Like Mice in a Cornfield by denny

11/18/2008 06:15 am
Chapter VI         
enjoying spike's idea of hell. very good read, thank you.

11/11/2008 08:19 am
Chapter VI         
Whoa hon...just got caught up and this is really excellent.  I can see Spike in this sort of hell.  Too funny he he still a white hat even in that place, a cop protecting others.  Glad Buffy was gone to bring him home though. 

Too bad she doesn't really remember who she is and why she is there but Xander helped at least I hope he has. 

Excellent!
Kathleen

All4Spike
11/11/2008 03:10 am
Chapter VI         
So Xander had to pop in to give Buffy a nudge in the right direction. Hope it works...

11/18/2008 06:09 am
Chapter V         
can sense this is going to be another very good read. not so sure that willow is correct.

All4Spike
11/08/2008 09:46 pm
Chapter V         
Aha! Now I am less confused and even more hooked. So Buffy being vamped is Spike's version of Hell. Makes sense. Now then, does Buffy remember what she's supposed to be doing? More please...

11/08/2008 08:17 pm
Chapter V         
Whoa! I didn't see that coming! LOL  It certainly explains a lot.

<small>You have a couple of "than"s that should be "then"s in this  chapter. Just in case you want to know. </small>

Mm
08/19/2012 05:37 am
Chapter IV         
Very interesting so far

11/04/2008 08:58 pm
Chapter IV         
Still confused, still enjoying.  Can't wait for more!  (But I will be patient after I hit "submit" so you don' t get 3 from me this time...)

All4Spike
11/04/2008 06:11 pm
Chapter IV         
I'm confused. I expect that's what you intended. I'm also completely hooked, so more soon please!

12/26/2017 05:16 am
Chapter III         
Since the crash, this story appears to have lost 4 parts.

BT_
11/04/2008 03:45 am
Chapter III         
ok, I'm very confused, but I think I like it...
That's probalby what you're going for at this point, right?

BT_
11/04/2008 03:45 am
Chapter III         
ok, I'm very confused, but I think I like it...
That's probalby what you're going for at this point, right?

BT_
11/04/2008 03:45 am
Chapter III         
ok, I'm very confused, but I think I like it...
That's probalby what you're going for at this point, right?

Lisa
11/03/2008 04:09 am
Chapter II         
It's an interesting story so far (although I've not read the comics so I'm a bit unsure of the setting). Without sounding like a grammar nazi, a "juggler" is someone like Penn Jillette. "Jugular" is the vein that runs along the side of the neck. When I read "juggler" it took me out of the story for a second.

All4Spike
10/31/2008 03:15 pm
Chapter II         

Curiouser and curiouser...
By the way, the vein in the neck is not 'juggler', it's 'jugular'.
 

10/30/2008 06:59 pm
Chapter I         
pleased to see you start another tale. it has been awhile. very good start. thanks for the read.

Laura
10/30/2008 07:12 am
Chapter I         
I'm definitly interested in more.

All4Spike
10/30/2008 01:23 am
Chapter I         
Intriguing start...