007 02:51 am
Ok, A) I loved their inner thoughts, so funny and B)Your lyrics-changes were great (of course, I haven't heard the originals, so I'm biased towards you anyways) and C) you captured the dynamic that is Spike and Buffy so perfectly!
Thank you! Nice to hear you liked the lyrics changes. I'd recommend you check out the original... it's pretty good, too. :)

07/05/2007 11:16 pm
Liked the way you used the song for the story, it works well. This is a fun & clever read. Well done.
Thanks! Glad you like it!

06/12/2007 04:28 am
And a vampire for… whatever…” - LOL - I liked your lyrics. They are corn-free.
Thanks. :) Good to hear!

Devin
06/11/2007 06:23 am
And Into the Woods! Ah!! This fanfic is satisfying my musical theatre and Buffy obsessions all at once. :) Haha, it's great.
ITW is one of my absolute favorite musicals. :) This fic grew out of me being a musical nut - so you're just the audience it's written for!

04/26/2007 11:14 pm
You did a great job with the lyrics. She's back to being Bitchy Buffy again as usual. Very interesting twist, thanks for sharing. Are you still working on "Loves Bitch"?
Thanks! I am still working on Love's Bitch - minorly interrupted by my laptop having no power for several days, but now that we're up and running again, I should be posting a new chap tonight or tomorrow.

04/23/2007 10:08 pm
I knew Buffy would do a runner asap!! Is the singing permanent? Great fun. I hope Spike plays it cool.
Guess we'll have to wait and see if the singing is permanent. ;)

04/21/2007 10:46 pm
What a great job...especially with the lyrics. Please keep going!
Thanks! Glad you liked it!

04/21/2007 10:35 pm
Yes....why still the songs *G*. Buffy and her never ending attempt to talk herself out of enjoying what and who she enjoys is so in character. Buffy staking Spike with her words is as well.

Great update.

Kathleen
Hmm... why *are* they still singing? Guess we'll have to find out. Thanks for the review!

04/21/2007 09:30 pm
oh man, stupid buffy.... :P i don't like that conclusion she came to at all...great chapter though, and you're picking perfect songs, love :) great chapter :)
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like the songs... I've tried hard to find ones that really match (and tweaking them when they're not quite right).

04/21/2007 03:34 pm
Finally somebody thinks it's strange that they are still singing.
I liked your "ands and ors" idea. Well put.
Thank you, although, sadly, the "ands and ors" bit is from the actual song, so not really my idea. I will admit to using it once as the reason my boyfriend and I should see other people! lol

smlcspike
04/21/2007 02:16 pm
Oh that was to great, he gets he worked up and then tells her to go, like she wanted to in the first place, wonder if her friends will be as stupid as they were on the show, they should have known what she was up too.
Yeah, he's got some power over her, can make her want him... let's see what he does with it. :)

LadyYashka
04/21/2007 11:46 am
Wonderful chapter. As usual, Buffy is acting like a twit.

You write her wonderfully. :D

I'm already looking forward to more. :)

Thank you! Glad you like twit-Buffy. :)

kim
04/21/2007 06:02 am
Stupid Buffy!

Poor Spike...
Ha... that seems to be the theme in most of my reviews lately...

04/21/2007 04:13 am
A much less destructive (both physically and emotionally) parting of the ways than in canon... maybe there is hope for a less destructive relationship all round!?

Nice chapter. Thank you.
Well, it is a musical, so it should have a happy ending, right? :) Thanks for the review!

04/21/2007 04:08 am
I'm glad Spike was able to get some of his own back and let her know that this thing between them isn't going to be a one off. It'll be interesting to see how long it takes before she goes back to visit him again.
Yeah, Spike's not gonna let her blow him off this time. And judging by her reaction to him, I don't think it'll be long before Buffy's back.