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Unkept by chalkyhands Jags 11/05/2013 02:25 am Chapter Fifteen Really good Great Story and treatment of all characters and the vampire claim. So Buffy finally accepted the difference between Spike & Angel. And a sweet reclaiming made sincerely on both sides for all the right reasons. Very satisfying ending even though I would have loved some more of this story, thanks. A most excellent ending! Thanks, I enjoyed the whole thing. I really like this treatment of both of them finally making the choice to "let go" of their prior loves and life experiences to heal and move forward. I sure wish that the series and the current comic book seasons had allowed Buffy to finally let go of her, IMO, very negative lingering desire and need for Angel. Definitely agree that this needs to be longer to get settled. After this catastrophe,they need to sort things out. no_promises 02/21/2011 06:40 pm Chapter Fourteen oh happy day It reminded me of when Buffy rescued Spike from the First and he didn't believe it was really her. I've always loved that scene, and it is just as good from the other side. I've been itching for the next chapter for a while. Love the way it has turned out! Aaw, tme for the happy Spuffiness to begin.... no_promises 02/13/2011 03:37 am Chapter Thirteen Drusilla's back . . . that can't be good. still enjoying - great story Ooops. Drusilla turning up is never good. You know what makes me nervous about this spell? Dawn saying 'No need to be worried.' Yeah right... and there she goes again, running away. things are getting exciting. I'm all aquiver. Oh, Buffy. So impulsive when you shouldn't be and so controlled when you should be impulsive. You should have persisted in trying to talk to Spike! Now look where avoidance has gotyou... Sheesh, talk about a downer of a chapter. lol. Where's the Spike healing proccess, the dealing with his trauma,..this just seems rather anti-climactic after everything. She brings him home and then nada. They're just going to ignore each other and be all weird now? Very frustrating. Her heart burned. . . . mine too I can feel her pain. Buffy never has been very good with words, and you have captured the essence of Buffy perfectly. I hope she can find a way to get through to Spike (he seems to be so broken). I want more sexy Spuffy, bitey, moments. oof. this chapter was like a punch in the gut. Exceelent way to bring us down ofter the last one. (I"m serious!) Can't wait to see what's next. oh dear lord, as Giles would say, how well written and how full of angst for our heroes, looking forward to how the talk will go. Tamara Burks 01/30/2011 09:48 pm Chapter Eleven
Maybe he's just depressed. He's been through a lot after all. Yes, sounds as if Buffy can't put off The Talk any longer. Sounds as if it's overdue! Very riveting chapter! Like you said, Buffy knows all and all should be OK. Right? Yay ! ! ! Angel finally got dusted. I only wish he could have been put through a tiny bit of the pain he caused Spike. I hope that insecurities don't destroy what should be a beautiful experience for Buffy and Spike. Looking forward to part three. Yay! Well done Buffy for taking the plunge and doing the right thing. So glad it was Buffy who dusted Angel. It was her right after how much he'd put her through. Can't wait for the next part.... wonderful chapter - Wow! Very impressive Lewis Carroll like logic. omg, omg, omg, getting excited ! ! ! hopefully she is getting through to him. I loved the imagery in this chapter, kept me on my toes piecing it all together. thank you for this, and Happy New Year Tamara 01/02/2011 04:52 am Chapter Nine Is that last line a good thing or a bad thing? I wonder what Buffy will think when she finds out the real way Spike's mom died? The way she found her sounds lke what Angel would have done if he had found her. You spoil us with two new chapters! I'm worried about what Angelarse is up to while he cuts Dawn and the others off from Buffy - but Spike at last seems to be considering fighting back. Hurry up, Buffy! 01/03/2011 07:11 am Chapter Eight and again, my respect for Dawn grows, she is definitely worthy of the name Summers. You are very talented at portraying how similar Angel is to Angelus even though Buffy has always maintained they are like two different people, he is behaving exactly as his unsouled self would. I hope there will be protection for Buffy since she is very vulnerable while in the trance. Great story - but you have some serious scary torture imagery. Kind of wish that you had given us a little more back ground on why Angel has taken such a brutal and totally insane dick head turn on Spike and Buffy. I hope she finally takes the much deserved stake to Angel. no_promises 12/27/2010 10:11 pm Chapter Seven This chapter was worth the wait. I'm glad Dawn and Vi are on guard detail. My hatred for Angel knows no bounds. I hope that what Buffy has planned works because Spike definitely needs her. Your torture is... torturous. Can't wait for Buffy to get Spike out. Just hope he isn't too mentally damaged by that point to be able to recover. Then they can give Angelarse what he deserves..... You have a knack for writing torture and the anguish that goes with it. Another great chapter! Timeofchange 01/07/2011 04:24 pm Chapter Six You have me on the edge of my seat. I look forward to the next part. Wow! Very conflicting emotions between Buffy and Spike interplayed to hit home. What a standstill! And I hate Angel! Tamara 12/06/2010 04:32 am Chapter Six Angel knew exactly what he was doing alright. This makes it where he can't be killed by Buffy or anyone else seeking vengeance on Spike's behalf. She should have dusted him the minute she knew he sold Spike. BT_ 12/05/2010 11:50 pm Chapter Six OK, so the warning at the beginning, the one about "torture?" I didn't realize you meant that you'd be torturing US! An ending like that is going to drive your readers insane until after Christmas! Well done! :) Oh, that is so sad - I wish Buffy & Spike would actually TALK to each other! How are they going to make sure Angel gets what he deserves and help Spike? I can't wait......... no_promises 12/05/2010 10:15 pm Chapter Six omg I wish Buffy had staked Angel when she had the chance. All I hope for know is that she can find a way to help him before he manages to dust himself. Then she can dust Angel. This chapter actually brought tears to my eyes. I will be waiting eagerly for the next part of the story. Oooh, last statement ...curioser and curioser! And hopeful too. nikki 12/01/2010 02:22 am Chapter Five that is pure evil leaving a cliff hanger like that. all Spike's insecurities are out in full force. - so sad that he thinks Buffy wouldn't want him because of his injuries. I am eager to see what happens when they let Spike's demon out. I truly believe that Spike's demon loves Buffy too Poor Spike. It really sucks to be him right now. And poor Buffy who simply doesn't understand. And Willow is afraid Buffy might help him? About time she learned to trust Buffy's instincts.... Tamara 11/28/2010 05:24 am Chapter Five OOO, What did Willow find out! Excellent writing! Reading torture descriptions is always hard and I bet writing it is much harder. Very gripping. Kitty 11/24/2010 01:34 am Chapter Four I just read this today and I LOVE it so far eugh - Angel. What a bastard Can't wait for more :) xx oh wow - intense This story has me right on the edge of my seat. It makes my heart pound. Thank you for the excitement. I was kind of hoping Buffy would do more damage to Angel. Maybe if I'm lucky she still will. Now I just wonder what happens with the loss of the blood bond, and is that what is causing Spike's lack of response. Time of Change 11/21/2010 03:41 pm Chapter Four Holy crap. Well written, but I can't stop shaking. Really horrifying stuff. Is it too much to hope that Angel will pay? Tamara 11/20/2010 07:53 pm Chapter Four I think not dusting Angel will bite Buffy in the butt one way or another. It's Angel who taught Dru to torture. Lyle shoudl gone after him as well or asked why he was selling out Spike and not Dru. Oh, poor Spike! He'll hate the fact that Buffy saw him like that. I hope Angel gets his comeuppance..... Makes me wonder if Angel was actually involved or not. Lots of references to Wolfram and Hart from the participants so ...hmm?? Sincerely hoping Spike weathers through whatever turmoil. Dawn sure cut it close though. scarlett2u 11/20/2010 06:02 pm Chapter Three I am loving your story! And I can't wait for the next installment. I especially liked the Spuffy reunion. no_promises 11/14/2010 04:55 pm Chapter Three I never was a big fan of Dawn, but wow, am I ever on the bandwagon after seeing her tenacity. She is my new hero. I can't wait to see Buffy now, all passionate, vengeful, and determined to rescue her vampire. Clever Dawnie! I guess it would be too much for Buffy to believe in Angel's perfidy right off, but hopefully she'll wake up soon. Now to plan a rescue, Buffy - just DON'T go and ask Angel for help! 11/14/2010 12:18 pm Chapter Three Please update as soon as you can. Tamara 11/14/2010 09:16 am Chapter Three Buffy's had really is firmly stuck up Angel's caboose, isn't it? Luckily Dawn's isn't .This is the Dawn we didn't get in the comics. A smart , strong and clever girl with good instincts. I wonder how Spike will feel when he finds out how much time Buffy has been spending with Angel. there's no body when a vampire dusts, you know - Buffy should have clocked him for that one :) no_promises 11/14/2010 04:36 pm Chapter Two this just keeps getting better. It's funny how easy it is for Angel to completely manipulate Buffy. I wonder how much Angel had to do with Spike's capture, because he is obviously lying. no_promises 11/14/2010 04:34 pm Chapter Two this just keeps getting better. It's funny how easy it is for Angel to completely manipulate Buffy. I wonder how much Angel had to do with Spike's capture, because he is obviously lying. Very much enjoying this! Looks like Dawn can cut through the crap better than Buffy. Curtis 11/07/2010 10:18 pm Chapter Two I really like where this is going. Keep up the good work. oh excellent follow up - blood stains from the removal of fangs I assume. Fabulous job of evil Angel up to no good, let's set Dawn on him! Great writing - roll on the next chapter. ladycat713 11/07/2010 05:07 pm Chapter Two Buffy really is clueless where Angel is concerned (though nothing could be as bad as she is in the comics) .I'm wondering if it's Dawn that will end up coming to the rescue. Sunshine 11/07/2010 04:59 pm Chapter Two Oh.. please update this soon! I like where this is going - can we hope for lots of horrors for Spike, being sold to his enemies in that brothel, then Buffy in her best "saving her loved-one"-rage, spectacular revenge and lots of Spuffy loving? It is just what I love, so please, keep it up. I am just so thrilled to see if Angel is indeed the bad guy, or if he too has been tricked. I hope he is not quilty, just stupid. I am not too fond of Angel-hating fics. But I`ll love this story anyhow. Just please keep writing:) Angel wouldn't lie to her? Yeah - right. Wake up and smell the jealous sneakiness, Buffy! non verbal screaming - heh heh so very Buffy Angel is even more deeply evil than I ever imagined. no_promises 11/14/2010 04:18 pm Chapter One "But it was good?" "So good." - great start to the story. It's not often I enjoy stories without at least a little smut (I know I'm a perv), but I am really enjoying this and completely hooked. no_promises 11/14/2010 04:17 pm Chapter One "But it was good?" "So good." - great start to the story. It's not often I enjoy stories without at least a little smut (I know I'm a perv), but I am really enjoying this and completely hooked. great start - terrific final paragraph, just the hook to get me back for the next chapter! ladycat713 11/01/2010 04:17 pm Chapter One I'll bet I know whose blood that it.Angel doesn't like it when someone tries to take his "property" away. OK, you've got me well and truly hooked. I'm already suspicious of Angel.... SeaPea 11/01/2010 04:58 am Chapter One Great start. I hope you can update soon. I wonder what Angel's game is here. | |||
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