Work in Progress by Scarlet Ibis
Chapter: Let My Savage In

01/17/2016 10:29 pm
Such a good set up for the events coming - and it's all complicated because One, Spike is a vampire and by Buffyverse mythos inherently vulnerable to control by his demonic nature.  Two, the theme of vengeance and moral accountability - Spike and Harmony taking vengeance of Riley puts them all on a equal level field - all choosing to do the same terrible act that Riley did. 

alým
02/24/2008 04:00 pm
I enjoyed the chapter except for the parts where Riley defeated Spike.I loved Buffy's dream;especially the brief, hot, Spike-sex and the boy version of Spike.
Well, Riley's a loser in oh so many ways in the end.  And thanks for the comment on the dream--I didn't get many of those, and I worked real hard on it meaning something :D

02/20/2008 02:01 am
On on the edge of my seat now... Great chapter.
I don't remember specifically what happens in thsi chapter, but I'm glad it had you on edge ;)

06/20/2007 04:46 am
Buffy and her slayer dreams. Spike as a child, how cute is that! So happy to have Harmony and Chris find him before Riley can hurt him again. I hope they can have some fun with Riley before Buffy can find him. Now I understand what you meant about Spike being able to get some revenge for himself. Great chapter, this should be fun.
Well, by the time you read this, I'm sure you'll have your answer. Whether or not you approve is a whole other story ;) Just keep in mind that Spike's still... well, I don't want to use fragile, but emotionally, he is.

05/27/2007 02:33 am
Spike has no chip, I hope Buffy oesn't act all, well, Buffy when she finds out. Can't wait to see what Spike had planed with Harm, and what she wants to do with Riley.
Ah yes... I'm sure though most will be expected, a few surprised will emerge ;) Hope you like this next bit, and thanks for reviewing.

05/25/2007 11:42 pm
Nice twist. Now Buffy can be mad at Spike, too.
Ah, Ms. Buffy... what ever will she do? Can't spoil you though ;) Thanks for reviewing.

05/23/2007 05:45 am
an effective harmony, excellent. spike with a disabled chip, priceless. thank you for the fun read.
Thank you for reviewing :D I hope you enjoy this next bit...

Izzy
05/23/2007 02:48 am
Things are getting interesting. I hope Spike shows more of his softer William side in a good light, instead of just the victim-part. Buffy has to fall for him like that! He can be sweet and compassionate and understanding though I know it'll be a while before snuggles. Keep updating!
I'm getting into William, so I think we'll see his poet side eventually. Hope you like what comes next, and thanks for reviewing :D

05/22/2007 10:02 pm
another excellent chapter, love, very dark in the right ways :) love to see riley pay for what he's done...looking forward to more :)
Thanks :D I'm hoping the next part's good, even if it may be expected... Maybe I'll even be able to update sooner more than later.

05/22/2007 09:06 pm
Hum....unexpected turn of events. Wonder if the chip is out of commission for good or not? Go Harm! Looks like Spike is going to get his own back a bit (and yay for that). Interesting dream.

Kathleen
Honestly, I don't know yet, though I'd bet on yes :D I hope you enjoy the next bit- and thanks for commenting on the dream. That really meant a lot.

jane
05/22/2007 08:40 pm
Great update. Don't know if I really want Buffy to stop what's coming to Riley. He's unhinged and is always gonna be dangerous. Can't wait to see what comes next.
But... vengeance is bad. Okay, couldn't type that with a straight face :D Hope you enjoy the next bit.

Bridget
05/22/2007 06:55 pm
Not that Riley doesn't deserve it but I hope that Spike does not kill him. It would make things worse for him overall.
Well... I can't tell you. However, I hope you like what I've done with the situation ;) Thanks for reviewing.

daniel_nieves
05/22/2007 06:38 pm
I hope Riley gets whats coming to him.
Um, yes... Don't want to spoil you ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

05/22/2007 10:24 am
Poor Spike's going to be in deep trouble no matter what happens!
Probably, but it just wouldn't be right if Spike didn't have his day of vengeance. Thanks for reviewing, and hope you enjoy the next bit :D

kim
05/22/2007 09:27 am
Go, Harmony! Revenge party on Riley!!! Woot woot! Time to show that bastard how Spike got his nickname.

Hope Buffy doesn't freak.
Lol, thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy the party...

05/22/2007 08:07 am
If Buffy sees Spike hurting Riley she's probably going to overreact.
Great chapter, looking forward to more.
Sorry for the wait, and I hope the reactions... all around are pleasing. Thanks for reviewing :D

Tamara
05/22/2007 05:31 am
If the something awful is what's gonna hapen to Riley I can't see that as a bad thing.

Yay, Harmony! Great timing.
You know, I have to agree with you there.

Thanks for reviewing and hope you enjoy the next bit :D

05/22/2007 05:17 am
Oh, the chip is dead...mwhahahaha! Nice timing there, by Harmony. You don't often see stories where she gets to be an actual character.
I think... Harmony's gonna surprise us all quite a bit in this fic ;)

Thanks for the review.