Unexpected Arrival by Mefiant

Jenny
08/24/2007 10:00 am
Chapter 32         
More Please of this story at first I was not sure. I had to have surgery today and it has helped keep my mind of the pain.

08/06/2007 05:41 pm
Chapter 32         
this is getting more and more dramatic and intense...loving it...hope they can rescue travers' latest victims before it's too late...great chapter, love

08/06/2007 08:12 am
Chapter 32         
It was wonderful seeing this update and it certainly didn't disappoint. I really like that the potential slayers who Travers had killed get to participate in the fight against him. Thanks so much for the update.

08/05/2007 03:04 am
Chapter 32         
Wonderful chapter, and thank you so much for the update. I can't believe I started this nearly a year ago. A wonderful story, still waiting for Travers to get his, though. Hoping this can be updated again soon.

nmcil
08/03/2007 11:02 am
Chapter 32         
NICE chapter and wonderful advance of story - looking forward to next chapter -

08/03/2007 05:54 am
Chapter 32         
excellent read, love. well worth the wait, thank you.

sirc
03/06/2007 11:06 am
Chapter 31         
Great chapter

02/24/2007 02:28 am
Chapter 31         
just enjoyed a reread of this fantastic tale, thank you.

02/21/2007 09:57 am
Chapter 31         
Wow, thank you for the update. This is an excellent story, glad you haven't abandoned it. I hope you can update again soon. Keeping my fingers crossed that none of them have anything wooden to shoot at him. Spike was right about the other watchers, she is the "Chosen One" after all and theirs to follow. Great chapter.

02/20/2007 09:49 pm
Chapter 31         
cliffie!!!! can't wait to see how they get out of this one...of course the whole thought-sharing thing is coming in handy isn't it? great update, looking forward to more

02/20/2007 01:01 pm
Chapter 31         
Great chapter!

kim
02/20/2007 11:04 am
Chapter 31         
Yay!

Uh-oh...time for a melee.

dicecanntcry
02/18/2007 04:54 am
Chapter 30         
good story - Hope you finish it!!

Stephanie
11/23/2006 04:21 am
Chapter 30         
Ok that was great. Very original and I loved it. The only problem I see is that we still need to see Buffy kill Quentin. And can I ask that you make it painful? Please? I'll beg if I have to. Can we have more please?

sirc
08/30/2006 03:39 pm
Chapter 30         
Well done

08/18/2006 09:47 am
Chapter 30         
He truly is evil. Can't wait to see who is and how they're going to find him and hopefully before he's killed. Gotta love Spike, he's always got her back. Now that I'm all caught up, guess I'll be begging for you to update soon. Very interesting and exciting story. Thanks.

vladt
08/13/2006 06:42 am
Chapter 30         
excellent update, evil place to stop. thank you for both.

golddrake
08/13/2006 02:20 am
Chapter 30         
great chapter

08/13/2006 01:28 am
Chapter 30         
ECk! biting my nails, wondering what kind of trap they have waiting, loved the update!!!

DizzyB
08/13/2006 12:06 am
Chapter 30         
This story totally rocks! I just found it today and was completely absorbed until I had finished reading the completed chapters. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks!

08/12/2006 10:29 pm
Chapter 30         
I can't wait for the next chapter. This is full of action and suspense. Please more as soon as you can.

08/12/2006 07:06 pm
Chapter 30         
another great chapter. i really love this fic.

margaret
08/12/2006 06:54 pm
Chapter 30         
wow, travers as a demon! i love it. great story. thanks

08/12/2006 03:27 pm
Chapter 30         
quentin travers is so evil!! scary how you've written him...great, fascinating chapter..more soon please

08/18/2006 09:30 am
Chapter 29         
Good fight, well not much of a one for the watchers. Excellent chapter once again, thanks for the read.

~*~Tasha~*~
07/16/2006 11:26 pm
Chapter 29         
This was an AWESOME update of this one. I hope that you feel inspired to continue this one Mefiant. I enjoy reading it, and I was glad that there was an update for me to catch up on. {Grins}

06/15/2006 05:53 am
Chapter 29         
another great chapter...please update really soon, i really like this story

nmcil
06/14/2006 10:16 am
Chapter 29         
very much enjoyed reading your story - just found it today as well, looking forward to reading your next chapters. Hope that you have a chance to update soon.

Wonderful set of new characters you have created -

06/14/2006 02:36 am
Chapter 29         
great update, as usual. thanks for the fine read.

06/12/2006 03:07 am
Chapter 29         
wow this is amazing. i just found the fic this morning and have spent half the day reading. i can't wait for more of this one. great work. loved everything including xander w/spell.

Cat
06/11/2006 06:10 am
Chapter 29         
Oh Yea!! Great chapter, getting damn good now

kim
06/11/2006 04:57 am
Chapter 29         
Been a while!

Good chapter...the scene was pretty clear. I'm sure things are about to get interesting.

08/18/2006 09:14 am
Chapter 28         
Nice idea of a picnic, give them all one more chance to enjoy themselves before battle and before enjoying each other throughout the night. Lovely chapter, wonderful read, thanks.

06/15/2006 05:52 am
Chapter 28         
wow...excellent setting, very sexy...loved this chapter...loved giles and anya's bit...very good

~*~Tasha~*~
03/25/2006 04:38 pm
Chapter 28         
Loved this chapter. Everyone being together and sharing intimate time the night before the battle. Look forward to more of this one.

vladt
03/16/2006 08:51 pm
Chapter 28         
unique ending for a chapter. more pleasant thought to hold until next update. rather than what disaster is about to unfold. thanks for the fine read.

03/15/2006 01:28 am
Chapter 28         
Glad to see this story is back. I did, however, have to re-read the whole thing today in order to get to the new chapter. Please, please update soon.

03/14/2006 05:10 pm
Chapter 28         
whew, hot! great update!

sirc
03/14/2006 04:36 pm
Chapter 28         
great chapter

03/14/2006 12:35 pm
Chapter 28         
loving this...more soon please

08/18/2006 08:54 am
Chapter 27         
Spike put the ring on her engagement finger! I guess he likes being a married man! Good thing Xander found the well, now he's ready to move on. So glad that there going to get Travers, he so needs to be taken down. Wonderful chapter, great read.

06/15/2006 05:50 am
Chapter 27         
this is getting more and more intense by the chapter ... very much enjoying this story ;0

~*~Tasha~*~
02/24/2006 04:23 pm
Chapter 27         
Excellent chapter. I can feel the tension of the build up towards the final battle. I loved getting an update of this story. {Smiles} I look forward to more.

02/05/2006 05:05 pm
Chapter 27         
Ah that's why it is so easy for Xander to read (learn): it is a side-effect of the family claim. ~ Awe, Spike choose a ring Joyce gave him for Buffy and it is placed like an engagement ring. ~ Oh my.. and now the battle is to begin soon. Till next time!

vladt
02/04/2006 07:54 am
Chapter 27         
very happy to read this fic again despite the fact that xander is appears to be finally growing up, instead of being endlessly tortured. excellent chapter, excellent fic. thanks

Max
02/04/2006 04:35 am
Chapter 27         
It took me forever to read all of this thing but it was definitely worth it : )

I especially like how you had everyone face all of Xander's baggage - I hated how he always got away with all of his juvenile crap since nobody would call him on it and eveyone seemed to immediately forget it.

I'm looking forward to reading about the coming battle - imagining Travers getting his arrogent head chopped off gives me a happy : )

02/04/2006 03:55 am
Chapter 27         
can't wait to read more updates!!

02/04/2006 03:30 am
Chapter 27         
What a tale! Just found this story today and I thank you for the entertainment. I look forward to the killing of Travers (if this story wasn't about such a bunch of white hats, I would enjoy his torture, too).

02/04/2006 12:59 am
Chapter 27         
Two things Bloody excellent chapter, and the second About bloody time

Damn good chappie Mef.

sirc
02/03/2006 08:43 pm
Chapter 27         
great chapter

Steph
02/03/2006 07:41 pm
Chapter 27         
The calm before the storm hey? good chapter!

Steph
02/03/2006 07:40 pm
Chapter 27         
The calm before the storm hey? good chapter!

02/03/2006 07:19 pm
Chapter 27         
Excellant story! I love this ficcy!

08/18/2006 08:40 am
Chapter 26         
This was a happy chappie all around. Samuel meet his parents, Xander's going to study with him. Buffy and the group will be getting their own protection for battle. wonder what Spike has in mind for Buffy? Fine read, great chapter.

06/15/2006 05:48 am
Chapter 26         
another excellent chapter...wonder what spike's thinking? great job

02/05/2006 04:49 pm
Chapter 26         
Oh I missed two chapters... *on to the read*
Xander is given a new chance, a big one. I hope, no I think it's a good choice for him. Plus he can help the others fight the Council. ~ Awe, Samuel saw his parents. ~ Excellent idea with the Gems. Wonder what Spike has in mind for Buffy.

vladt
02/04/2006 07:26 am
Chapter 26         
very happy to see this story again. had to reread all. not to refresh my strained memory, but to enjoy once again. thanks

sirc
01/14/2006 08:09 pm
Chapter 26         
great chapter

~*~Tasha~*~
01/12/2006 05:30 am
Chapter 26         
Very glad to see an update of this one. I loved following this one before, and it is great to see it moving along. I look forward to more of it for sure.
The muse seems to be finally over his hissy fit about having to move right before christmas. Now all I have to do is find a cool spot to write in.

me again
02/18/2007 04:47 am
Chapter 25         
ok, so...

spike & buffy must be together now?

08/18/2006 08:25 am
Chapter 25         
Buffy's got her own demons to deal with not just Xander. So good that she has Spike, he'll definately keep her mind on other things. Great read, love the story. Thanks.

06/15/2006 05:45 am
Chapter 25         
oooh..that was sexy...very good chapter...needing more now

11/12/2005 06:04 pm
Chapter 25         
Just found this story and read it all the way through. Incredible! I love it! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon! -Lisa

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 09:37 am
Chapter 25         
Whew ... {fanning herself} ... That was hot and playful. Very good conversation between Buffy and Spike about Xander. Buffy is letting her insecurities creep up, and I'm glad that Spike saw past some of that. That isn't to say that he didn't have a knee jerk reaction of being ticked right off, but that is normal. Nice update. Look forward to more.

10/09/2005 05:25 am
Chapter 25         
I think Spike explained how he felt about Buffy and Rebecca very well. And then it got very hot Loved the chapter. I wonder what will become of Xander now. Buffy and Spike and Stacy? They will make it - I'm almost sure.. I don't know what you have in mind for them.

vladt
10/07/2005 01:14 pm
Chapter 25         
love the story. thanks

txjmfan
10/06/2005 05:53 am
Chapter 25         
Love the new chapter. Very sexy.

Franchesca
10/06/2005 03:50 am
Chapter 25         
I can't wait to see where Xander is at the end of his journey. I know Buffy needed her moment on insecurity, but I'm glad is over (hopefully). I like that she and Spike are completely together now.

10/05/2005 11:49 pm
Chapter 25         
So glad to see this back and with a new chapter. I am just glad that Spike saw Buffy's questios for what they were, insecurities brought back by Xander. I am just glad that they are really able to talk and work through their problems. Love the update.

i dont understand!!!
02/18/2007 04:43 am
Chapter 24         
Im so confused!

Was the spike/buffy sex scene a dream? Because nothing else was said about it?

“Luv.” Spike drew Buffy’s attention away from the room before her, “’s not doing your mate any good, standing here watchin.’

When the crap were they mated?

I really do like your story but the last few chapters have been very confusing...

i dont understand!!!
02/18/2007 04:43 am
Chapter 24         
Im so confused!

Was the spike/buffy sex scene a dream? Because nothing else was said about it?

“Luv.” Spike drew Buffy’s attention away from the room before her, “’s not doing your mate any good, standing here watchin.’

When the crap were they mated?

I really do like your story but the last few chapters have been very confusing...

08/18/2006 08:04 am
Chapter 24         
What an awful experience. Nothing he can do but watch and die. Good to see Spike's getting better. Hope you get to Travers soon, so want him toast. Great read, Thanks.

06/15/2006 05:41 am
Chapter 24         
that last scene could make a story in itself...excellent glimpse into xander's troubled mind...i love this story

~*~Tasha~*~
10/11/2005 09:30 am
Chapter 24         
Some how I missed Ch. 24, or for some reason I don't remember it. I'm going to go with the former because I remember your stories. You are a good writer. I like this what if spell. I hope that it shows Xander that things had to happen the way they were or everything would have been so much worse off. Good chapter. Off to read 25.

08/18/2006 07:21 am
Chapter 23         
Dawn's too young to be stuck with a bunch of watchers. Solartians that's cool. Guess Dawn will give the picture to Spike for him and Stacy. Another great chapter.

06/15/2006 01:12 am
Chapter 23         
oh wow...she's still getting the hang of this key business, isnt she? lol

dicecanntcry
02/18/2007 04:38 am
Chapter 22         
OMG!

What an ass!

I couldn't believe Buffy would try to jump Spike right after his wife died!

But even worse - he was ok with it?

I'm so lost right now...

08/18/2006 06:40 am
Chapter 22         
What a heavenly scene. Perfect, like they are for each other. Beautifully done chapter. Thank you.

06/14/2006 02:54 pm
Chapter 22         
that was so intense...very sweet and moving as well as sexy and hot...just what these two needed to get back to where they needed to be with each other, to get past the pain and grief... excellent chapter

dicecanntcry
02/18/2007 04:33 am
Chapter 21         
“Travers had Rebecca and Buffy murdered.”

uh - I thought Buffy was alive?

08/18/2006 06:22 am
Chapter 21         
Since Stacy is bound to Buffy does that mean whenever Stacy passes that it will weaken Buffy even if it's in eighty years, if Buffy lives that long? Too bad that Spike was so devastated to enjoy his mother's presence, at least the girl's got to see there mom. Hope they finally get Travers, he so deserves it. Great chapter, thanks for the read.

06/14/2006 03:03 am
Chapter 21         
for once buffy's thinking straight...good plan...excellent update

dicecanntcry
02/18/2007 04:28 am
Chapter 20         
Ok - I dont quite understand.

Buffy is totally cool that another woman is sleeping with the love of her life AND they're all best friends?

Shouldn't she at least have some sort of jealousy? It would make the story much more believable.

Rebecca is totally fine her husband is in love with another woman?

And when Spike's wife dies he acts his dog just got ran over?

I'm really not trying to be difficult - this plot line has a lot of potential - but it just doesn't make sense to me,

08/18/2006 05:26 am
Chapter 20         
OMG!!! She did die! Poor spike and the baby and now what are Joyce and Anne(William's mother?)Can't wait to continue this this heart wrenching chapter. Excellent story.

06/14/2006 02:58 am
Chapter 20         
wow...this is incredible...i loved rebecca, it's sad that she's dead...but now buffy will be whole, but not to hate spike like xander thinks... excellent update

nmcil
08/02/2007 11:08 am
Chapter 19         
like your concept of the extended family and the multiple partners freedom of love away from the traditional family concept - makes a great metaphor for what would be a great & highly effective global social system - family of man vs separation of familial groups/tribes.

08/13/2006 06:50 am
Chapter 19         
Of course Xander would be freaked. He doesn't want to be any part of Spike's anything. Samuel's alive and kickin,101 years old. That's really old but he is part demon. Guess Becca's bringing Buffy to Spike so he wont be lonely when she's gone. Just hope he doesn't say the wrong "B" name whoever he's with, that would be pretty embarrassing. Great chapter. fine read.

06/13/2006 02:24 pm
Chapter 19         
you create the feeling of being there very well...very peaceful and soothing...another excellent chapter

08/13/2006 03:35 am
Chapter 18         
The claim is ok for the most part except that no one asked for it. They all just have to deal with it, because they have no choice. They basicly have been assaulted. It's a great idea if they'd only been given a choice. Again just my opinion. Waiting to see how this is all going to end.

06/13/2006 07:30 am
Chapter 18         
excellent chapter...i think i like the idea of the familial claim...very intriguing, this story just gets better and better

08/13/2006 03:14 am
Chapter 17         
As I said I'm a Spuffy fan and I don't like the fact that he's having a child with someone else, just how I feel. Because everyone's some kind of donor here does that mean the child is all of theirs? No matter if Rebecca does die, he will always have her child and he's always uptight over Angel being her first love and Buffy didn't have a child with him. Love the story, just not this part.

06/13/2006 07:26 am
Chapter 17         
whoa...seems a bit invasive...i wonder what sort of effect this is going to have on all of their relationships..excellent chapter

08/03/2007 12:58 am
Chapter 16         
"Redwulfs" eh? LOL I hope he was honored!

Lots of reveals here. Good for all of them putting aside prejudices and working together.

Kathlee

08/13/2006 02:02 am
Chapter 16         
What a trip for Giles. You know I wonder if Spike went to that place above the canopy that he could use the healing powers for himself. Perhaps Xander and Buffy should go as well. Doubtful that Spike enjoyed being a pin cushion. Another incredible chapter to add to this amazing fic.

06/13/2006 07:12 am
Chapter 16         
wow!! awesome!! i'm happy for them and i don't even know them (oc's) lol ...excellent writing here, you are doing so well with this fic on to more

08/03/2007 12:49 am
Chapter 15         
I smiled all through this chapter. So visual...I can see Spike in his euphoria, Xander in his confusion oh so torn...awe and hope all around. Lovely.

Kathleen

08/13/2006 01:39 am
Chapter 15         
Never seen a perfect Spike before and he looks glorious! That was brilliant! Bo's a vamp. Spun honey figurine for Dawn=$10. Amaran gem stone ring for Spike=$100. Beautiful vampire crush for Xander=PRICELESS!!! Know wonder Anya was sooo pleased with herself. Wonderful, wonderful story.

06/13/2006 05:14 am
Chapter 15         
aww....good for spike

08/13/2006 01:12 am
Chapter 14         
Thank's for the laughs, it felt really good. Looks like one of their friends did manage to survive. On to the next chapter. Great read.

06/13/2006 05:10 am
Chapter 14         
so who's the new guy? and the tickle fight was hilarious..not much of a fight though, more of a massacre lol

02/20/2014 10:02 am
Chapter 13         
A Buffy that is mature and civilized and willing to fully accept the terrible hard lessons of life and love and stupidity and ignorance and her cruel and brutal dark side - It sucks to be Buffy right about now.  But you have given her peace and grace to help her learn how to deal with the loss of a great love that she has thrown away.  She did not deserve the love that Spike wanted to give her but anyone who has suffered through the loss of a loved one or has loved and not had it returned has to feel for her.    

Not so sure that I fully buy into Spike's ease with the situation; how readily he is able to let go of his feelings for Buffy and immediately return to his feelings for his wife and true love - Rebecca.  

It's a huge factor in their relationships that Buffy was cruel and a total selfish cow with him, but he accepted all her brutality as part of his love.  It just feels like he would be a hell of a lot more conflicted about his love for Buffy now.  

I love all your ideas of the true history of the Council of Watchers, the Slayers, and the former demon society and culture.  

08/03/2007 12:31 am
Chapter 13         
Wow Buffy and selfless love! A miracle indeed...oh and the mystical world..that's magic too *G*.

Look forward to a tour of Midian. Is our Xander going to have his heart mended by Bo? Like her, he needs a teacher!

Kathleen

08/13/2006 12:54 am
Chapter 13         
There's a mature Buffy after all. Glad they had that talk but do they realize that the only way they could be together will be if Rebecca didn't exist anymore. So much fun watching Giles act like a kid again. Wonderfully different chapter. Thank you.

06/13/2006 05:05 am
Chapter 13         
that was absolutely exquisite! beautiful conversation, very well done and very true to the characters...and a very good place for buffy and spike to be at the moment

08/13/2006 12:37 am
Chapter 12         
Looks beautiful, a wonderus place to be. Someone for Xander? If she's there that means she's at least part demon herself. Maybe he CAN get over that demon prejudice of his. Amazing chapter. Thanks.

06/12/2006 03:01 pm
Chapter 12         
awww..good for xander, finding somebody new excellent chapter

08/13/2006 12:13 am
Chapter 11         
That's so weird as much as I know that Buffy doesn't deserve him and that he deserves to be happy but him being with someone else just put a knot in my gut. Isn't that the silliest thing, I guess I really am a diehard Spuffy fan. Wonder how Spike will handle the knowledge that he was going to be a father. You just had to put that in there didn't you? Make us feel bad for him. Bad girl! Lovin this fic.

06/12/2006 02:56 pm
Chapter 11         
another excellent chapter, your characterizations are flawless...very well done story

nmcil
08/02/2007 08:58 am
Chapter 10         
Talk about doing the Life's Hard Lessons - If I were Buffy I should be sick from the heartache of being anywhere near to Spike and his Rebecca. Have to think that however much they are in love and filled with their shared happiness, seems that they could show a little bit of compassion or feeling for Buffy's feelings. I know that she did nothing to warrant any consideration from Spike - however, Spike and Rebecca do know that she does have feelings for him - I kina wish that they showed a little more restraint with their conduct in front of her. It would seem very much more of a real show of what their human life would have called for and a bit more of a real "first class act" for them; a real showing of their higher moral ground.

Great Story - very much enjoying my read -

08/12/2006 11:22 pm
Chapter 10         
Thought the wedding ring was his mom's, didn't have a clue of course, that it was belonged to him *sniff*. He;s been through so much I don't want for him to loss her again. Glad that Xander is being a man to Giles, and is supportive of the new couple. Emotional chapter. wonderful read.

06/12/2006 02:51 pm
Chapter 10         
wow...that is so sweet...just about brought me to tears...again... excellent chapter

08/02/2007 10:49 pm
Chapter 9         
But he had made a choice and it hadn’t been her ‘What did I expect anyway. Oh Buffy I love the way you beat on me and use me for sex, and treat me like shit. Please oh Please Buffy I don’t want to go back to my wife who loves me and treats me like a man. I want to stay with you hidden away to be used at your convenience.’ Buffy let the sarcastic little voice echo through her head. She closed her eyes and saw the image of Spike and Rebecca kissing, clearly in love and happy. ‘That could have been me, if I hadn’t been so scared. Now I can never get him back. I can never tell him how I really feel.’ Tears started to fall down her face once more “Oh God” she whispered to the room “What have I done” she drew her legs up hugging them to herself.

That was the single most gratifying paragraph I've read in ..... um.... close to ever.

Love Rebecca. She loves William and wants him happy no matter what. He deserves to be loved that way.

Kathleen

08/12/2006 11:07 pm
Chapter 9         
That was one hellofa chapter. Does Rebecca know something that we don't? Wonderful chapter. Terrific read. Thanks.

06/12/2006 05:55 am
Chapter 9         
hmmm....that last comment was kind of cryptic..wonder what she meant by that...is she *expecting* buffy to get another chance? excellent chapter, by the way

08/12/2006 10:54 pm
Chapter 8         
Yes! I've always liked Giles and Anya together ever since the "Tabula Rasa". Thought they were a much better couple than Ahn and Xander. Glad to see Buffy suffering. I really am. Incredible chapter, just love it.

06/12/2006 05:51 am
Chapter 8         
i have to say...buffy and xander deserve the pain of that moment...love anya and giles together...if it was intended to be humor, sorry, but i always thought that match made more sense thanx for another great chapter

08/12/2006 10:33 pm
Chapter 7         
Love this so much glad to see Anya again and happy that Rebecca's giving them the skinny on the demon culture's and good demons as well. Got to read more, thanks for the wonderful fic.

06/11/2006 09:19 pm
Chapter 7         
hmm...this should be good....you know, i think xander could come around, and if he does maybe they could get back together? i like rebecca's take on things...interesting chapter

08/02/2007 10:08 pm
Chapter 6         
I just discovered this one and am enthralled. LOVE the concepts so far...the whole change in the Council and why, Rebecca and William (and his having been loved once)...Buffy getting a dose of her own medicine. Excellent!

I'll be reading as quickly as I can so I won't comment after every chapter (or finish it all today as I do have to sleep) but want you to know this is WONDERFUL!

Kathleen

08/12/2006 10:14 pm
Chapter 6         
Really happy that spike was able to give to Buffy for once. I hope she feels every bit of gut-wrenching pain that she caused him. Another amazing chapter, thanks.

06/11/2006 03:55 pm
Chapter 6         
see...even though i want spike and buffy together and *happy*...not him being mistreated by buffy...i can't help but be totally happy for him with rebecca... excellent chapter

10/04/2005 11:19 pm
Chapter 6         
Yes, I liked it, but I felt sorry for Buffy... which, I think, is a first for me. normally I feel sorry for spike.

08/12/2006 10:00 pm
Chapter 5         
As much as I love Spuffy, I love Spike more and if he still loves Rebecca then I'm happy for him. More power to him, he deserves to be loved and she loves him without reservation, too bad for Buffy. There's a demon council as well? Fascinating chapter. Wonderful read.

06/11/2006 03:49 pm
Chapter 5         
unless the council's been doing it for a long time, gradually, and totally know what they're doing..excellent chapter with great explanation

08/12/2006 09:42 pm
Chapter 4         
They're married? This is so cool. If Buffy doesn't want him his wife does. I have to read more. Amazing chapter, Just love it. Thanks for the wonderful read.

06/11/2006 03:33 pm
Chapter 4         
lol...excellent chapter again...maybe this will give buffy a wake up call, having someone else around, a Slayer no less, who actually treats Spike with love and respect and like a person...this whole premise is excellent, i love it

Lou
02/20/2007 07:10 pm
Chapter 3         
Old pals!

08/12/2006 09:23 pm
Chapter 3         
Ok I know this is going to be good if Spike faints. What about those Imp parts? what arethey used for and how do they get them? Silly and weird thing to think about, so I won't. Need to see what's the what. Great chapter, really getting into it, thanks.

06/11/2006 03:26 pm
Chapter 3         
whoa...something tells me he knows rebecca from before...but hurry and get him out of the sun before he dusts!! excellent chapter

Lou
02/20/2007 07:05 pm
Chapter 2         
Interesting idea.

08/12/2006 09:05 pm
Chapter 2         
Wow! such an interesting twist! and how does she know Spike? Can't wait to find out. Exciting chapter, fine read, thanks.

06/11/2006 03:15 pm
Chapter 2         
wow..this is so fascinating! very intense chapter, explains a lot too very well done

Lou
02/20/2007 07:01 pm
Chapter 1         
That's one nasty Buffy!

Anon
08/21/2006 07:38 am
Chapter 1         
Stop using a bajillion ellipses points! You only need 3 periods to make an ellipses point. I like your writing, but the moment I noticed all that it pretty much ruined it for me because it makes it look so messy.

08/12/2006 08:49 pm
Chapter 1         
Who's the person from the ancient grave? How can Buffy still consider Spike and evil soulless thing when he took care of Dawn after she died? Just love Tara, nice to know that someone thought about Spike after Buffy died and still did after she came back. Definately hooked already. Nice read. Thanks.

06/11/2006 03:10 pm
Chapter 1         
well i'm hoping giles being back is a good thing...this is an excellent first chapter, tore my heart out with spike's pain, love how tara's being a friend to him though... excellent fic