The Writing on the Wall by Holly
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-three

ya_lublyu_tebya
05/18/2010 08:44 pm
Can't wait to see what happens when they get topside!

to-the-angel-mobile
05/17/2010 03:57 pm
Just want to say how much I have enjoyed reading your great story, my only worry is that it might be ending soon.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

05/13/2010 03:26 am
I’ll even help you dump the body.  LOL - that's great Spike.

I like the idea of Spike's sacrifice being somewhat of a scary burden for Buffy. 

05/12/2010 05:07 am
Wonderful.
This story is so well written it has me completely captivated.
I am excited to see how things turn out once they get topside.

silver81
05/12/2010 04:56 am
So good!  Funny, the bit about Harris, and heartwarming.  Your writing is like a renissance painting, rich and filled with color, detail, emotion.  I am enjoing every chapter on its own,each one is a gem.

kim
05/12/2010 04:18 am
Yay!

Typical Buffy, worrying about the what ifs, but Spike's right.....especially with her not having to do it alone, she - they - will figure it out. She already has full sentences and the names right. Once she has the visuals and scents and sounds in front of her, the rust will fall away soon enough.

Typical Buffy to also compare what Spike did to her own capabilities. She's competitive, especially with action. Ah, but always ready to look for the flaw or short-coming in herself, in this case that she doesn't act in love like he does, or doesn't think she would/could. It probably made it easier to jump for Dawn that she expected death at the other end. And now she wonders if she could still do it if she'd known she'd go to her personal Hell.......she hasn't said it out loud, yet, but it's Buffy......it's part of it.

I hope the Scoobies show some gratitude to Spike for getting her out. Though I'll love seeing them shut down if they try to shove him out the door now.

05/12/2010 03:38 am
I'm so glad that you took up your wonderful Underworld work again - I had always wanted one of the fine Buffyverse writers to create a rescue journey for Spike and Buffy.  I love the one you have created for us.

You have created such brave and heroic and characters of such great determination and will to live and love.  Thank You - I have always enjoyed reading your work and I hope that you can find your love and passion for your characters and writing - it's such a gift to be able to create your own worlds and make them live on the page.

Hope you will bring us another chapter soon.

05/12/2010 01:40 am
 Fantastic! And now for the climb :) I can't wait for the next chapter!

nojiri23
05/11/2010 09:20 pm
another fantastic chapter!  looking forward to more!  Feel better! 

Eyghon
05/11/2010 07:15 pm
OMG, this is it! This is the return, at last, I hope. I'm looking forward to seeing how the Scooby will react to the time difference and the closeness between B and S. Great job!