very good read, thank you. enjoyed the chapter ending. roflmao.

Just read from the beginning.  Good story!  Looking forward to the next update. 

Great chapter, lovely to see more of this great story.

Oh that was good.

Welcome back!  Love the update - you right such action-packed chapters.  This is a wonderful adventure.  Thanks!

Great new chapter.  Thanks for the update Ariel Dawn.

Hee.. I've been following this all around the internet :P Dark-solace, SR, here, and I love it every time I see an update!

Great chapter, although I am worried about Dawn and the bag and the smell...

Can't wait to see what's up next... though I guess I'll have to!

XXX

Uh-oh, what's with the bag Dawn took in?

Hope the rest of the plan goes alright....

Thanks for the update, I love this story! Hope to see more soon!

Nice season 8 reference.  I definitely your Amy more than the comics' version!  Thanks for the update!