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Hands by Joanthevampireslayer A very well done emotional ride. Congrats on your first fic! Dreylin 11/17/2010 02:45 am One This was a fairly good start. It feels like the beginning of a longer story though. I'm not sure I see Spike giggling. Chuckling, snickering, whooping with joy, but not so much with the giggling. I liked him actually calling Buffy on how she's been treating him though. He usually just sucks it up, and she just keeps on hurting him. Excellent emotionally intense beginning - I look forward to finding the rest of the story as riveting. powerful piece of writing - your use of language and emotions were very strong. Interested to see where you will take this. Well done. Purr. 11/15/2010 06:02 pm One WOW, this fic totally blew me away! PLEASE - continue writing I really enjoyed this :) | |||
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