A Different Light by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 4

08/25/2008 09:08 pm
spike and buffy at their best. wonderful chapter, thank you.
Oh, thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!

08/18/2008 10:27 pm
Glad to see this posted over here.  Great chapter.  Loved the ending, of course.
Thank you!  Now we're really getting into it. :D

08/16/2008 03:50 pm
Just wanted to let you know I am enjoying this very much! I always thought I was the only one who rather fancied seeing Spike riding a mechieta. I haven't followed the recent books in the 'Foreigner' series but enjoyed the first three so much. Great to see a favourite writer playing in TWO of my favourite worlds.
Have you read Sheri Tepper's 'Grass' as well?   You might like it!  I crossed the mecheita with her Hippae.

08/16/2008 02:37 pm
Great description of balancing on a steed.  Many rural people in the South have only one vehicle which means the rest of the family is dependent on using horses to get around.  At least my family did.

I love how Buffy was clueless to Spike's action. 
She didn't see it coming at all, which is so Buffy!
I only learned to ride a couple of years ago when we moved into a rural area and I vividly remember how scary it was!  And that back and forth that Buffy was put through when the h'laren got up came from my one experience with riding a camel.  I too found myself staring at the sky!

08/16/2008 04:11 am
Hah, you snuck some updates in on me. I'm really enjoying this story. And here I was worried that I had nothing to read tonight...
I'm doing one a day as I proof it.  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!  Thank you!

08/15/2008 10:04 pm
Your descriptions in this chapter were fabulous!  That kiss was too sexy!
Wow, thank you!  Those scenes are so much fun to write!

ya_lublyu_tebya
08/15/2008 10:01 pm
HOT!!!! I look forward to more.
Thank you!  Aren't those scenes fun to write?  More up tomorrow.

08/15/2008 08:42 pm
Hey now, people! You're on a job, now, so settle down! The big bad is close. Focus! Or, you know, not.
They're going to have a really hard time concentrating for the next little while. :D

Bridget
08/15/2008 08:26 pm
This is a really great story and I loved the Spuffiness.
Oh, thank you!  It's going to heat up from here!

08/15/2008 08:05 pm
What'd she let loose?  Something as wild, as fierce, as strong and as dangerous as those h’laren things you've created.  As beautiful, too, I'd wager.

This is a great story.  I'm really enjoying it.  So glad to know that I'll get a new chapter every day till it's done, too!  I can't wait till tomorrow!  :)

Your Buffy and Spike are so true to form - I am loving how Buffy is so smart and capable, but still, she had her "duh" moment about the blood.  You've gotten Spike's voice just right as well. 
Oh, thank you!  I'm so glad you think I've got the two of them right!  I do love these two characters.  She has let loose something powerful in both of them by responding.  Thank you for liking this!