06/10/2008 09:25 pm
now that you have our attention! very good opening chapter, thank you.
06/09/2008 11:33 pm
Excellent start.
jane
06/09/2008 06:30 pm
Sorry forgot to leave a name last review. Great start, looking forward to more.
06/09/2008 06:29 pm
Really intriquing intro, I like it.
06/09/2008 09:59 am
OMG! Love it. Heaps of potential. I'm hooked!
Richard
06/09/2008 05:34 am
MWAHAHA, this is great! So much potential.
Shelby
06/08/2008 12:58 pm
hahah love it! love to see more of it, if your ever gonna do that =D
kamla
06/08/2008 01:34 am
oh my goodness! talk about what the heck!! What condition? what's going on. it's offical---i'm snared!!
Sijay
06/07/2008 03:44 pm
An interesting start! I'd love to read more.
06/07/2008 03:43 pm
06/07/2008 09:19 am
Oh, I am so intrigued! You really surprised me with that revelation. I hope there is a new chapter soon.
nimsimbelmyne
06/07/2008 06:00 am
Great start! Looking forward to reading more!
nimsimbelmyne
06/07/2008 06:00 am
Great start! Looking forward to reading more!
06/07/2008 02:12 am
Interesting and surprising start....I really didn't see it coming. Looking forward to hearing how she was turned and by who. You can feel the tension.
Kathleen