Oh, and racism (species-ism?) just must reign its ugly head. Buffy, you are  right fool, you are.  Very hot scenes. Want more Spuffy.

Well, I was hoping it would end on a happier note then that.

Oh I can't wait to read the other part.

This was so well written and the ending intensly hot. Left me so sad though. Oh Spike! Learn a new way to live. Buffy, Buffy, learn to love again.....sigh..... bittersweet.

Kathleen

Oh that's daft. Wake up and smell the coffee Buffy... you can't let him get away now! LOL

All I have to say is that I am sooo glad there there is more of this to come;) Great job:D

very fine read, sad place to end the tale. thanks for the read.

sad, bittersweet ending....very sweet though...off to read the sequel now :)

YOW! Nice, smutty ending. I liked this story lots. I'm going to look for the next in the series now.

 

Wow! That was hot. My favorite part was "Lick me, Buffy, taste me, luv, please" He's so open & vulnerable.

Oh I am surprised he didn't claim her.

wow...that was hot...very awesome chapter...off to read the end :)

 

     Yes, why DID Angel not do it more than once. I mean, why didn't Angelus hang around after...

OH I wonder how it will end, some how I don't see him leaving

oh buffy, buffy, buffy...you have a lot to learn, girl....and fortunately quite the teacher! :)

 

Oh looks like she might be giving Spike what he wants

i loved the way you had her realize she couldn't do it at the last moment...but he's not gonna "get her out of his system" even if she goes for it...and poor guy, always chooses the wrong words... lol

 

Oh I wonder if she will go though with it.

no buffy no!!!!! she can't do it...i know she can't! on to read more... :)

 

Oooh, Nasty Slayer! You should have told your mother the WHOLE
truth!

Oh he stayed to watch over her, maybe listen to what the watcher said.

did he hear what they were talking about? if buffy goes after him again right away she's an idiot...lol...loving this story still...going on to more now :)

 

OH I wonder what Giles is going to say.

he's so in love with her already, poor guy...lol...she deserved that for trying to sneak up on him like that..great chapter :)

 

     I love your take on Cordelia.

Some how I don't think she can, but I noticed she never answered him on the protecting her mom.

Ah Cordelia, so young and yet so wise. She's one of my favorite characters. Well, she was until they put her on Angel and made a big Mary Sue out of her.

i think i see where you're going with this...excellent and very original idea...love this story so much! off to read more now :)

 

OH I can't wait to see what comes of it.

one of those really hard places to get out of - LOL - Buffy is such a moron.

so maybe he knows what he's doing after all, eh? ;) great chapter...love the way you write Spike...and leave it to nasty xander to think she should have killed him when he was helpless...grrr...on to the next chapter now :)

Will be greating reading this series again - 

 

Oh this looks interesting.

Hey Sandy - this story popped up on Random. Hope you're around to get a rave review or two. I like the story, I think you could have strung out the Buffy alone in the dark and scared out of her mind a little.

awww...even though he's still (apparently) planning to kill her...i want to cuddle him and make it all better..lol...on to the next chapter :)

Although Sandy wrote that this is basically a PWP, don't let that throw you off if you like plotty stories. There really is a plot and it is a surprising twist and actually rather sweet. I'm glad she wrote a sequel since the ending is rather sad!

Wonderful! I love how they dance with and around each other, and Spike?s ?Deal?. I can so see him doing that. Can?t wait to see what comes next.