A New Dawn by Mefiant

xanfan23@yahoo.com
04/08/2011 07:27 am
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Wonderful angle on the dawn/monk story. Liked your use of Spike as the source for Dawn. Wish that mystery could have been kept more private for the bond between Dawn and Spike. Liked the idea of Spike seeing Graham as his. I can take or leave the spuffy- but a adore Spike and Dawn friendship. And the creation of any type of "lore" as you've done with Anya's old knowledge etc.

Would have liked to read more but I'll just enjoy what's here.

Cate
08/23/2008 01:50 pm
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Grrr evil... I absolutely adore your story. Your alternate universe is so different, however still reminiscent of characters; and that is a great skill to be able to acheive that. As I was saying your characterisation and character development is pretty much perfect... I just wanna read more! I cannot really give you any constructive criticism because, being the grammar nazi that I am, I find little to no errors. Please, please update!

Flames to Dust
07/04/2008 10:41 am
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Good chapter. Maybe the idea of Dawn as Buffy´s sister and Dawn being Spike´s daughter can complicate or do a little "eewwww" the relation between Spike and Buffy.
Next chapter right now.

Anne
06/30/2008 01:16 am
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Just reread your story and I still love it. I am hoping that it will be finished some time in the near future. I know that real life gets in the way sometimes. Just wanted you to know that you still have fans out here.

cooljacque@sbcglobal.net
04/10/2008 04:31 pm
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Are you going to finish this great story?  I really hate unfinished fanfic because I don't have the skills to finish the story for myself.  You are a wonderful writer.  Please tell me why you left us hanging on serveral of your fine fics.

Jacque
cooljacque@sbcglobal.net

Sorry, I forgot to include my email address so you could respond to me.  Love your work.

cooljacque
04/10/2008 04:28 pm
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Are you going to finish this great story?  I really hate unfinished fanfic because I don't have the skills to finish the story for myself.  You are a wonderful writer.  Please tell me why you left us hanging on serveral of your fine fics.

Jacque

11/13/2007 10:51 pm
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Excellent! I love your take on the Creation story; and I love the interaction b/n D & S; good D/S stories are some of my favs, and yours is top notch; please update again soon!

Taylor
07/28/2007 07:11 pm
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Oh please update this.I have always been a HUGE fan of Spike/Dawn.Either romance or friendship.I love the whole Spike/Dawn father/daughter angle you have going here.I'm also liking how Graham has become part of the vamp family.Also love how Spike is making Buffy blush.And sorry but as much as I love Tara I have always been a bigger fan of Oz/Willow.Oz always cracked me up.SO please update this soon I love it

DAWN
02/12/2007 06:13 pm
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LOL..Spike iz his usaul self unh?...well this is a truely different bt FANTASTIC fic...so plyz do keep 'em comin!!!!

12/17/2006 10:31 pm
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OI!!!!!!!!!! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR LIKE EVER FOR SOME UPDATES ON THIS AMAZING STORY AND ALL I GET IS A FEW CHAPTERS *POUTS* PLZ WRITE SOME MORE I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY

Kath1441
11/10/2006 01:13 pm
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Seems more of a dawn/spike story, maybe I missed that? So you really make Buffy out to be useless in this story. Is there any point to her presents in it, aside from having someone for everyone else to mock and laugh at?

Rose
10/14/2006 08:49 am
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Enjoying this story very much! Love that Spike is Dawn's dad, basically.
Please, please update!

07/19/2006 04:45 pm
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can't wate 2 see more of this fic from you so please keep up the grate work .

05/08/2006 02:08 am
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LOL i like it...

~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 05:39 am
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LOL ... heck yeah I'd put more than just an eye on Spike. Dang. Does that girl have eyes in her eyes? Good chapter update, and I'm glad to see an update ... even if it took me forever to get it.

02/16/2006 03:46 am
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Ooo, just got caught up on the story. Novel idea, can't wait to read more

02/16/2006 01:17 am
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Is it wrong of me to say that I enjoy your version better than Joss'? Everything you say makes sense, everything comes together nicely. The explanation for the hell god, the demons, the first slayer... That was fabulous! You're an excellent writer with a wild imagination.
wow thank you so much. Your review really made my day.

02/16/2006 12:46 am
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LMAO, very good, very informative chappie.

02/15/2006 11:38 pm
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If Buffy still doesn't want to put more than her eye on him, I'll be happy to assist. She can go to bed alone (serve her right).

Bridget
02/15/2006 07:14 pm
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Good update. I hope that Buffy will be decent now. She is not always a bitch.

dihcar
02/15/2006 07:05 pm
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good chapter, but i do hope that buffy stops being a stuck up bitch and realize that the REAL love of her life is standing right in front of her.

seeya

02/15/2006 06:00 pm
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I am loving the story and can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!

02/15/2006 04:51 pm
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Fantastic! Love it!

Lou
02/15/2006 04:40 pm
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Maybe Buffy could try to be a little civil to Spike now?

Lou
02/15/2006 04:39 pm
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Maybe Buffy will start to be a little civil to Spike now?

11/24/2005 01:53 am
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This is such an intriguing take on the Key and her parent. Spike has his work dealing with Buffy and the incredibly stupid Scoobies. Hopefully he'll be able to figure out how to kill Glory without jumping of a tower. More please.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/23/2005 03:23 am
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Buffy needs to get over herself. Xander needs to be slapped if he questions Spike one more time about it all. Glad to see Spike and Dawn in such a friendly and Father/Daughter type relationship. That is cool. Glad to see an update of this one after so long. {Smiles} Love it.

Nichole
11/22/2005 10:35 pm
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i absolutely love this story..Buffy needs to get over herself..She more than anyone should realize that Spike must really trust her to bring Dawn to them for help...i use to sometime wonder on the show if Dawn wasn't Spike daughter..but they never really went into who her father was...i like the fact that in this story she is Spike's daughter...

jane
11/22/2005 06:04 pm
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Really excellent update, like where this fic is going.
Thanks Jane

Max
11/22/2005 08:23 am
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This is a great fic - I really like how protective Spike is of Dawn. Buffy needs to grow up and get with the program.
Thanks Max, I always loved the Spike & Dawn dynamic.

SpaceLord
11/22/2005 08:02 am
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Well this is a very interesting story so far, I'm really interested in seeing how this will end.
Thnaks, pleased you like it.

~*~Tasha~*~
11/09/2005 11:42 am
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ROFL! Sure Buffy really wants him in clothes? {Chuckles} Cute. Loved the chapter. It was funny. The interplay between Spike and Dawn is amusing. Look forward to more.

10/19/2005 10:32 pm
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Please, don't get him any clothes on my account. hmmm, naked spike...

Lou
10/19/2005 08:27 pm
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Very exciting - suitably bratty Dawn too. More soon?

Max
10/19/2005 08:15 pm
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This is a great fic, thanks for getting rid of Spike's chip - I absolutely hated that fact everyone could beat on him and he couldn't do anything about it. Has Spike found the gem of Amara yet b/c he would so kick (Glory's) ass if he had that too.

10/19/2005 08:15 pm
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tee hee next chapter? *whip*

Cate
08/23/2008 01:02 pm
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I absolutely love this... it's just morbidly fascinating... then again I'm usually fascinated by the morbid lol. Anywho keep up the good work.

02/15/2006 11:29 pm
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Really, really great story. Incredibly satisfying lol. I absolutely loved your Ripper. And what he did to Riley. I wanted to do a happy dance. Good job with this story. I'm loving it.

10/19/2005 10:21 pm
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Giles is such a cold blooded killer... ::shivers:: On the July 2 saturday con day Tony said he'd read fanfic on the net, but that he'd got all ewwed at all the Giles/Buffy fics out there. after this though I can see the attraction He's such a bad boy in disguise. more please!

Lou
10/19/2005 06:51 pm
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Giles the Avenger - an excellent end for disgusting Riley.

10/19/2005 12:10 pm
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OMG--finally someone with the balls to kill that evil git, Riley. Thank you, so very much. and this is sooo good!

10/19/2005 12:08 pm
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great story, I like how Riley got what he deserved.

10/19/2005 11:19 am
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Yay! Dead Riley! Dead Forrest! Breathing much easier now.

10/19/2005 08:38 am
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Perfect end for Riley; I love it; your Giles/Ripper is perfect too!! I am so loving this story; can't wait for more!!!

10/18/2005 09:50 pm
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LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!! I can't wait for Riley to pay for what he did!! Poor Dawnie, Riley is such a perv!!! He should die slowly....too bad they've only got 15 minutes...lol...can't wait for update

jane
10/18/2005 08:44 pm
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Excellent really good

Cate
08/23/2008 12:34 pm
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Evil Riley is really scary Although I have to admit, I love his change in persona. I like the Dawn/Spike friendship, and Xander's vehement disdain for Riley now hehehe. I've always liked Graham and I'm glad you're not making him a creep like Riley. Speaking of the casually cool, I love Oz... I really hope he stays in this story! This is very interesting story and I can't wait to read more!

10/18/2005 10:39 am
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poor Spike! Yay for angry Xander! Ok, I know those other chapters are done - let's have 'em!

10/18/2005 08:50 am
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I cannot tell you how much I am loving this story, even though you've just about made me bawl in parts of it....poor poor Spike...and evil hateful Riley!!! I'm in the middle of writing an evil-Riley,Initiative fic, and my evil Riley does not even come close to comparing!!! OMG!!! Please please update soon I have to see them get him out of there and get him better!! Great, great story!!!

10/17/2005 09:12 am
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Great new chapter. Riley seems a bit viscious. visious? strange word. anyway, more please.

10/17/2005 04:19 am
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OMG! Did the PTB appoint Spike as Dawn's protector? I hope she pulls herself together soon and manages to talk sense to the Scoobies or Spike will be left with the Initiative. I see that Captain Cardbored is a vicious, cruel bastard in this story. Will he still be able to reel in Buffy? More story please.

Max
10/17/2005 02:38 am
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Interesting introduction of Dawn into the show - Riley and the rest of the Initiative so need to die horrible and painful deaths

10/16/2005 09:18 pm
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I like the idea of this, I'm interested in finding out Spike and Dawns relationship and whether Buffy will kick Riley's ass in time...

10/16/2005 09:14 pm
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Oh, I like! and wait, there's more... on to chapter two!