Tears by TwilightChild
Chapter: II

07/18/2012 12:00 am
He was saying goodbye to Dawn wasn't he? Telling her he was leaving town. You really screwed up Buffy.

01/09/2012 01:02 am
That was great. I was crying when she saw Spike. She really broke him. His stance, not looking at her in the eye, the soft voice he used, missing his swagger. Him begging her not to throw out his gift. I am actually surprised he gave it to her. But this is Spike, he bought it just for her, took him forever to pick it out and get the money for it. So as far as he is concerned it's hers. Whether she deserves it or not it's hers.

08/19/2009 05:05 pm
Oh.. wonderful and full of sweet promises of a happy ending for all the hurt.. please, write me that ending? Please?

08/19/2009 05:04 pm
Oh.. wonderful and full of sweet promises of a happy ending for all the hurt.. please, write me that ending? Please?

ren
07/29/2008 01:46 pm
i'm loving this story sooooooooooooo looking forward to the next chapters..

05/22/2008 03:43 am
That sound you hear??  That's my heart breaking for poor Spike; amazing chapter; can't wait to see more!!

05/15/2008 08:09 pm
What a cow!

05/14/2008 09:00 pm
she has to listen to that 'tiny treacherous voice....'  very good chapter, thank you.

05/13/2008 03:28 am
Good Luck with your new work - hope you get back on good terms with your muse -  Like this very much so far - I sure wish that Spike would give himself the gift of "Buffy Leaving" for a while and find himself again - away from this horrible burden that is his love for this woman. 

One of the things that I totally hated with the series was the total lack of acknowledgement of that Alley Scene and the, IMO, complete stupidity of the treatment with Spike and Buffy during the Birthday Party episode -  

Outside of the mythic interpretation and symbols that apply to "Dead Things" that has to be one of the lowest points ever for the heroine of the series -  I am certainly looking forward to see what you will bring to the discussion -  

IT
05/12/2008 10:25 pm
Oh, Buffy has some apologizing to do to Spike! You've written so descriptively, I can just see him standing in the living room, shoulders hunched, with a little rain cloud over his head. :(

Looking forward to more.

05/11/2008 06:09 pm
I like the way this is building up.  Buffy has quite a bit to work through.
BTW, that necklace sounds wonderful.   I absolutely love the combination of silver and sapphires.  

05/10/2008 11:09 pm
Poor Spike...my heart breaks!  She had so broken him...first the physical beating then the emotional one.  What a bitch. 

Looking forward to more (hope your muse comes back full tilt for all your stories!).

Kathleen

Ann
05/10/2008 09:41 pm
A beautiful and sweet scene. I wonder just what had happened with Dawn first, though, and how she'd react if she knew Buffy had given Spike the bruises he still had, even with vampire healing. Looking forward to more, the descriptions of the moods and feelings are so clear and poignant. Great chapter!

05/10/2008 08:43 pm
Oh man, Buffy being crazy. I like the story so far, will be looking to see where you go with it.

Ivy
05/10/2008 05:20 pm
Aw he still gave her a present even after she cheated on him. Ok just give Spike to me, I'll treat him so much better. it is progressing nicely, can't wait for more!!