Future Imperfect by Lilachigh
Chapter: 17 "Need the Child"

11/04/2008 03:42 am
Great chapter with the twins.  Angel is such a jerk. 

jess
07/23/2008 06:02 pm
OMG i'd almost forgotten about this story. Glad you didn't.
 I never forgot it, just that Business As Usual rather took up a lot of my time!  But I'm going to try and share the hours out equally between all my stories from now on!

07/23/2008 07:49 am
The mystery surrounding the First Slayer's appearance is very intriguing, I can't help but wonder if the child in question is Joyce and not Shanny though. The scene inside the bubble was also interesting. Loved the update! :)
 Delighted you are still enjoying the story after such a long delay.  The family connections are complicated; their relationships to each other even more so.  One or two people have told me that it is wrong for Angel to like one child more than the other, but I don't think it is so unlikely.  Angel cannot see beyond the resemblance to Darla at the moment.

07/22/2008 08:54 pm

oh, that was a great chappie!!!! i can't wait to find out what happens next!!

 Thank you so much. Will be a short delay as off to on holiday for a week. But hope to update on my return.

07/22/2008 05:57 pm
Great chapter!  I love this story!  i can't wait for more!!!!
 So pleased you enjoyed this chapter. Sorry for long delay in updating. Blame Agnes Pringle!