Miz SlaymeSoftly, what an exceptional scene you've writ--got all that great hot tension and sweet sweet release!! Anticipation of is always the best way to write sex, gots to be eat up, burnin', running on heavy fuel for it to really have the gut wrenching Hotcha Baby going and you nailed it (no pun intended). This prelude to loving is like late summer peaches, all hot and juicy and tart sweet.
Tom Robbins wrote in Still Life with Woodpecker that kissing helps women to suffer civilization and he's right--nothing in this world like the joy you've writ here. Thanks for going slow and making them want it , cos if it's too easy too fast don't mean as much--love the way this very neat little story is progressing. Thank you for your hard work and pretty pretty words. Courtly love Spike is a hot summabitch!
Perfect, just perfect (and now I must go bathe!)
Kathleen
Have I mentioned how much I love this gentlemanly Spike?
