Work in Progress by Scarlet Ibis
Chapter: Walk Away

alým
02/24/2008 07:45 pm
Gee,I wonder how he'll answer that question
By the way,nice chapter:)
Thanks :D  And our boy is clever...that's all I'm going to say about that.

01/28/2008 09:54 am
So I said I'd read after work... LOL! I couldn't resist!
Loved this, gonna catch up with the rest now!
Can't wait to see how Spike responds...
...wait a minute, I don't have to wait! *rushes to next chapter*
Glad you played catchup :D  Now...you don't have to wait any longer for the ending, cause it's over.  Hurray!  Thanks Sotia.

sirc
10/02/2007 09:34 pm
Great chapter! :D
Thanks sirc :D Hope you feel the same about this last one...

09/14/2007 08:42 pm
Intense chapter! I especially loved Buffy's confrontation with Spike at the end. I like how you had Spike point out to Buffy that she would have let him bite her in "Out of My Mind". I always wondered about that as well. If his chip hadn't fired - and for all she knew, it wouldn't - he would totally have had her. I don't think I've read a fic that addresses this before, so good job on that! And need I tell you how much I love the ending? The rapture of Spike's "innocent, yet somehow sensual touches". The question she asks him ... I cannot wait to see how he replies. This is just a wonderful story. :-)
UB, I find myself examining every nuance of canon Spuffy interactions, and then picking them apart. I think it's the whole "geek" thing. Have to prove my right of being a card carrying member, don't I? And wait no further- the updates here. And only one epilogue to go ;) Thanks for reviewing.

nmcil
09/09/2007 03:50 am
nice update - short but good - sorry to hear that you will not be able to work on this story on a regular basis - but thanks for doing what you can -
Unfortunately, this next update's even shorter...but for a reason. I hope you find my reason to be a good one. Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing as much as you have on this fic, and I sincerely hope that I don't disappoint you.

09/08/2007 02:56 am
wonderful read, love. great line to end the chapter.
Thanks, vladt :D I'm super happy that you enjoyed it. Hope to see you for the end...

09/07/2007 07:10 am
I just now discovered this wonderful story of yours. Dark, but very good. I hated Riley (which I'm pretty sure was the point), and to my surprise loved the Harmony bits. And I can't wait for the Spuffy.
Thank you so much, and happy that you found this ;) It's my first dark fic, so I'm glad you thought I was successful. The long awaited Spuffy will be...soon :D

09/07/2007 04:54 am
I hate that Xander had to find out what happened to Spike, but maybe he will realize that everything is not all black and white. And leave it to Giles with the way he is dealing with Buffy and Spike. And go Buffy for at least this time not living in denial.
Well if it's any consolation...Willow and Tara are totally in the dark, lol. And yes, so much has happened that it would be impossible and irresponsible for me to leave Buffy in a river somewhere. Thanks for reviewing :D

09/07/2007 01:45 am
Giles would completely bit knocked of his feet with this revelation. What she went through with Angel and now what about Spike? Thanks for letting Xander know just what Riley did to him. Xander just had his blinders pulled off and even he can't see that clearly right now. Well, that's the question at the moment right now, isn't it? Does Spike even know himself. They all have things to work through, I'm glad you're not throwing them together just yet. They both need some time, so do the scoobies, though it might be a bit easier for Xander to get on board, now. Thanks for the update. School, does put a crimp in your writing time. Looking forward to more.
Gosh, Scoobies...Willow was totally absent in this fic. Is that strange? Was she missed? Anyway, I'm glad you agree with them needing time, and I hope you don't mind that in the update, well...I kinda ignored Xander- for (what I hope is a) good reason. School still sucks, btw, but this story is almost wrapped up (unlike much of my schoolwork). Thanks for being there like every step of the way :D

09/06/2007 10:17 pm
Great way to end this chapter!
Thanks so much, Joyce :D Hope you feel the same about the ending...

09/06/2007 08:55 pm
Great chapter. Wonder what Spike will say to that question.
The question now has its answer! Thanks for reviewing, Inzey :D

09/06/2007 03:41 pm
lovely chapter, pet, the scene you inserted at the start works well, too :) good job on this and i'm looking forward to reading spike's response to that all important question :)
Thanks so much, DoS :D Glad I didn't disappoint with that addition. Hope you feel the same about the next, lol.

Tamara
09/06/2007 12:00 pm
I hope that mission in South America leads to Riley being a chew toy for something big and nasty.
lmao, yeah...That'd be fitting. Alas, I doubt that Riley will make an appearance, even a horrible, "accidental" death, in the end of this fic. But you never know- Muse is liable to change her mind ;) Thanks for reviewing.

09/06/2007 11:07 am
So Riley is gone and Xander tried to but in again is it, it seems like Giles knows something or just won't admit something to himself.
Oh yes, Riley's gone, and Giles has much to ponder...Hope you like his assesment ;) Thanks for reviewing.

09/06/2007 10:36 am
Yikes -- tell the truth, Spike! This is not the time for prevarication.
Um...hum...can't say, lol. Thanks for revieiwng Lou. Hope to see you on this update :)

09/06/2007 05:26 am
Hey, we may have had to wait but it was worth it. Great update. So long Riley, but is he gone for good? And Xander, he was left speechless for a change. I can't believe he aactually believed Buffy in regards to Spike. But will he use this info. at Spike out of anger?

Can't wait for the next update!
I'm going to address the whole Xander thing in the epilogue. Maybe it was all of that Bander talk, but I'm kinda Xandered out at the moment, lol. I don't think that Xander would believe his bff to lie about such a thing, so I simply didn't address it in this second to last update. Thanks for reviewing :D

09/06/2007 05:15 am
Well, I suppose whether he should answer that depends on why she wants to know. That's not a question I want to answer in the definitive if I know they're going to be cruel.

Giles seems to be on to something specific, and I'm not sure what.
Well Caro, I think Spike would agree with you...Thanks for reviewing :D