Rock, Paper, Scissors. by Ariel Dawn

12/10/2014 01:39 pm
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Hot and hilarious!

06/06/2014 09:21 pm
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I wanna be sedated!  No, who'm I foolin', I wanna be wild!!

Excellent!
03/30/2010 03:20 pm
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09/07/2006 02:36 pm
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lol...very excellent little story here...funny and fun and sexy...great job
Thanks!

B
04/06/2006 10:07 pm
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That was good, sweet and hot. Nicely written to. Really liked it.

Only tiny tiny critism i have, 'Ya' isn't a word. I could deal with it in the speech (although, i prefer 'yeah' or just 'yes') but it was in the narrative as well, and that was really jarring. Yes should be used in the narrative i think.

It was in there right at the beginning and i nearly stopped reading because i thought if someone used that in narrative they would use other slang and non-words and it'd be badly written. I'm glad i read on because this was good, and that little word was the only issue i had. Thought i'd mention it just as something to think about.
Ok, I can understand that, and I respect your right to not like how I write things. I use the word Ya. Ya, it's not exactly 'proper' however, I dislike how 'yeah' is spelt to such an extent that I do not use it, if I can help it. Perhaps it's a flaw, I'm ok with it. Thanks for your opinion, and I'm really glad you liked the fic other than that word.

Oracleholly
12/25/2005 03:30 am
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What a great Christmas prezzie for BTL! Excellent ... I wanna play Rock, Paper, Scissors so Spike can come to my house too. *pouts*
hmmm, don't we all...can I have Spike wrapped up and under my tree?

12/24/2005 01:39 am
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Great fic, but I still think Buffy needs a spanking
lol wulfie you always think Buffy needs a spanking!

~*~Tasha~*~
12/21/2005 05:42 am
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Loved this one. Always a treat to read your stories!!
Thanks Tasha! *hugs fellow misfit*

vladt
12/18/2005 03:01 pm
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what a lovely christmas present!
Thanks

kat
12/17/2005 02:25 am
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet lol love holiday stories
Glad you like!

12/17/2005 12:37 am
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Teeheehee!! Nice snuggly love making and then RAMONES!! Fun story; thank you for sharing BTL's present with us.
Glad you like!

ComedyofErrors
12/16/2005 11:30 pm
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Very sweet; love the finale.
Thanks!

Lou
12/16/2005 09:27 pm
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I just love a good dose of the old festive feelings!
Glad you like!

12/16/2005 08:55 pm
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Gorgeous - nice and christmassy
Thanks

12/16/2005 08:38 pm
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Hee, great story. Loved the ending!
Thanks!

idk5743228
12/16/2005 10:43 am
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What a way to spend a cold, snowy christmas evening. Do you think I could get Spike delivered? Merry Christmas, LOL Isabella
lol, Can I have Spike delivered too?

12/16/2005 09:15 am
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Oh, I just had to read it again. It was good. *sigh* And you put it under porn with some plot! *snerk*
It doens't have 'some' plot? I'll argue it has at least 1/4 of a plot...that's still some

12/16/2005 08:19 am
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LMAO, poor Spike, Poor Joyce, Evil Buffy, she needs a spanking :->
You always think that Buffy needs a spanking wulfie!