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Return to You by Thianna Fantastic fic! Thanks for keeping up the suspense. What a neat idea for the Shanshu resolution - Totally enjoyed reading your story - I like your unique interpretation of how the Shanshu worked - that was... i admit confusing. and completely different than any other fic i've ever read. but i can truly say i enjoyed it. it was magnificently written and i don't regret pushing through the confusion. i like your work. ~Liz Strawberries 07/18/2007 10:33 pm 17 - My Name Even though I'm not sure if I like this ending, I have to admit that this is a really good fic. Original plot too and even though it is a confusing one, I liked it a lot! Thank you! awww....what a sweet fic this was...lovely job, pet :) Wow, that was great. I got teary there for a moment. Fun fic, great original idea! ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/24/2005 03:46 pm 17 - My Name Unique and original idea with this "reincarnation" type story. Although I wondered many times where it would go, you held my interest and left me wanting to read more to see where you'd end up. Excellent story. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm enjoying Rebellion too. I will continue to look for more of your stories. Ssara M. 11/24/2005 12:41 pm 17 - My Name I got just a little lost at one point, but other than that it is a wonderful story. You wrote it beautifully. Thanks! Serious reincarnation story here. Was it the demon or the soul or both that kept reincarnating until he/they found Buffy? I liked the name Spike. Thanks for the interesting tale. Both demon and soul. Thanks so much for reading. very strong finish. excellent read, thank you. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/24/2005 03:42 pm 16 - I Remember This chapter was so touching at points that it had me in tears. Spikes monologue to Buffy about needing to go and let Collin be all there was ... very moving. I'm rushing to the last chapter now. hmmm....more confusion by the moment :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/23/2005 11:16 am 15 - Looking for Answers Around and round and round we go. Where we stop only the writer knows. {winks} Look forward to the next update. Happy to have two updates today. Oh yeah this is very good, love the way you are weaving this one :P okay...so does spike like, have a split personality sort of deal? that would explain his continued humanity, more so than most vampires...excellent chappie, pet :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/23/2005 11:11 am 14 - Dreams or Memories Excellent usage of the journal entries to really paint the picture of time and progression from William of the past. Excellent. Look forward to more. I see there is another chapter today ... YEAH dual update. Heading for it now. wow...didn't see that coming...hope giles does have some answers :) OK, getting confused but still loving this fic :P ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/22/2005 03:41 pm 13 - Family Another good update. Looks like Collin and William were related. Curious as to how William lived a life after he was "turned". Very curious to see what happens next. Strawberries 07/18/2007 09:37 pm 12 - I Don't Want to Lose You Whahaha I'm really looking forward to see Spike(as Buffy so accurately put it) squirm, some more :P hmmm....wonder what's going on here exactly myself :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/21/2005 10:40 pm 12 - I Don't Want to Lose You Nothing wrong with the chapter. Set up needs to be done at times. You still moved things along either way. It was funny seeing Spike squirm over Collin's mother. I was a bit upset about Buffy's little talk with Spike about not being able to be with him ... after all the pining she did for him ... not it seems like she is just letting go. I look forward to more to see where you go with it and how it is all explained. I'm still in a holding pattern. Doesn't Buffy know that Collin wanted her too? Hard to take advantage of someone who wants that advantage. so very surreal...but excellent :) oh yeah I think I love this fic :P freakin awesome read Is this how the PTB have arranged the Shanshu? WTF is Giles going to test? More story please. I'm a little confused but I'm sure things will reveal themselves as the story progresses. You're just whipping this fic out! good job. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/20/2005 12:22 pm 11 - Hiding Excellent chapter update. You have us all twisting and twisting around trying to figure out what will come next. Look forward to more. Collin talking to Spike in his dreams now ... that added another little puzzle piece. Nice work. Strawberries 07/18/2007 09:18 pm 10 - I'm Here This just keeps getting weirder and weirder... I'm really wondering what explanation you've got for it all! Good fic, like your style :) hmmm...so is collin still there too?? confused, pet..but still enjoying this :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/19/2005 09:13 am 10 - I'm Here Very touching ... curiouser and curiouser as to what is really going on. beautiful buffy spike scene at the end of the . awww...that was so very touching...brought me to tears pet...lovely job :) sue 11/18/2005 04:52 pm 9 - It's Me Loving this and want to solve the mystery as much as Buffy does. Looking forward to the next chappie. Thanks ever so. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/18/2005 01:19 pm 9 - It's Me Very touching and sadly sweet. I think you picked a very key monologue to use for Spike to prove who he was. Nice choice. Look forward to more. Curious to find out just what happened too. Especially since he is wearing Collin's cross and not sizzling. Awww! Happy Spuffy reunion. Well, okay, it was a little sad, but happy sad! I'm with Buffy, I'm wanting to know exactly what's going on. wonderful, thank you. wow!!! wonder what just happened here exactly...off to find out :) sue 11/17/2005 04:38 pm 8 - Demons Curiouser and curiouser. I'm intrigued and looking forward to finding out the answers. Thanks. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/17/2005 12:44 pm 8 - Demons More soon ... please ... quickly!! Can't leave us hanging there. With Collin's death has Spike reemerged? Was Spike hidden in Collin so deeply that only when COllin's life ended was Spike brought back>? so many questions!! Look forward to more. hmmm....very intriguing dream he just had...wonder where this is going :) Oh interesting chapter! Looking forward to more of this one. How's that for a generic review? I'm sorry, my brain is non worky right now, LOL! ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/16/2005 10:39 am 7 - Holding On More intriguing all the time. I wonder what will happen next. Liza 11/14/2008 05:38 pm 6 - Meeting Peaches Loving the intrigue. You might want to fix that typo - spellchecker is probably too well brought up to accept 'bollocks'! Strawberries 07/18/2007 07:17 pm 6 - Meeting Peaches Whaha, the 'Peaches'-comment really can't be a coincidence :P so collin is ... spike given a second chance, after NFA??? hmmm...trying to figure it ou :) I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see what you do next with it. this gets more and more intriguing all the time :) very good read, thank you somehow this is spike....hmm.... OK, I get it. It's a case of we all have doppelgangers out there somewhere. love the ending to the chapter. thanks for the fine read. Strawberries 07/18/2007 06:35 pm 3 - His Face Let's just hope the next chapter won't contain a scene in which she rips his head off while screaming: "he was my lover and he saved the world you scumbag! you should be greatfull if people compare you to my hottie vampire!" *grinning madly at the image* did he lose his memory after NFA?? wondering..hmm... Curioser and curioser. Why the resemblance? so dawn. very good read, thank you. Strawberries 07/18/2007 06:08 pm 2 - Who is that? Ok I'm kinda not sure about the whole memory-loss thing right now... this fic just keeps getting more interesting :) of course they both think he's cute...lol :) Interesting start. Very enjoyable. Strawberries 07/18/2007 05:56 pm 1 - Slayer and Watcher Buffy should really read more Spuffy-fanfiction... since anyone who's done that has the automatic response of: 'oh goodie, that watcher is human-Spike with some sort of memory loss the PTB put on him!', or something of the sort. You do have a creative way of 'introducing' them! A lot of writers tend to stick to the more boring ways for them to re-meet :) wow...that watcher seems ... familiar... ;) lol I love this! Just read it from start to finish and it's beautiful.
-Lisa msberry 11/26/2005 01:08 pm 1 - Slayer and Watcher Really enjoyed this story! Josephina 11/23/2005 12:17 pm 1 - Slayer and Watcher I'm in love with this story. Eagerly awaiting your next update... Very intriguing! I can't wait to see what has really happened. When I first commented, I thought it was a shanshu/amnesia story. Now I'm not so sure. You're keeping me guessing. I'm so glad you are able to update regularly. I often end up waiting to read stories until they are finished because I forget the story line between updates, but you have me chomping at the bit for more. :) Ooooh, and the plot thickens...me likes a lot...rude to ask, but more soon please.... hmmm....interesting so far...like it... | |||
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