Business as usual by Lilachigh
Chapter: Chp 21 A Cottage in the Country

01/25/2013 07:17 am
Text  Ok, first off, so so satisfying.
Second, I didn't know until golf was mentioned that it was the Mayor, but that was such a good throw in.
You made me feel better after you nearly broke me last chapter.

07/19/2008 03:18 am
well - a very neat turn of events - will she accepts the big surprise gifts or not?  will Agnes get to play a part in helping save The Key? 

Lovely section on how true a friend Agnes can be - would that she had friends equal to her huge heart and capacity -

timeofchange
07/06/2008 03:40 pm
I missed some of your updates, I see.  This chapter left me covered in goosebumps, which is a huge complement considering that it's hotter and more humid than a Hellmouth here.  Hmmm.  Maybe a new Hellmouth is opening this summer in Connecticut?  In any case, Mr. Elder is one of the creepiest OCs I've ever read.
 Hi, glad you caught up with Agnes story.  Thanks for liking Mr Elder.  i had hoped more people would realise the Mr Nicholas Elder was my speak for Old Nick, but sadly not!   He gave me the creeps writing him, too!

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07/03/2008 12:19 pm
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 Nothing came up on your review for my story. Do hope you liked it!

kim
06/06/2008 10:01 am
Oh, wow, Agnes! Quite a boon from the Mayor, that's for sure.
 Thank you so much for reading. Hope you're enjoying the story.

06/05/2008 10:04 am
Another brilliant twist!  Dear Agnes would have really enjoyed the Mayor's company - the nicer side of course. This is so much fun.
 I think in Agnes' eyes the Mayor was "the one".  But why didn't she say yes to his proposal?  Glad you are still enjoying the story.