Unkept by chalkyhands

Jags
11/05/2013 02:25 am
Chapter Fifteen         
Really good

08/24/2013 09:20 pm
Chapter Fifteen         

Great Story and treatment of all characters and the vampire claim.

03/06/2011 11:20 pm
Chapter Fifteen         
So Buffy finally accepted the difference between Spike & Angel. And a sweet reclaiming made sincerely on both sides for all the right reasons. Very satisfying ending even though I would have loved some more of this story, thanks.

03/06/2011 08:45 pm
Chapter Fifteen         

A most excellent ending! Thanks, I enjoyed the whole thing.

08/24/2013 03:45 pm
Chapter Fourteen         

I really like this treatment of both of them finally making the choice to "let go" of their prior loves and life experiences to heal and move forward.  I sure wish that the series and the current comic book seasons had allowed Buffy to finally let go of her, IMO, very negative lingering desire and need for Angel. 

03/05/2011 07:19 pm
Chapter Fourteen         
Definitely agree that this needs to be longer to get settled.  After this catastrophe,they need to sort things out. 

no_promises
02/21/2011 06:40 pm
Chapter Fourteen         
oh happy day  
It reminded me of  when Buffy rescued Spike from the First and he didn't believe it was really her.  I've always loved that scene, and it is just as good from the other side.

02/21/2011 06:36 pm
Chapter Fourteen         

I've been itching for the next chapter for a while. Love the way it has turned out!

02/20/2011 10:03 pm
Chapter Fourteen         
Aaw, tme for the happy Spuffiness to begin....

no_promises
02/13/2011 03:37 am
Chapter Thirteen         
Drusilla's back  .  .  .  that can't be good.
still enjoying  -  great story

02/12/2011 11:13 pm
Chapter Thirteen         
Ooops. Drusilla turning up is never good. You know what makes me nervous about this spell? Dawn saying 'No need to be worried.' Yeah right...

02/08/2011 03:03 am
Chapter Twelve         
and there she goes again,  running away.
things are getting exciting.  I'm all aquiver.

02/08/2011 01:17 am
Chapter Twelve         
Oh, Buffy. So impulsive when you shouldn't be and so controlled when you should be impulsive. You should have persisted in trying to talk to Spike! Now look where avoidance has gotyou...

02/08/2011 12:49 am
Chapter Eleven         
Sheesh, talk about a downer of a chapter. lol. Where's the Spike healing proccess, the dealing with his trauma,..this just seems rather anti-climactic after everything. She brings him home and then nada. They're just going to ignore each other and be all weird now? Very frustrating.

01/31/2011 05:54 am
Chapter Eleven         
Her heart burned. . . . mine too     I can feel her pain.
Buffy never has been very good with words, and you have captured the essence of Buffy perfectly.  I hope she can find a way to get through to Spike (he seems to be so broken).  I want more sexy Spuffy, bitey, moments.

01/30/2011 11:31 pm
Chapter Eleven         
oof.  this chapter was like a punch in the gut.  Exceelent way to bring us down ofter the last one.  (I"m serious!)  Can't wait to see what's next.

01/30/2011 10:10 pm
Chapter Eleven         

oh dear lord, as Giles would say, how well written and how full of angst for our heroes, looking forward to how the talk will go.

Tamara Burks
01/30/2011 09:48 pm
Chapter Eleven         

Maybe he's just depressed. He's been through a lot after all.

Love the snark about the sloppy Slayers. Buffy really isn't a good long term leader. The Scoobies were the most she could handle and she wasn't trying to teach them . Look how quickly she gave up on teaching Dawn to fight.

01/30/2011 11:39 am
Chapter Eleven         
Yes, sounds as if Buffy can't put off The Talk any longer. Sounds as if it's overdue!

03/05/2011 06:49 pm
Chapter Ten         
Very riveting chapter!  Like you said, Buffy knows all and all should be OK. Right?

01/10/2011 04:01 am
Chapter Ten         
Yay ! ! !   Angel finally got dusted.  I only wish he could have been put through a tiny bit of the pain he caused Spike. 
I hope that insecurities don't destroy what should be a beautiful experience for Buffy and Spike.
Looking forward to part three.

01/09/2011 12:37 pm
Chapter Ten         
Yay!
Well done Buffy for taking the plunge and doing the right thing.
So glad it was Buffy who dusted Angel. It was her right after how much he'd put her through.
Can't wait for the next part....

08/24/2013 06:28 am
Chapter Nine         

wonderful chapter -

02/06/2011 06:18 pm
Chapter Nine         
Wow!  Very impressive Lewis Carroll like logic.

01/02/2011 05:30 am
Chapter Nine         
omg, omg, omg,  getting excited ! ! !  hopefully she is getting through to him.
I loved the imagery in this chapter,  kept me on my toes piecing it all together.
thank you for this,  and Happy New Year

Tamara
01/02/2011 04:52 am
Chapter Nine         
Is that last line a good thing or a bad thing?

I wonder what Buffy will think when she finds out the real way Spike's mom died? The way she found her sounds lke what Angel would have done if he had found her.

01/02/2011 02:11 am
Chapter Nine         
You spoil us with two new chapters! I'm worried about what Angelarse is up to while he cuts Dawn and the others off from Buffy - but Spike at last seems to be considering fighting back. Hurry up, Buffy!

01/03/2011 07:11 am
Chapter Eight         

01/02/2011 06:03 am
Chapter Eight         
and again,  my respect for Dawn grows,  she is definitely worthy of the name Summers.
You are very talented at portraying how similar Angel is to Angelus even though Buffy has always maintained they are like two different people,  he is behaving exactly as his unsouled self would. 
I hope there will be protection for Buffy since she is very vulnerable while in the trance.

08/23/2013 10:28 pm
Chapter Seven         

Great story - but you have some serious scary torture imagery.  Kind of wish that you had given us a little more back ground on why Angel has taken such a brutal and totally insane dick head turn on Spike and Buffy.  I hope she finally takes the much deserved stake to Angel.

no_promises
12/27/2010 10:11 pm
Chapter Seven         
This chapter was worth the wait.  I'm glad Dawn and Vi are on guard detail.  My hatred for Angel knows no bounds.   I hope that what Buffy has planned works because Spike definitely needs her.

12/26/2010 11:23 am
Chapter Seven         
Your torture is... torturous. Can't wait for Buffy to get Spike out. Just hope he isn't too mentally damaged by that point to be able to recover. Then they can give Angelarse what he deserves.....

12/26/2010 04:57 am
Chapter Seven         
You have a knack for writing torture and the anguish that goes with it.  Another great chapter!

Timeofchange
01/07/2011 04:24 pm
Chapter Six         
You have me on the edge of my seat.  I look forward to the next part.

12/21/2010 03:50 am
Chapter Six         
Wow!  Very conflicting emotions between Buffy and Spike interplayed to hit home.  What a standstill!  And I hate Angel!

Tamara
12/06/2010 04:32 am
Chapter Six         
Angel knew exactly what he was doing alright. This makes it where he can't be killed by Buffy or anyone else seeking vengeance on Spike's behalf.

She should have dusted him the minute she knew he sold Spike.

BT_
12/05/2010 11:50 pm
Chapter Six         
OK, so the warning at the beginning, the one about "torture?"  I didn't realize you meant that you'd be torturing US!  An ending like that is going to drive your readers insane until after Christmas! 
Well done! 

12/05/2010 10:39 pm
Chapter Six         
Oh, that is so sad - I wish Buffy & Spike would actually TALK to each other!
How are they going to make sure Angel gets what he deserves and help Spike? I can't wait.........

no_promises
12/05/2010 10:15 pm
Chapter Six         
omg I wish Buffy had staked Angel when she had the chance.  All I hope for know is that she can find a way to help him before he manages to dust himself.  Then she can dust Angel.
This chapter actually brought tears to my eyes.  I will be waiting eagerly for the next part of the story.

12/21/2010 03:18 am
Chapter Five         
Oooh, last statement ...curioser and curioser! And hopeful too.

nikki
12/01/2010 02:22 am
Chapter Five         
that is pure evil leaving a cliff hanger like that.  

11/28/2010 07:21 pm
Chapter Five         
all Spike's insecurities are out in full force.  -  so sad that he thinks Buffy wouldn't want him because of his injuries.  
I am eager to see what happens when they let Spike's demon out.  I truly believe that Spike's demon loves Buffy too

11/28/2010 03:35 pm
Chapter Five         
Poor Spike. It really sucks to be him right now. And poor Buffy who simply doesn't understand. And Willow is afraid Buffy might help him? About time she learned to trust Buffy's instincts....

Tamara
11/28/2010 05:24 am
Chapter Five         
OOO, What did Willow find out!

12/20/2010 03:04 am
Chapter Four         
Excellent writing!  Reading torture descriptions is always hard and I bet writing it is much harder.  Very gripping. 

Kitty
11/24/2010 01:34 am
Chapter Four         
I just read this today and I LOVE it so far
eugh - Angel. What a bastard
Can't wait for more
xx

11/21/2010 11:50 pm
Chapter Four         
oh wow - intense   This story has me right on the edge of my seat.  It makes my heart pound.  Thank you for the excitement.
I was kind of hoping Buffy would do more damage to Angel.  Maybe if I'm lucky she still will.  Now I just wonder what happens with the loss of the blood bond, and is that what is causing Spike's lack of response. 

Time of Change
11/21/2010 03:41 pm
Chapter Four         
Holy crap.  Well written, but I can't stop shaking.  Really horrifying stuff.  Is it too much to hope that Angel will pay?

Tamara
11/20/2010 07:53 pm
Chapter Four         
I think not dusting Angel will bite Buffy in the butt one way or another.

It's Angel who taught Dru to torture. Lyle shoudl gone after him as well or asked why he was selling out Spike and not Dru.

11/20/2010 07:29 pm
Chapter Four         
Oh, poor Spike! He'll hate the fact that Buffy saw him like that. I hope Angel gets his comeuppance.....

12/20/2010 02:42 am
Chapter Three         
Makes me wonder if Angel was actually involved or not.  Lots of references to Wolfram and Hart from the participants so ...hmm??  Sincerely hoping Spike weathers through whatever turmoil.  Dawn sure cut it close though.  

scarlett2u
11/20/2010 06:02 pm
Chapter Three         
I am loving your story! And I can't wait for the next installment. I especially liked the Spuffy reunion.

no_promises
11/14/2010 04:55 pm
Chapter Three         
I never was a big fan of Dawn,  but wow, am I ever on the bandwagon after seeing her tenacity.   She is my new hero.  I can't wait to see Buffy now,  all passionate, vengeful, and determined to rescue her vampire.

11/14/2010 02:26 pm
Chapter Three         
Clever Dawnie! I guess it would be too much for Buffy to believe in Angel's perfidy right off, but hopefully she'll wake up soon. Now to plan a rescue, Buffy - just DON'T go and ask Angel for help!

11/14/2010 12:18 pm
Chapter Three         
Please update as soon as you can.

Tamara
11/14/2010 09:16 am
Chapter Three         
Buffy's had really is firmly stuck up Angel's caboose, isn't it?  Luckily Dawn's isn't .This is the Dawn we didn't get in the comics. A smart , strong and clever girl with good instincts.

I wonder how Spike will feel when he finds out how much time Buffy has been spending with Angel.

11/26/2010 11:07 pm
Chapter Two         
there's no body when a vampire dusts, you know - Buffy should have clocked him for that one   

no_promises
11/14/2010 04:36 pm
Chapter Two         
this just keeps getting better.  It's funny how easy it is for Angel to completely manipulate Buffy.  I wonder how much Angel had to do with Spike's capture, because he is obviously lying.

no_promises
11/14/2010 04:34 pm
Chapter Two         
this just keeps getting better.  It's funny how easy it is for Angel to completely manipulate Buffy.  I wonder how much Angel had to do with Spike's capture, because he is obviously lying.

11/14/2010 04:21 am
Chapter Two         
Very much enjoying this!  Looks like Dawn can cut through the crap better than Buffy.

Curtis
11/07/2010 10:18 pm
Chapter Two         
I really like where this is going. Keep up the good work.

11/07/2010 10:15 pm
Chapter Two         
oh excellent follow up - blood stains from the removal of fangs I assume. Fabulous job of evil Angel up to no good,  let's set Dawn on him!
Great writing - roll on the next chapter.

ladycat713
11/07/2010 05:07 pm
Chapter Two         
Buffy really is clueless where Angel is concerned (though nothing could be as bad as she is in the comics) .I'm wondering if it's Dawn that will end up coming to the rescue.

Sunshine
11/07/2010 04:59 pm
Chapter Two         
Oh.. please update this soon!

I like where this is going - can we hope for lots of horrors for Spike, being sold to his enemies in that brothel, then Buffy in her best "saving her loved-one"-rage, spectacular revenge and lots of Spuffy loving? It is just what I love, so please, keep it up.

I am just so thrilled to see if Angel is indeed the bad guy, or if he too has been tricked. I hope he is not quilty, just stupid. I am not too fond of Angel-hating fics. But I`ll love this story anyhow. Just please keep writing

11/07/2010 12:27 pm
Chapter Two         
Angel wouldn't lie to her? Yeah - right. Wake up and smell the jealous sneakiness, Buffy!

11/26/2010 10:59 pm
Chapter One         
non verbal screaming - heh heh so very Buffy

Angel is even more deeply evil than I ever imagined.

no_promises
11/14/2010 04:18 pm
Chapter One         
"But it was good?"      
"So good."   
  -     great start to the story.  It's not often I enjoy stories without at least a little smut  (I know I'm a perv), but I am really enjoying this and completely hooked.


no_promises
11/14/2010 04:17 pm
Chapter One         
"But it was good?"      
"So good."   
  -     great start to the story.  It's not often I enjoy stories without at least a little smut  (I know I'm a perv), but I am really enjoying this and completely hooked.


11/01/2010 09:25 pm
Chapter One         
great start - terrific final paragraph, just the hook to get me back for the next chapter!

ladycat713
11/01/2010 04:17 pm
Chapter One         
I'll bet I know whose blood that it.Angel doesn't like it when someone tries to take his "property" away.

11/01/2010 10:38 am
Chapter One         
OK, you've got me well and truly hooked. I'm already suspicious of Angel....

SeaPea
11/01/2010 04:58 am
Chapter One         
Great start.  I hope you can update soon.  I wonder what Angel's game is here.