One Love, One Life by Alexannah

03/06/2011 07:59 am
William the Bloody         

I like how you made the story work--Buffy was able to tie a lot of loose ends up because she was at the party to hear how it all happened: how he got the name Bloody, the railroad spike, the phrase beneath me, etc.

It will be interesting to see if it becomes a William-Buffy story or if you manage to keep the Doctor involved.  It will be quite a challenge!

L. Sparrow
12/17/2010 11:56 pm
William the Bloody         
Wow. Just wow! I've seen quite a lot of Buffy crossovers and this is the best I've ever read. I love your characterzation of both Buffy and the Tenth Doctor; its spot on. Thank you for an amazing story and I can't wait to read more.

12/15/2010 02:26 am
William the Bloody         
Hmm, now you got me wondering about your title when you cut it so close. Can't wait for the next chapter!

12/10/2010 06:44 am
William the Bloody         
Love it and can't wait for more. Really enjoying the crossover.

12/07/2010 05:24 am
William the Bloody         
I've never seen Doctor Who but this is time travel and that's my favorite so here I am.  Great so far!

12/07/2010 12:04 am
William the Bloody         
Oh dear, is she going to prevent him running into Angelus & co and then being turned by Dru? That could have dire consequences... Can't wait for the next instalment!

03/06/2011 07:48 am
Dalek in Cleveland         

hee--hee...I just knew she was going to say that it was bigger on the inside!!!!!!  I loved the voice of the Dalek.  I could actually hear it speaking!  I just haven't figured out which doctor it is so I can hear the voice and see the face correctly in my head.  Write in some more clues such as he is wearing tennis shoes or has sandy long hair that keep flopping into his face.  I know you gave the clue about the coat, but I've only gotten to see the Christmas special with the newest doctor and don't remember what he wore. 

Anyway, I love this and can't wait to see what happens with Buffy in the past!

01/14/2010 05:27 am
Dalek in Cleveland         
Very Interesting.  Looks to be a good crossover piece.  I just hope she ends up with Spike.

01/11/2010 07:46 pm
Dalek in Cleveland         
Can't wait to see where you're headed with this!

01/10/2010 09:53 pm
Dalek in Cleveland         
Eeeee! Oh so many excited squeels with this. My two favourite fandoms combined in what looks to be a very promising story! Very well written and brilliant premise, please keep it up!

Jill y
01/10/2010 05:57 am
Dalek in Cleveland         
I just love time travel stories, and I'm really excited about this one! Can't wait to see what you have planned. Great chapter, set up how Buffy is feeling really well, and I liked your Willow contributions a lot, fitting her personality but the mature, older Willow instead of the rambling, too-sweet, too-eager one that a lot of people end up writing.

01/09/2010 11:03 pm
Dalek in Cleveland         
I absolutely love Doctor Who, and think using him for Buffy's time-travel is an excellent twist! You showed the Doctor's singular personality very well, and Buffy's feelings are clear and strong. I love how you wrote the Doctor's understanding of Buffy's wish to help someone she lost and Buffy's pain and unhesitating answer to 'when' she would go and then slipped easily into Buffy's awe at TARDIS and the Doctor rolling his eyes.

A wonderful chapter. Great mood, flow, characterization, and pacing as we set the scene for our characters. I can't wait to see what your William will be like, and how he might react to an out-of-time and -place Buffy in Victorian London.