Check Mate by Xela
Chapter: Part VIII

08/08/2007 04:21 am
So glad she gets to have this but what language. She's only been pregnant for a few seconds and she's already cussing him out! Poor Spike.

05/24/2007 03:11 pm
Bastard?? Huh?? I'm not following Buffy on this one...

Beauuuuuutiful chapter :)
Oh, don't worry. You will :) Thanks for the review!

ivy
05/24/2007 03:03 pm
im a new reader and why does the story always end on a cliff hanger are you going to add more to it or is it just finished? otherwise this story was great!
To keep you reading, and because those are actually good stopping places for new chapters; they end one section and start another one. And if you look at the story, you can see if the author has marked it complete, meaning it's over and done with, or incomplete, meaning there's more to come :) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

05/24/2007 07:25 am
The description of them sharing the labor and the beauty of the transfer of the baby from Spike to Buffy as well as their reactions was really well done. I liked how everyone gathered round and the feeling of closeness that was expressed and the shocking effect it gave the final line. It also made me laugh as I realized where Buffy was coming from with that statement.
Why thank you :) I was surprised that so many people didn't realize what was going on. LOL.