Interview With A Vampire Slayer by ShesOnlyEvil
Chapter: Sickness

Thx. Good start.
07/05/2010 02:40 pm
 

06/11/2008 06:39 am
I understood the line, so my vote is leave it in...
interesting story - looking forward to more!

06/10/2008 09:41 pm
very good read, thank you. it's your tale tell it your way.

Meredith
06/10/2008 10:53 am
 I think the line works just fine. The following narration clears it up.
Can't wait to read more!

06/09/2008 11:41 pm
Deeper into the mystery - this is really well done.