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Consumed by benslilbug :-) 04/29/2010 04:06 pm :-) 04/29/2010 04:06 pm 08/16/2008 12:40 am Natalie is great. Love the way she got Spike in trouble and she hasn't even been born yet. 08/14/2008 04:03 am natalia does sound as one would imagine buffy sounding at five. fun read, thank you. 07/03/2008 09:37 pm Very cute - and time for some Angel whupping. 07/03/2008 08:59 pm This story is so fun. I liked this chapter a lot, especially the funny future family dynamic. Here's my additional nit: "the light breeze that past through the desert" should be passed. Please keep this one coming! 07/03/2008 05:57 pm I like your fic! really like the way the story is going! I hope u update soon! and Natlia seems to be the cutest kid! 07/03/2008 05:39 pm Cute kid! Spirits bickering was funny. One tiny nit, though... "submit to the slumber which had alluded her for quite a while. " I think you mean eluded - as in escaping. Sorry to be a pain... 07/03/2008 03:31 pm *melts at the cuteness that is Natalia* That was an adorable chapter. I can't wait to read more. Jace | |||
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