Revenant by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 2

slinkz
09/25/2009 11:34 pm
Could be interesting seeing how Spike handles going back to the girl after being with the woman.  And how long before Buffy wants this Spike to want her and not Buffy2??
With Buffy2's binder explaining things and this Spike having a soul, not long.  :D

09/18/2009 09:46 pm
now that's as she was.  wonder how long it will take her to figure it out. very good read, thank you.
She still has experience only of the unsouled Spike and hasn't made the adjustment to a souled Spike and is scared of what he makes her feel.  I'm so glad you're liking it!

Buffyconvert
09/15/2009 03:06 pm
It was refreshing to see Buffy realize that Willy the bartender was trying to cause trouble by telling her about Spike going home w/ a Brachen gal. But she gets back to her old self when she gets mad at him for helping her w/ the poisonous demon.
Buffy knows Willy.  She got mad at Spike not for helping, but because he was trying to protect her and that made her have feelings towards him, scared her.  Scared Buffy always hits out.

09/11/2009 04:04 pm
Stupid immature Buffy!! Well some things never change...LOL
This Spike is completely new to her.  The one she knows is the lethal, antagonistic Spike of Season 4.  She's shook and that always makes her hit out.

09/10/2009 09:50 pm
She really has no idea how to deal with Spike does she?  Comes across as ungrateful but that isn't it...she is confused.  She's dealing with a complete unknown and it unnerves her. 

Buffy didn’t need anyone to take her into the light. She was light.  So correct!  That whole "need someone normal" was rot and Angel giving up the chance to be her normal guy in IWRY proves that even HE knew it!

Once, for all too short a time, she had seen him as a man, not a monster. But after they had started that disastrous liaison of theirs, she had seen him only as a monster. He had wanted her to see him as a man again OH this is THE perfect explanation for how the demon interpreted Spikes, "Make me what I was"!  Nothing in canon made sense of it.  He didn't want to be human.  He NEVER was a souled vampire before. Joss swears that the intent was always for a soul so it didn't mean remove the chip (and really if that's what Spike wanted all he needed was a doctor!) so it made little sense until this  insight here.  YES!  To have her see him as a man like before they started the sex and the only way was to come back with a soul.  Excellent!!!!!

Poor Spike, he really doesn't think he deserves Buffy's love and so he isn't even going to try to make this one care.  His Buffy made the decision to win the other Spike's love but Spike knows well that Buffy's aren't interchangeable....still he'll protect her to death if needed.

Really loving this story (or pair of stories actually).
Kathleen

Wonderful chapter.
Kathleen
Don't know about Angel knowing that in IWRY.  After all, later he keeps trying to Shanshu.  Personally, I think it was just ego at this point - he couldn't bear to be weaker than she was.  But then I'm not a fan of Angel's. :D
I truly think that was what Spike meant - to be a man, not a monster.  It was so ambiguous in canon.
And for all his arrogance, Spike always has this amazing humility.  He doesn't think he's worthy.  But we know better. :)  I'm so glad you're liking this!

09/10/2009 08:45 pm
The way he was looking at her felt somehow more dangerous to her than an attack would have been.

Could be, Buffy.

I like her uneasiness. I also think that Willie might end up being a problem. He's so venal and grasping here.

Good chapter.
When isn't Willy venal and grasping?  :D  I'm so glad you're liking this!

verito
09/10/2009 07:20 pm
 aww love this story, its hard findind good ones.... i read them all...lol 
I'm so glad you're liking it!  Thank you!

time of change
09/10/2009 04:39 pm
I'm so glad you revisited this universe you created with Pinch Hitter.  I like the way you show Buffy's ambivalence.
I couldn't leave this Spike dead and Buffy with Riley.  :D  I'm so glad you like it!  Thank you!

Niori
09/10/2009 06:34 am
Another great chapter.
Oh, poor Spike. You had me near tears when he was thinking how bitter sweet Buffy2's folder was. And then with the him beating up on himself for not going to her once he was solid again. It makes me so sad, knowing that he gets to find out that she finally loved him and no she is quite literally gone forever.
Way to make me cry. lol
My this is Buffy ever a study in contradictions; she's all hey be my partner and then when he does the whole helping out your partner thing, she flips. It sounds like something a child would do actually, kind of like my kid sister. I think I just commented on Buffy (at said point and times) immatureness.
And good point on the whole Angel/ Spike hero/vigilantee. That irked me, considering Angel had just sold himself out to evil incoperated. And yet Spike, going along helping teh helpless and that mission statement, he's a vigilantee, not hero.
And here I thought it was the good guys' job to rise above doulb standards. Apparently not.
Though it is interesting to note that, despite calling him a vigilantee, Wes and Gunn were more than willing to use Spike to their advantage. He was just the only one smart enough to see W&H as bad news.
And I go with what you say; what the HELL was that fight with the senior partners about? Can you say pointless? Way to be an idoit Angel.
Anyway, I think I kinda ranted there. Sorry.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
My rant too!  That vigilante business made me so mad.  I mean, where did they get off with that damn double standard of theirs that both the Fang Gang and the Scoobies keep dumping on Spike!  The 'white hats' were always such hypocrites.
Buffy flips because of the undercurrent.  It makes her nervous that Spike's trying to protect her and the way he makes her feel when he does - and when she's nervous, she always hits out.  :D
I'm so glad you're enjoying this!  Thank you!

Belle
09/10/2009 03:17 am
Whoa! lol What was that fight about? Just blew up at him! It's funny! Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
That's Buffy fighting her feelings as usual - she knows he saved her from being hurt, plus she was worried about him and didn't want to be.  :D  I'm so glad you're liking this.

spikestussi
09/10/2009 03:16 am
 Fab- looking forward to more. Interested to see how you reconsile what happened wit it not happening now that Buffy knows. Did that make sense?  Anyway. can't wait for the next instalment.
It's fun trying to figure out ways to reconcile it. :D  I'm so glad you're enjoying this!  Thank you!

sin_amatic
09/10/2009 02:06 am
Can someone one please "spank" Buffy's ungrateful ass. OMG I know she is just a figment, but she gets on my last nerve. 

Great chappy.  Nice tension between the intrepid duo.  Also, love you addressing the dual edge sword poor Spike was forced to lived upon.  Angel = hero Spike = Vigilante  Hell did Angel ever _thank_ Spike for pulling the soul sucker thingie off of him or for anything else?  And don't even get me started on the Scoobs and the Fang gang.  "White hats" my not so little butt. <G>

Ta!
That got me so PO'd too!  Where did they get off, 'Angel's a hero, but Spike's a vigilante'?  And Angel thank Spike?  Ha!  He kept dismissing him and dumping on him constantly throughout AtS5.  It got me so mad.  Spike does so much and never gets thanked by anybody.  Yeah, don't think much of those 'white hats' either.