“Sure. I’ve heard of disco.” Great line, and fun plot. I like the way your Spike and Buffy are interacting in a different environment.

love the conversation. very good opening chapter, thank you.

"Sure. I've heard of disco."

Hee! You are off to a great start. I look forward to reading more.

Oh lovely! I hope your muse insists on more. This "other side of William the Bloody with hints of William the Human" would make a lovely relationship. Love Riley slopping hog and making jello LOL.

THIS is a film-worthy Spike comment the voice is so perfect:"Let me guess. Righteous Finn came back from his visit to Iowa and all is not well with our young lovers.” Excellent!




Kathleen

Buffy's last line just makes me cringe. I wonder if she knows that Paul McCartney was in a band before Wings?

Insightful Spike, reluctant-but-not-hostile Buffy... ah, S5. Quirky fun, this.

LOL, she's such a cretin sometimes. Has she picked up nothing from having an art dealer as a mother? ;) My history teacher of a mom sure indoctrinated *me* with stuff.

Love how you write Spike. :D

I like the forced domesticity of this, and the view into Spike's level of culture that I don't usually see.

I love it how Spike bedazzles Buffy with his smarts.

Love your sense of humor. Great beginning.

Wonderful story; love it when Spike is portrayed as actually having a brain; the tension b/n your B & S is excellent; I keep waiting for the shoe to drop; for Spike to say something he shouldn't and Buffy to bop him in the nose! Can't wait for update; please make it soon!

Buffy, what a limited child..
And Spike, for such a "beast" that she considers beneath her-cultured and educated.

She really doesn't have a clue. Poor Buffy, what a limited existance. Kill Demons or Die !

And not to throw stones and complain about this nice story you are continuing. But I have been checking religiously for Mr. Pratt to see what those Possibililties are. How's the muse?

ROFL - Love this valley-girl Buffy and sophisticated Spike. Some more revelations are undoubtedly right around the corner. :)

great start look forward to more soon.