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Out of My Head by AJ Hofacre
Chapter: feelin' pretty damn good
10/23/2008 05:22 am
Good so far, Fuck Riley though, great start.
Brunettepet
06/26/2008 01:47 pm
This is already a lot of fun. Your Spike and Buffy voices are excellent, and I'm enjoying the premise. Spike actually getting the chip out, and immediately focusing on his lust for Buffy is a good twist, and accidentally claiming her twists this up even more.
Buffy's less than flattering thoughts about Riley set the stage for Spike's seduction, and I loved Spike's assertion here: "Don't imagine yourself as her hero, Cardboard. She don't need one. You're lookin' at the hero of the soddin' tale right there. She can handle herself just fine." He really sees her, appreciates her strengths. Poor Riley, he doesn't stand a chance.
I'm sure I've read this before, but I don't think I reviewed it.
Buffy's less than flattering thoughts about Riley set the stage for Spike's seduction, and I loved Spike's assertion here: "Don't imagine yourself as her hero, Cardboard. She don't need one. You're lookin' at the hero of the soddin' tale right there. She can handle herself just fine." He really sees her, appreciates her strengths. Poor Riley, he doesn't stand a chance.
I'm sure I've read this before, but I don't think I reviewed it.
alým
04/09/2008 09:13 pm
I aggree with Spike -it's gonna be so funny:D
So,you wrote this when you were a junior in high school,huh? Awesome!
So,you wrote this when you were a junior in high school,huh? Awesome!
Yes, I did :) I was 17! It took me about six months to write and I finished just after I graduated high school :) I'm glad you're liking it!
Cas
03/30/2008 05:15 am
Know I've read this elsewhere, but I'll read it again!
Thanks :)
IT
03/11/2008 11:08 pm
I love it!! Your descriptions and imagery are vivid. More soon, please!
Thanks, I'm glad you like it :) More coming up soon!
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