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Like Mice in a Cornfield by denny enjoying spike's idea of hell. very good read, thank you. Whoa hon...just got caught up and this is really excellent. I can see Spike in this sort of hell. Too funny he he still a white hat even in that place, a cop protecting others. Glad Buffy was gone to bring him home though. Too bad she doesn't really remember who she is and why she is there but Xander helped at least I hope he has. Excellent! Kathleen All4Spike 11/11/2008 03:10 am Chapter VI So Xander had to pop in to give Buffy a nudge in the right direction. Hope it works... can sense this is going to be another very good read. not so sure that willow is correct. All4Spike 11/08/2008 09:46 pm Chapter V Aha! Now I am less confused and even more hooked. So Buffy being vamped is Spike's version of Hell. Makes sense. Now then, does Buffy remember what she's supposed to be doing? More please... Whoa! I didn't see that coming! LOL It certainly explains a lot. <small>You have a couple of "than"s that should be "then"s in this chapter. Just in case you want to know. </small> Mm 08/19/2012 05:37 am Chapter IV Very interesting so far 11/04/2008 08:58 pm Chapter IV Still confused, still enjoying. Can't wait for more! (But I will be patient after I hit "submit" so you don' t get 3 from me this time...) All4Spike 11/04/2008 06:11 pm Chapter IV I'm confused. I expect that's what you intended. I'm also completely hooked, so more soon please! Since the crash, this story appears to have lost 4 parts. BT_ 11/04/2008 03:45 am Chapter III ok, I'm very confused, but I think I like it... That's probalby what you're going for at this point, right? BT_ 11/04/2008 03:45 am Chapter III ok, I'm very confused, but I think I like it... That's probalby what you're going for at this point, right? BT_ 11/04/2008 03:45 am Chapter III ok, I'm very confused, but I think I like it... That's probalby what you're going for at this point, right? Lisa 11/03/2008 04:09 am Chapter II It's an interesting story so far (although I've not read the comics so I'm a bit unsure of the setting). Without sounding like a grammar nazi, a "juggler" is someone like Penn Jillette. "Jugular" is the vein that runs along the side of the neck. When I read "juggler" it took me out of the story for a second. All4Spike 10/31/2008 03:15 pm Chapter II Curiouser and curiouser... pleased to see you start another tale. it has been awhile. very good start. thanks for the read. Laura 10/30/2008 07:12 am Chapter I I'm definitly interested in more. All4Spike 10/30/2008 01:23 am Chapter I Intriguing start... | |||
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