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The Long Walk by Holly That was really beautiful. Thank you so much, Blue
Such a powerful story - wonderful in its simplicity of words, but strength of emotional focus of the character. Akela 07/20/2009 10:29 am The Long Walk So beautiful, so well written. I thank you for the glimpse into that moment. smokescreen 06/29/2009 09:53 am The Long Walk an insight into Spike's thoughts at the moment. I could never forget how overwhelmed, how touched, he looked. you wrote it beautifully. Beautiful I tell ya! lol, but I must say that the last sentence made me think of another vamp who should never have a perfect moment :P Well written drabble, thanks for sharing. You're description of the moment was perfection. thank you. So beautiful. Brilliant. Great job. It must have been a wonderful moment for Spike, and this shows how much it meant to him. Sigh... Simple and sweet. You drew out a very short moment, defined its meaning in a way that is elegant and feels natural. *applauds* Laura 06/24/2009 05:24 am The Long Walk Sweet Excellent! I'm certain Nikki will love this. I hope she has strength enough to be online to read it and keeping it short is perfect under the circumstances. You really have captured the importance of that moment...to him and to Buffy really. It was when she did let him in and the moment he knew he was forgiven. Just beautiful! Mum Kathleen Thanks, Mum. I actually don't expect Nikki to make this story a priority. I just thought if she was skimming her flist, she'd at least see I was thinking of her. She has way too much going on to worry with things like this, and I don't want her to feel like she owes any of us anything...which was why I opted to post it, rather than send it to her. That way it's an option. :) Thank you! | |||
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