Nope, I'm all for concrit. And I really kind of agree with you. I've been debating removing the song myself for much the same reasons. As I said, it was my first Spuffy fic, and the song was what inspired me to write it, so I felt the need to include it. Plus, I'd seen other authors do it, so I thought that's how it was done. But now, whenever I read other stories that do the same thing, I generally just skip right over the lyrics, thus negating their purpose anyway. Thank you for reading and enjoying, and for your suggestion!