The Rest of our Lives by Ariel Dawn

05/20/2014 11:35 pm
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This is utterly delightful.  A few spelling errors... but the twists and turns and lovely moments...  wonderful.  Also, always have to give kudos when Dru makes a positive appearance.  I have a very special place in my heart for Dru. 

Glad to see that in the end, Faith remains part of the family.  I really do like how you treated everyone.  You were even more or less nice to the beast (Kennedy).  :-)

Thank you

Blue
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04/02/2013 12:43 pm
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I've read this soooo many times it's freaking awesome

08/11/2012 07:49 am
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It was such a pleasure reading this again -

Fan-fairy-tastic thanks
04/02/2010 04:47 pm
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SPUFFY CHICK
11/13/2008 08:32 am
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WOW! What a wonderful story! i loved it!
Thanks!

Keni
09/06/2008 09:14 pm
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is there a sequal to this? I sincerly hope there is!

nmcil
12/11/2007 11:15 am
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Wonderful - read this once before and enjoyed it just as much this time - love your treatment of the characters, very much like the series but still you manage to make them your own. Some very sweet moments and lots of great humor throughout - Reading other parts tomorrow, see how all great children come about and what happens with Dru -

11/20/2007 10:54 am
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I love this story, absolutely beautiful. (with a Mrs Darlington thrown in there occasionaly lol) Keep up the great work, I'm starting the sequel.
Jace

Strawberries
07/15/2007 10:46 am
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I've drained my reviewing capacities by now... there is nothing left to say except:

You should be proud of yourself for writing this amazing piece of art.

Thank you :)

Jags
05/29/2007 09:39 pm
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oh that was just...sniff...beautiful!
Thank you!

05/15/2007 06:54 am
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just finished the first section of this delightful read. thank you. have no idea how i missed it originally.
Thanks for reading

nmcil
05/01/2007 07:56 pm
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On to the sequel - what a wonderful Spuffy Tale; totally enjoyed reading this piece -

Thanks Ever -
Thanks for reading!

Storm
01/22/2007 05:49 pm
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WOW! what can i say? you write brilliantly, this brought tears to my eyes and made me laugh. am totally in love with cat and ariel. pls write a sequel this is just wonderful, the best fanfic ive ever read!
I have a sequel, called 'another life' it doesn't deal with Ariel and Cat but it does futher the story along.

BerMH
01/04/2007 07:45 am
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This story made me laugh a lot. In fact, all of your stories do. I haven't left you any reviews yet, but I have been slowly reading through them, and I like what I've read. I look fofrward to reading the rest of them!
Thanks so much! I'm so happy they made you laugh!

Catrine
06/05/2006 08:50 pm
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Lovely story, extremely original. I loved the way you made Buffy and Spike get together,and I had some chuckles through this story. Especially when I read Spike`s reaction to them having 11 children. I really hope you will write/are writing a sequel.
The sequel is written, and called Another Life. It is complete.

06/04/2006 10:40 pm
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oh wow...this story was awesome, i loved it from start to finish...beautifully written...very emotional and tender and altogether lovely... :) thanx for writing it :) and if you read, this what's the sequel called, by the way?
The sequel is called Another life and is complete!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:52 pm
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Very wonderful story. Original ideas all around, and I really enjoyed it!!
Thanks!

02/17/2006 01:43 am
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LOL, very good fic. I still loves it :P
Yay!

10/29/2005 02:26 pm
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I loved this story. Seems to me I read it (or part of it before) but you earned a good review now if I forgot before. I will watch for a sequel.
Thanks! The sequel is still in the planning stages right now.

10/16/2005 10:39 am
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I soooo need a sequal, please
Do I have to tell you what you have to do to see a sequel written faster wulfie? huh? update! you furry menace update!

Kat
09/23/2005 09:01 am
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What an intresting story. It covered the full spectrum of emotions and the writing was fantastic. I will defentially be on the look out for the sequel
Aww Thanks!

gaillee
09/23/2005 08:07 am
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I more than liked...this was superior. I especially like Chap. 25, Demon House. I can't remember the last time I laughed so much. Thankx.
Thank You!

Strawberries
07/15/2007 10:31 am
Goodbyes         
Luckily they'll be back, with the being born some time or another and all, so I didn't feel the overwhelming need to cry my eyes out and punch something after finishing this chapter :)

And of course: YAY A SEQUEL!

06/04/2006 10:34 pm
Goodbyes         
hmm...very intriguing and sad...i miss them too, already :) off to read the end :)
Thanks for reading!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:46 pm
Goodbyes         
Dru is as cryptic as the PTB. LOL. Very sad chapter that we have Ariel and all return ... very sad ... but still very well written.
Thanks!

02/17/2006 01:40 am
Goodbyes         
Pooor Buffy so sad :( but she still needs a spanking
and you are still on that spanking kick...

10/16/2005 10:28 am
Goodbyes         
Magic Tea? thought Buffy upon reading this cryptic note. LMAO, only Dru
hmmm yes Magic Tea...will be explained in the sequel.

Strawberries
07/15/2007 10:16 am
Kissmas         
Ooh now I want to know what Ariel knows on Xander too, it's just not fair :)

The holidays were really great! I'm always a sucker for christmas in fics :)

06/04/2006 10:30 pm
Kissmas         
wow...this story is so incredible...i'm so sad that it's drawing to a close :(
It will continue in a number of sequels!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:39 pm
Kissmas         
Great chapter.
Thanks!

02/17/2006 01:36 am
Kissmas         
Ohhhhhh schmoop :P
Yep, big time

darlaslilgirl
11/30/2007 01:18 pm
Screaming Matches         
loved the chapter. at the end whee she said i wanna be like faith made me choke on my tuna mayo sanwich before reading the rest, my mind was definatly in the same place as buffy's. cant wait to continue reading.

06/04/2006 10:21 pm
Screaming Matches         
hmmm...so that's one mystery *sort of* solved...they know which kid is gonna kill her...but she must come back, right, or she couldn't have sent ariel and cat to the past...excellent chapter :)
Thanks so much!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:34 pm
Screaming Matches         
Awww ... I wonder how Ariel killed Buffy.
It will come out eventually.

02/17/2006 01:33 am
Screaming Matches         
lol, can we have Ariel 'accidently' stake Valery???
accidentally? would it really be accidentally?

Strawberries
07/15/2007 09:42 am
The Demon House         
Teehee everyone walking around the house being 'theirselves' was way funnier than I could've anticipated :P

Though why Willow didn't magically fetch the popcorn instead of having Buffy on her feet all evening remains a riddle to me :D

06/04/2006 10:14 pm
The Demon House         
that was so sweet...they are so tender and loving with each other, i love this story...love how they freaked out valery... excellent chapter :)
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:29 pm
The Demon House         
Those last lines were so sweet in this chapter.

The whole being yourself was PERFECT and HILARIOUS, AD. I laughed so hard. Good thing the hubby has gone to sleep now or he'd still be wondering whta the heck is going on. LOL
lol, I'm glad you like!

02/17/2006 01:29 am
The Demon House         
ok, changed my mind Valerie needs staking the most, even ahead of Pornhouser and Angel :P
lol thanks Wulfie!

04/01/2013 10:33 pm
Moody Teens         
Lol poor poor poor spike he has 11 little buffys running around

Strawberries
07/15/2007 09:29 am
Moody Teens         
Whahaha, and here I was thinking telling Angel about the kids was funny :P

Mr. Summers and his dear wife are such nice normal people living in a nice normal house having a nice normal family :P

06/04/2006 09:30 pm
Moody Teens         
well that was a bit...awkward...lol..awesome chapter, love the introductions...very well done :)
Thanks

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:23 pm
Moody Teens         
Ariel is so precious and precocious. I love her! Cat is so endearing and sweet. Dawn's little tirade at Val and her dad was funny.
Thanks

02/17/2006 01:25 am
Moody Teens         
“Eleven of them Spike, you have eleven of them to look forward to...” said Willow.

Oh yes rub his nose in it :P
hehehehehe

Strawberries
07/15/2007 09:17 am
Being Bad         
Nice save missy :)
This chapter made all the heartwrenching pain from the previous one feel like a papercut :P

Ok ok overreacting here with the 'heartwrenching pain' but hey, this really is a chapter we've all been waiting for eagerly and you did an exceptionally good job in getting it out of your fingers :)

06/04/2006 09:26 pm
Being Bad         
yea! they're mated! excellent, very sexy chapter!! loved it! now maybe this will keep her demon from wanting to hurt him? on to the next one
Thanks

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:19 pm
Being Bad         
{claps, hoots and cheers} Yeah!! They claimed each other Woot Woot!!
Very happy thing

02/17/2006 01:21 am
Being Bad         
LOL, Buffy still needs a spanking *whines*
lol

Strawberries
07/15/2007 09:00 am
Academia         
Tell me something...
Why are you stomping on my heart like that?!

Aargh, think of all those readers sobbing over this chapter :(

Ok seriously, it's a really good chapter and you should be proud of yourself for being able to put readers to tears :)

06/04/2006 09:20 pm
Academia         
what?? she loves him!! i dont understand what he's freaking about!! another excellent chapter, off to read the next :)
Spike has issues

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:14 pm
Academia         
Oh my ... how sad for Buffy and Spike. {Sniffles}
It'll get better!

02/17/2006 01:19 am
Academia         
LOL poor Ariel, Stoopid Buffy. Can we spank her now :P
oh wulfie and his one track mind

Strawberries
07/15/2007 08:38 am
The ‘We hate Kennedy Club’         
Afterthought: I half expected Oz to rub his face after punching Kennedy and saying something like "damn now I have to shave again".

ghehe
Protective Oz = goodie!

Strawberries
07/15/2007 08:32 am
The ‘We hate Kennedy Club’         
Whaha, gotta love a little vengeance at the dinner table :P

06/04/2006 09:14 pm
The ‘We hate Kennedy Club’         
lol...love kennedy getting hit...hated her, always.. :) another excellent chapter :)
Thanks

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:10 pm
The ‘We hate Kennedy Club’         
Excellent chapter. Seeing Oz punch Kennedy soooooo made my day.
lol

02/17/2006 01:17 am
The ‘We hate Kennedy Club’         
Hit Kennedy again?? Please??
lol

All4Spike
05/23/2008 01:50 am
Catherines         
I love your Dru and the way she interacts with the children, but I'm confused. If Buffy is 'Mrs Graves' why does Dru call her 'Mrs Darlington'?

Strawberries
07/15/2007 08:15 am
Catherines         
Good portraying of Dru...
I like the way you've thrown her in to take care of the kids and the way she aknowledges Buffy.

Once again, a great chapter!
Thanks!

06/04/2006 08:58 pm
Catherines         
i like the way you write dru...very in character, and i can't help but like her...another excellent chapter :)
Thanks, I really like writing Dru

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 12:01 pm
Catherines         
So sweet that Dru is actually understanding and accepting of things as they are. {Smiles}
Dru is perplexing some times

02/17/2006 01:12 am
Catherines         
LMAO, who is saner Dru or Buffy???
That remains to be seen!

Strawberries
07/15/2007 08:03 am
Toddlers soothe the savage beast         
Whahahahaha I imagine smoke sprouting out of his ears and nostrils when Ariel tells him who she is :D

Bringing up the cookies! Good one! Since I think of Angel as a simpleton and as such an analogy is the best way of getting things through his thick brain :P

Ok ok you probably get it... I'm not much of an Angel-fan :)
Neither am I :)

06/04/2006 08:52 pm
Toddlers soothe the savage beast         
Cat will help to soothe angel all right... :) excellent chapter..can't blame the guy for taking it hard...glad that revelation's out of the way, though :)
thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:56 am
Toddlers soothe the savage beast         
ROFL!! Oh I would have LOVED to have been in the room to see Angel's face on that revelation. LOL. Cat all being hooked on him too is precious. I love it!
hehehe, it is cute!

02/17/2006 01:08 am
Toddlers soothe the savage beast         
Kick Angel some more pleaaaase :P
hehehehe

06/04/2006 08:06 pm
Dirty Old Man         
glad they abandoned that little game of peter pan...funny, but *ew*! -- excellent update :)
lol

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:51 am
Dirty Old Man         
Nice meeting for Xander and the girls. Loved the toss in of the weekly tea party. That was so precious.
There are some interesting similarities between Cat and Dru...oh but that's for a fic way down the road

02/17/2006 01:03 am
Dirty Old Man         
LOL, poor ariel Her mom is a bit much :P
yep that she is

Strawberries
07/15/2007 07:28 am
Dinner party from Hell         
That dinner party is just too funny, I waked my little sis because I couldn't hold my laughter... now that was kind of a downside since she has the foulest temper when se wakes up... let alone when she is brutaly woken by her sisters fits of giggles :P

Do you realize you put me in danger of dying at the claws of my own family?
Huh?
Do ya?

That most certainly means your funny-writing is of the good :)
I'm sorry my writing put your life in peril. ;)

06/04/2006 07:59 pm
Dinner party from Hell         
see, time travel's kinda scary like that...wonder what's gonna happen next..the dinner party was hilarious :)
lol, thanks

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:45 am
Dinner party from Hell         
Oh my gosh AD. You had me cracking up from one end of the dinner table discussion to the other. I laughed so hard my husband was calling from the other room to see if I was all right. I loved this chapter
Thanks!

02/17/2006 12:59 am
Dinner party from Hell         
LOL, hard headed Buffy still needs a spanking :P
lol

06/04/2006 05:54 am
Granny Anya         
another awesome chapter...i hope anya ends up with giles, that would make way more sense than anya and xander ever did...excellent :)
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:40 am
Granny Anya         
ROFL ... yeah real big conversationt here with Gable. LOL. I love the whole Granny Anya thing. That was funny.
Glad you like!

02/17/2006 12:54 am
Granny Anya         
LMAO :P
Glad you like wulfie

Strawberries
07/15/2007 06:52 am
Difficult Questions         
Teeheehee, Giles put in his place by a twelve-year-old...
This just keeps getting better :P
:)

06/04/2006 05:51 am
Difficult Questions         
so good, still...loving this story lots ;)
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:36 am
Difficult Questions         
LOL with Anya and the fungus. That was hilarious. Giles really did step in it by pressing the matter, but then again ... that is how Giles is ... the future Buffy and Spike should have known that. Good chapter
Thank you!

02/17/2006 12:30 am
Difficult Questions         
Hard headed Buffy needs a spanking :P
Yep, sometimes she does

Strawberries
07/15/2007 06:38 am
The Name Game         
Aaaaaah you are an angel!
Sent from above to fulfill every need there ever was in Spuffy-fanficland!
Spike back, Anya back, Oz back, everyone living in the same house, good sexscenes, spuffy children without the 2x9months and the actual giving birth thingy, a load of money that the council finallyfinallyfinally coughed up and Spuffylove from the future to look forward to!

And there's still 15 more chapters waiting to be devoured!

Woohoo!
Wow, did I write all that?  hee hee, thanks for the great reivew!

06/04/2006 05:47 am
The Name Game         
very sexy...oh yeah, though, her kids could end up killing her...hmmm...troubling..great chapter though :)
lol, just a bit huh?

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:31 am
The Name Game         
Great snarky chapter ... good reflection.
Thank You!

02/17/2006 12:28 am
The Name Game         
and insert the kink :P
hehehe, you would ask for that wulfie

06/04/2006 05:41 am
Mother-ish         
wow...that's a boatload of manly responsibility to come flying out of nowhere...so to speak..lol :P excellent update...love buffy's kids...this story has more twists than most...i love it :)
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:25 am
Mother-ish         
Oooooo ... I remember the kids. Dang, I must have just spaced out or something. I remember lots of the pieces of this story, but I still don't remember how it ends. How stupid of me is that? In any case, I'm loving reading it again. Love the kids.
Thanks!

05/21/2006 10:03 am
Mother-ish         
“Pleasure. So now that we are all acquainted, can we go shopping now?”


rererererereading this and noticed how Buffylike Ariel is :P
Well Ariel is her daughter...so that makes sense

02/17/2006 12:24 am
Mother-ish         
LOL, AD is the perfect Spuffy kid :P
aren't I though? hehehe

Strawberries
07/15/2007 05:58 am
What is up with you people and bath tubs?         
Aargh, too fast with the enter-key back there...

Yay! A lot of scoobies heading for Cleveland, since I'm feverishly hoping Anya and Willow will join in soon so An and Xander can pick up their bickering-love again and Willow can get back with Oz like she is meant to :P

Woohoo!
Thanks for reading!

Strawberries
07/15/2007 05:54 am
What is up with you people and bath tubs?         

06/04/2006 05:33 am
What is up with you people and bath tubs?         
good, so gable should be out of their hair...love that spike's moving in...love this whole bloody story, love :)
So Glad!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:18 am
What is up with you people and bath tubs?         
Xander as Buffy's Watcher? Oh that will be a trip. LOL. Excellent chapter!
Thanks!

02/17/2006 12:18 am
What is up with you people and bath tubs?         
LOL, I almost feel sorry for Gable, almost :P
hehehe

Strawberries
07/15/2007 05:17 am
Vengeance demons: Not just girls anymore.         
Whahahahahahaha
whahahaha
Andrew is such a sweetie that it just makes me laugh :D

Maybe this Gable guy can turn out ok after all.

And I'm glad you had Anya pulled back from her crater-style grave! I've missed her remarks :P

Also: Go Spike for being all Mr. Nice Guy in front of the social worker!

You really have a great way of seeing to the average Spuffy-adoring readers' needs!
Thanks, that's so sweet!

06/04/2006 02:01 am
Vengeance demons: Not just girls anymore.         
hmmm...good for andrew, i think it just might work...and that social services visit went so much better than the last one! :) lol
that it did

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:13 am
Vengeance demons: Not just girls anymore.         
Yippee!!! Anya is back. Love that. Uh oh on the Andrew part with Gable. I hope that one doesn't come back to bit them in the arse.
Oh Andrew...he is a character isn't he?

Strawberries
07/15/2007 04:52 am
Demon Buffy         
Sure hope social services people are really really busy at the moment and can't find time in their busy busy schedules to visit the Summers' residence...
Well...

06/04/2006 01:54 am
Demon Buffy         
okay..when she gets out of that room she's likely to be seriously pissed off...can't wait to see what happens next :)
that she is

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 11:04 am
Demon Buffy         
Definitely a lot of issues she is fighting through. Spike is right though. She shouldn't run away from it. She has to stay and fight it. Excellent chapter.
Thanks!

02/17/2006 12:06 am
Demon Buffy         
Oh yeah, you've still got it :P
Thanks Wulfie!

Strawberries
07/15/2007 04:30 am
Weird Weird Dreams         
I have kind of an icky feeling after reading this chapter... It's a bit overwhelming too... buffy being in this Beth's body and Dru dusting the chit and all that.

Can't wait to read what Spike has to say on the matter :P
Thanks for reading!

06/04/2006 01:46 am
Weird Weird Dreams         
so...is that vamp that just got dusted in the dream the demon that buffy has now perhaps? very interesting chapter :)
No, actually entirely different person

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 10:56 am
Weird Weird Dreams         
Holy cow ... What a dream!!!!
I thought it was...

02/14/2006 04:00 am
Weird Weird Dreams         
damn good chappie :P
Thanks!

Strawberries
07/15/2007 03:59 am
Unexpected News         
I think I've read too much fics in which Spike and Buffy are all over each other with the love and the claims and te mating... I keep expecting them to burst into declarations of love and partnership and devotion :)
Instead, you portrayed them in a less smoochy more series-accurate kind of way and I really admire your stile!

Again: Great chapter!
Thanks!

06/04/2006 01:40 am
Unexpected News         
hmmm...wonder if she'll get the chance...poor spike, trying so hard to do what's best for her...is it just me or is buffy getting a bit more aggressive? great chapter :)
Thanks

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 10:45 am
Unexpected News         
Oh wait a minute ... I think I'm remembering something about the being killed by her descendants ... Oh boy. If it is what I think it is oh boy.
yep, spot on!

02/14/2006 04:00 am
Unexpected News         
lol dumb ditzy Buffy needs a spanking :P
lol

Strawberries
07/15/2007 03:35 am
The invalid Vampire         
Good for Willow with the putting Kennedy in her place and all that.
This Valery-bitca is starting to get on my nerves... you really have a knack for inventing frustrating characters :)

Spike's blindness had better not be permanent or I might be tempted to track you down and kick your ass ;)
No, not permenant, please don't kick my ass....though through anonymity you might have a hard time tracking me down :)

06/04/2006 01:32 am
The invalid Vampire         
lol..xander would make a good watcher i think...very sexy chapter...ooohh....bondage fun to come maybe? hehe ;) great chapter
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 10:37 am
The invalid Vampire         
Uh oh ... Valery lost her baby, and now she wants dawn with a vengeance. How does she think that Dawn will be any safer with Valery? Val isn't all that normal either with her visions.

Loved Buffy and Spike in this one. I hope we get to see them continue in a positive vein.
Thanks for the great review!

02/14/2006 03:55 am
The invalid Vampire         
can Xander fall off a cliff now??
OOOh that 's a good idea Wulfie!

03/31/2013 02:23 pm
Dead animals.         
Yeah sure Xander keep thinking that

Strawberries
07/15/2007 03:07 am
Dead animals.         
Damn I hate that soddin' ignorant prick Gable. He's the most gruesome stupid loser I ever came across while reading fanfiction and that ought to mean something since I've read a lot of them.

And I really love you for creating the wanker :)

On a different note: Your disclaimers are quite funny :)

Great chapter!
Thanks!

Jana
08/10/2006 10:26 pm
Dead animals.         
I just recently joined this site and have been browsing through the fanfic and really am enjoying yours.

One of things I enjoy the most is you didn't portray Spike as weak, and totally defer from the original plot of 'Buffy'.

A lot of other fanfics make it the fairytale where Buffy and Spike are nothing like how they were on the show. So much in love, I can't even picture Spike saying or doing some of the things that are described.

Thanks for keeping it 'real'.
Thanks so much!

06/03/2006 11:50 pm
Dead animals.         
get over it, xander...poor spike!! :( buffy went easy on that guy, in my opinion...on to more :)
That she did

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 10:27 am
Dead animals.         
Xander is stupid and blind. His prejudices are going to get them all killed. hell is almost has on a few occassions already. {growls} Excellent chapter. I hope that Gable really has the fear of Buffy in him now.
oooh! a growl! hehehe. Yes Gable is a moron and he'll pay for it later (in the sequel)

02/14/2006 03:49 am
Dead animals.         
Xander you idiot the Egyption govt. called and revoked your passport for riding the River of De Nile. :p
heheheeh

Strawberries
07/15/2007 02:19 am
Restoration         
Woohoo, glad Giles actually spoke my mind on the whole Dawn/watcher thing. High school seems pretty high-schooly and not so hell-mouthy so that's good! Still eager for some more Spuffy though... they're both way too space-is-good-y if you ask me :P

Really nice chapter!
Thanks!

01/17/2007 03:13 am
Restoration         
Great dialogue in this chapter!
Thanks!

06/03/2006 11:41 pm
Restoration         
i hope spike's ok, too...he needs to just move in with buffy... :) story gets better and bettter :)
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 10:16 am
Restoration         
Gable sounds like trouble. We all know that Kennedy is trouble. She is definitely not going to like being without her Slayer strength again. I wonder how Faith is taking it.
Faith will be coming up!

02/14/2006 03:43 am
Restoration         
LMAO, poor Spike evil Buffy :p She needs a spanking :P
lol again with the spanking

Strawberries
07/15/2007 01:27 am
Through the looking glass         
Wow Wow Wow!
This is one hell of a chapter!

But damn it's a shame there are only 3 of those first-watchy-guys, would've been nice to have Dawn as a 4th secondy first-watchery thingy (aargh that's an awfully dumb way to put it).

Then again... she's the key so it makes sense.

Wow again, this chapter is amazing :)
Thanks!

06/03/2006 11:33 pm
Through the looking glass         
does she remember?? poor buffy having to go through that...but maybe now her family will be safe...i'm liking the while willow/oz thing coming on here :)
:)

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 10:06 am
Through the looking glass         
Uh oh ... I wonder if that is a good I'm Buffy the Vampire Slayer or a fruity one ... or a peeved one ... or a sarcastic one. Dang ... running to the next chapter to find out.
that statement was just so full of everything. She was off the hook, and then everything fell back on her shoulders again.

02/14/2006 03:33 am
Through the looking glass         
lmao, doofus buffy :P
lol

Strawberries
07/15/2007 12:40 am
Shadows and Ashes         
Oh... all the frustration made me forget to comment on how nice and tender they are with each other, which is always a plus :)

And... I'm really curious about the weird caretaker!

And... ooh getting the creepy guys out of their stupid box to kill off our beloved characters is a plot I've never read before!

Good going :)
Thanks!

Strawberries
07/15/2007 12:33 am
Shadows and Ashes         
Damn why aren't they getting it on?
She knows she loves him, why can't she just bloody well say so and get him to move in with her? Why can we (readers) see that 'everything gets better once Spike and Buffy are together' and she just doesn't see fit to make it so?

Damn this fic is frustrating...
and I love it.
Me being frustrated about a fic is obviously confirmation of the fact that you are a good writer.
awww thanks!

06/03/2006 11:23 pm
Shadows and Ashes         
i love this story...very sweet and tender moments between these two..wonder what's up with creepy cemetery guy...on to the next chapter :)
The creepy cemetery guy is trouble!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 09:53 am
Shadows and Ashes         
hmmm .. intriguing. I seem to remember a good portion of this chapter. Something is after all the Summers' ... good one.
hmmm, yes indeed!

02/14/2006 03:25 am
Shadows and Ashes         
Oh yeah Buffy how romantic
lol

06/02/2013 07:51 am
Hell wasn’t in Sunnydale, it’s in this bus.         

I love this story - it will be great reading it again.

Strawberries
07/14/2007 11:54 pm
Hell wasn’t in Sunnydale, it’s in this bus.         
HA!
OZ!
Woohoo!
I really hope you're getting him back with Willow!
And, to be honest I kinda expect it after the little movie-picking-thing and the fine way of showing that Kennedy's tastes just don't fit with Willow's :P

Good going so far!
Thanks!

TwilightChild
03/05/2007 08:33 am
Hell wasn’t in Sunnydale, it’s in this bus.         
Very touching story, have to admit that. My eyes were misting during the last chapter.
Aww that's sweet of you.

06/03/2006 10:45 pm
Hell wasn’t in Sunnydale, it’s in this bus.         
how sweet...i got a warm fuzzy feeling from this chapter...the bus ride actually doesn't sound so bad, except for poor starving spike, but buffy should take care of that for him *wink wink nudge nudge* lol :) great chapter :)
lol

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 09:45 am
Hell wasn’t in Sunnydale, it’s in this bus.         
Oooo ... OZ!! I love Oz. So good to see him. I'd like to see how he plays out in this. I would LOVE to see Willow dump Kennedy. Kennedy is not Tara and she is not Oz. Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out.

I know I recognized the summary of this story, but for the life of me I can't remember all the parts. Dang, I must be getting senile early.
lol, no I'm sure that's not true! I have plans for Oz, though he doesn't really get a big part in this fic, it's important that he makes his reappearance here for the sequel. Yes, I've started the sequel...yippee for me!

02/14/2006 03:19 am
Hell wasn’t in Sunnydale, it’s in this bus.         
Oh yeah freakin good fic :P
Thanks Wulfie!

Strawberries
07/14/2007 11:34 pm
What do we do now?         
Good story so far...
Nice job with the lighter!
Really a Buffy thing to do :)
Thanks!

Melissa
10/12/2006 06:35 am
What do we do now?         
ArielDawn you write wonderfully. I just started reading your work. You are truly gifted thanks ever so much, I really enjoy it. :0)
Thanks so much for the complement!

06/03/2006 10:38 pm
What do we do now?         
wow...that was breathtaking...cant wait to see what happens next :)
Thanks!

~*~Tasha~*~
05/23/2006 09:37 am
What do we do now?         
Ooo ... don't know how I don't have reviews for this one here, AD. Shame on me. It must have been when I was reading all your wonderful fics at your site before you became a Misfit. {huggles} This one is good ... just like your other ones.
Thanks Tasha!

02/14/2006 02:53 am
What do we do now?         
lol, dumb Spike, run, NOW
lol

12/01/2005 11:36 am
What do we do now?         
I just read the whole thing in one sitting, and wanted to let you know that I LOVED IT! Can't wait to read the sequel. -Lisa
Thanks!

nmcilnmcil
09/27/2005 03:09 pm
What do we do now?         
Really enjoyed reading this piece - so ready to read your sequel - that will be a great Winter FF reading pleasure. Hope you start it soon.
Sequel is started, though in the primary stages, unfortunately it's taking a back seat to some of my other wips at the moment

09/21/2005 08:56 pm
What do we do now?         
Read this story elsewhere. LOVE IT. Glad you are posting it here!!!!
Thanks!