Soul of the Rose
03/05/2010 11:45 pm
Just wonderful. Smart, funny lines contrast nicely with the tender feeling here. Loved these:
“Chocolate milkshakes will be had by all.” and “Slayer or not, some day I am so gonna kick your ass.”
Charmingly written. Perfect characterization. Very well done!
“Chocolate milkshakes will be had by all.” and “Slayer or not, some day I am so gonna kick your ass.”
Charmingly written. Perfect characterization. Very well done!
01/27/2010 03:22 am
I really felt the tears. Very well done!
01/04/2010 12:42 am
He was love’s bitch. Gah, she’d had no idea.
Hee! It's all getting clearer, isn't it? I love that she felt able to tick off something from her to-do list, but I have a feeling this little interlude added several more items "for later". Nice.
Hee! It's all getting clearer, isn't it? I love that she felt able to tick off something from her to-do list, but I have a feeling this little interlude added several more items "for later". Nice.
12/30/2009 04:24 pm
Nice Buffy moment
calminthechaos
12/29/2009 04:46 pm
Excellent. Very nice!
Time of Change
12/29/2009 03:29 pm
Very real. I love Buffy, and even though she was awful to Spike, I can't help but feel for her. I like so much that you write her with compassion.
12/29/2009 02:45 pm
Very, very nice. Good characterizations and very believable scenario.
12/29/2009 01:47 pm
Very believable 'missing scene'.