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Underneath This Smile by lovesbitca37 Jags 02/17/2010 07:25 pm Parts 16 - 20 That was really good. youbegoodbaby 05/30/2007 03:42 am Parts 16 - 20 *holding back tears* Beautiful...just beautiful! very sweet and sad...loved your re-write of the bathroom scene..very well done, the whole way through :) Very well written fic, and I loved the ending. Well done. :) Just re-read this story, and wanted to let you know how much I liked it. You took a really dark subject and explored it in a way that still let the light back in.
-Lisa
Thank you, that means a lot to me. This fic really made me nervous! Thanks :) Nice to see that they won't be wasting any more time with Buffy being a blockhead. uh-oh...ew...not riley :( i hope buffy doesn't freak out over it :( this is genuinely scary because it's so real...you make my heart ache and sob for buffy, she's hurting so bad...and for spike, because he genuinely loves her, but doesn't know how to help her...and strangely, most of all for poor little dawnie...so lost, without her mom or her sister...beautiful sad story :) will read more later :) oh how very sad, depressing even...but beautifully written with a very real grasp of these sorts of issues...i am captivated...reading on now :) | |||
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