Hurdle in a Steeplechase by coalitiongirl

06/29/2012 04:34 am
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very sad in a good way - and love the gross out bugs.  :)

06/26/2012 11:59 pm
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There are such deep emotions pouring through your writing that I found this quite a difficult read - in that I wanted to weep for the conflict between Spike and Buffy. Really great writing and I so want to read more.

05/26/2012 12:25 am
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I can see Spike trying to dust himself in the first few days. He has always prided himself on the fact that he is a good fighter. To lose that ability especially loosing his dominate hand! What a blow. Now this weird stalemate with Buffy, where she wants him around to help her decide what to do with the baby. But not wanting her pity. It's too much for him.

05/24/2012 03:29 am
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Nice start CG -  this is real Buffy and she's preggers?