Hands by Joanthevampireslayer

12/11/2010 04:56 am
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A very well done emotional ride.  Congrats on your first fic!

Dreylin
11/17/2010 02:45 am
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This was a fairly good start.  It feels like the beginning of a longer story though.  I'm not sure I see Spike giggling.  Chuckling, snickering, whooping with joy, but not so much with the giggling.  I liked him actually calling Buffy on how she's been treating him though.  He usually just sucks it up, and she just keeps on hurting him.

11/16/2010 12:32 am
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Excellent emotionally intense beginning - I look forward to finding the rest of the story as riveting.

11/15/2010 10:56 pm
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powerful piece of writing - your use of language and emotions were very strong. Interested to see where you will take this. Well done.

Purr.
11/15/2010 06:02 pm
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WOW, this fic totally blew me away! PLEASE - continue writing I really enjoyed this :)