This fiction is perfect! The very idea of Spike bein' in a coma is brilliant and you wrote it down so masterfully,so I can't even find the right words to describe what this story made me feel.I always appreciated a little Spangel in the fictions I read and this...This was just the right dose.And Spuffy...I'm just...
I'm in awe of you.

Looky what you did, while I wasn't reading! This is a wonderful challenge, I can't wait to get to the next chapters. Great dialogue for Dawn, fits her perfectly. Way to go AO. Now to the next chapters.

What a wonderful start! On to the next section.

two -- that last bit just about made me cry for poor dawnie...i'd say poor spike, except he's really the only one in the scenario who's reasonably happy at the moment...can't wait to see where this goes next, love :)

One -- yeah, that's about the only way that angel would ever be able to understand and accept it...to see it for himself....great first chapter, love, looking forward to more :)

Great chapter. I loved Dawn's rant.

Are you sure this isn't an Angel doppelganger? He's being very nice about the situation!

I loved Dawn's rant at Spike. It was perfect.

excellent beginning, thank you. dawn sounds just like herself and a lot like a younger buffy.

Great start. I loved Dawn's rant.