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Where Do I Stand? by Thianna No!! You can't just end it here! You haven't even gotten to 1997 yet. It was really really good. I really do love this story. Stella 11/27/2006 06:47 am 27 - Carnival in Town Very interesting story. So many different connections being made. I'm definitely intrigued to see where you take this. I hope you will update again soon. :) Emilee 07/12/2006 02:56 pm 27 - Carnival in Town I was hesitant about reading this at first, but WOW! This is an amazing read. The first person veiwpoint is refreshing, and I like that it's the POV of a souless demon. The plot is unique and the story is well written. I actually care about the characters. I can't wait for the next addition. awwwwwwwww baby ripper enjoyed nine year old giles. very good update to a fascinating tale. thank you. This story gets more and more intriguing as we get closer to our time. I hope meeting Giles helps them later on down the road. More story please. that early glimpse of giles was great...and the hooded man is just creepy..guess he's supposed to be though, eh? another great update, can't wait for more :) great read. and you let spike change the subject "... to cleanse ... to change." your as good at change the subject as spike. thanks for the fun read. awww..how very sweet...and also very hot :P ... wonder how spike could do what he did to the other vamp? excellent update :) Gawd, Spike is ALWAYS in the friggin mood sirc 06/11/2006 08:13 pm 25 - A Night of Ironies great chapter Thanks vladt 06/02/2006 09:02 pm 25 - A Night of Ironies great chapter, thanks for thefine read. Thank you hotlipedjen 06/01/2006 01:26 pm 25 - A Night of Ironies Great story! Am looking forward to more. More to come soon Spike is so whipped.... Spike is so whipped.... Spike is so whipped.... Spike is so whipped.... Spike is so whipped.... Spike is so whipped.... whoa...that is kinda ironic at the end there...enjoyed this chapter...intrigued by the markings and all..can't wait for more :) thanks vladt 06/02/2006 09:02 pm 24 – Cloudy Future good update, great way to end a chapter. thanks for the read. vladt 06/02/2006 06:58 pm 24 – Cloudy Future good update, great way to end a chapter. thanks for the read. SpaceLord 05/21/2006 09:23 am 24 – Cloudy Future I don't know...haven't they heard that power corupts....this can't be good :) Yup ... it's all a mystery right now what's going on... action to come in the next chapter fascinating..can't wait to see what it all means :) Thank you. vladt 05/21/2006 10:49 pm 23 - On the Move very good update, not that she told them much about the marks. love the tale, thanks for the read. Thanks for reading. very very interesting....love buffy and spike sparring, always.. :) can't wait for your next update :) Thank you so much for all the reviews. Elizabeth passing as a man is a fun idea. Nice they had a little time out from being chased around by the Order. Thanks for the review vladt 05/11/2006 01:33 am 23 - On the Move good update, but really, really need to know about the marks and the vessel. thanks for the great read. Thanks for reading... yeah, I know it's all mysterious right now hmmmm...this is getting more and more fascinating... vladt 05/01/2006 01:32 am 22 - Sunnydale looking forward to the forging process. thanks for the great read. Thank you for reading. Nice work. This story is going to places I never thought of and I can't wait to get there. I love Spike's protectivness of Elizabeth. Keep it coming! Thanks and more stuff to come. SpaceLord 04/30/2006 11:29 am 22 - Sunnydale Well now things are getting more interesting for sure. Can't wait to see what you have planned. Thanks. Hope you'll like it. Hey hey, whats all that MEAN? *grins* It means they are important and they have a destiny Who or what is capturing Spike and giving him cryptic messages? Are he and Elizabeth meant to be champions for the PTB? More story please. The cloaked figure will come in from time to time and as for being champions, hard to tell right now. Thanks for reading. so now they're on their own....i'm glad, the others were getting to be a bit much to bear...excellent chapter, goin on to the next now ;) vladt 04/19/2006 07:37 am 21 - Had to Do love the update. why do i anticipate things to be much more difficult for spike? thanks for the fine read. Because I'm an evil author and I do bad things to Spike... I'm glad he found her but I fear he will wake up to a big pile of dust because Darla or one of the other "family" members will stake her in her sleep. Well they'll be leaving the family now. no, don't do it, spike!!! find her, take her, and get as far away as you can!!! Nice flow. I'm very anxious to read the next chapter - very very evil cliffhanger... Thanks.. and thanks to you for helping me out. vladt 04/10/2006 01:04 am 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long very good read. but can't believe spike will break the claim. thanks for the enjoyable read. Thank you. rayan 04/10/2006 12:41 am 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo........dont spike doooont....hehe anyway great chapter Thank you. Brittany 04/09/2006 07:59 pm 20 - A Good Night, But For How Long NOOO he said he would never leave her!!!!!!!!!! I know... just trust Spike. Oh dear! What does he have to do? What has to happen to break a mating claim? More story please. Thank you. Hope you'll like the next chapter. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just wait and see. interesting twist on spike's first slayer kill...can't wait to see where this goes from here ;) vladt 03/29/2006 11:23 pm 19 - A First fine chapter. thanks for the read. Thank you. rayan 03/29/2006 06:07 pm 19 - A First good chapter...still loving this story Thank you. Interesting take on the first Slayer kill. I hope Elizabeth finds a way to live with this curse. More story please. Thank you. Well with Spike's help she'll try to find her purpose in the world. Ohhhh, yay, happy spuffyness again ^_^ will try for more later on. china, huh?? hmm...another slayer sighting, perhaps? :) so spike is gradually making concessions for her, because of her soul...getting better and better :) Are Spike and Sera on their way to Spike's firs Slayer kill? BTW, you did not inform us who hired this amateur spell caster to curse Sera. More story please. ^_^ Well Sera's curse was because of the PTB. vladt 03/21/2006 10:17 pm 18 - A Secret nothing ever goes easily for spike. if he doesn't muck it up, someone does it for him. good update. thanks Thanks. Yup, poor Spike and this is just the beginning... rayan 03/21/2006 06:07 pm 18 - A Secret good chapter..i like the whole idea of spike doing anything for her even without his soul....looks like the adventure is just about to start kiddies ....china here we come....anyway god job....keep em comin´ Thank you. Yup, Spike loves her that much, though we'll see how he'll be able to take. Brittany 03/21/2006 12:25 pm 18 - A Secret AWW TEAR JERKER MUCH!?!?!?! i absolutly LOVE this story!!!! i feel so bad for spike! Thank you so much. I'm glad that you're liking this story so far. Thanks for the review. SpaceLord 03/21/2006 09:54 am 18 - A Secret Yay going to china :) =^_^= yay! lots of yummy chinese food! LMAO LOL... that's one way to look at it. You made my day with this review. wow....so she's got her soul back...this should make things a whole lot more interesting...but now they really need to get far away from the others or it could get really bad rayan 03/17/2006 07:59 pm 17 - Open Up bloody genius ...thats your name...real good story...how will the blonde couple make it?..and what does faith have in store for them...and who cursed the lovely sera??? all questions itching to be answered....and that you will...wont you!....good to know thank a bunch....*giggles* *blushes* Thank you. Nice to know readers like you are liking this story. Our blonde couple will be going through a lot in the upcoming chapters vladt 03/14/2006 09:07 pm 17 - Open Up fine read. and an excellent question at the last. who? angel? thanks for the read. Thank you. Did the Gypsy curse miss Angelus and hit Sera instead? More story please. Sera being cursed with a soul was originally supposed to be because of the gypsies.. but now it's because of someone else. SpaceLord 03/14/2006 10:30 am 17 - Open Up Hmm so who stuck a soul in her? Let's just say, it was a somewhat unwilling party. darla's motives may be selfish, but i love her in this chapter....so glad she helped them...poor spike.... :( SpaceLord 03/07/2006 09:27 am 16 - Painting Hmm are we going to find out what the PTB's want with them? It was stated in the summary about that so I'm just wondering when that will come into play and how. Nice chapter can't wait to read more. Thanks. the next chapter should reveal what the PTB will have in mind, though things might be cryptic in their eyes. vladt 03/07/2006 07:22 am 16 - Painting dru bringing darla to spike's aid? what a twist. i'm certain the reason will not be pleasant for spike. great read, thanks Thanks. As for the reason... actually it won't be that bad for Spike. Hard to imagine that Spike and Sera were saved by Darla. Drusilla is still nuts and no help to anybody at all. More story please. Yeah, Darla is a bit maternal here... though there is something that's driving her to be protective of Spike and Sera ooohhhh grrrrr, i hope Angelus comes to a very painful end!! Haven't thought about it yet, but I'll try to make it fitting... I hope. good for spike!!! fighting him off!! i have a feeling that's not the last of him, but i love spike's defensiveness of his mate! great chapter :) Why didn't they dust the poofter??? Because I unfortunately need the poofter for something else... Oh dear. What horrible punishment will the Poofter dream up to torture Sera and Spike? Well might have to disappoint you. I want to concentrate on the spuffy so we'll be leaving Angelus for now. vladt 03/03/2006 05:57 am 15 - My Angel Mine good read. will angelus really leave it there? enjoyed the update. thanks Thanks. Well I guess Angelus should make more of an appearance with the grr argh... but I want to concentrate on the spuffy. oh no....is angelus gonna hurt sera? i need to read more!! you actually had me feeling quite sorry for dru there...but angelus is getting worse and worse great chapter :) Hmmmm. Was the girl merely a distraction while Angelus and whoever else do what they had in mind for Sera? More story please. ^_^ All I'll say right now is that the girl is pretty significant. love the update. I so can't wait to find out more. And what a treat to see them with claim marks directly over Dru's. Thanks. Yup... wanted Spike and Sera to belong to each other completely. SpaceLord 02/28/2006 10:59 am 14 - We Belong Nice chapter. An evil cliffy too Thanks. Just a little evil cliffy. Who cares if Dru is being her usual pissy self? And death to Angelus! lol ^_^ I agree 100% vladt 02/28/2006 04:50 am 14 - We Belong so angelus is plotting! great update. thanks Thanks. just a tiny angelus thing. that was an awesome claiming scene...very well done...good on sera for getting him to do it ;) great chapter :) vladt 02/21/2006 10:15 pm 13 - Why Haven't You? good mating claim scene, spike needs it. thanks for the fine read. Thanks. yup.. Spike deserves every single kiss and caress. Hmmmm. Spike has a mate. What is Darla up to with the Master? Will they take Sera away from Spike? More story please. Yup.. about time Spike got claimed what he knew was his... the master's got something up his sleeve...i have a feeling that spike's anger over sera is gonna come back to haunt him...more story now :) vladt 02/17/2006 03:46 am 12 - Meeting spike's being astute as ever. good update. thanks Oooo what going to happen? i love the dynamic between those two, very sweet for two evil beings...lol...can't wait to see what happens when spike meets the slayer :) Dammit Darla! lol yeah.. Darla just loves to follow the Master around. Hmmmm. A slayer for Spike so soon? More story please. Hehe... actually.. well... don't want to reveal anything yet. angelus is gonna cause a whole lot more trouble than that, isn't he? i love the sensuality between sera and spike....again, lovely chapter :) Nice to see Spike and Sera having fun together when they can. oooo la la Verda 07/08/2006 08:02 am 9 - Dance I don't know why but I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop. Good job, great chapter. oh i hope spike doesn't pay for the "insult" that angelus seems to be taking this as...lovely whimsical sort of chapter...in a horrific sort of way...lol... thanx for writing :) I so wonder what will happen next. I am finding myself always looking at Dru's actions to see if I can figure out what she has forseen. Great update. Love Spike and Sera Thanks. I'm glad that you're liking Spike and Sera and I hope you'll keep on enjoying the fic. Heeheehee!! Pissing off Angel is always good! Yup... always good. Verda 07/08/2006 07:48 am 8 - The Party Goes On Does Angelus only feed on the elite and everyone else gets servants? Darla's the head of the clan not him, the wanker. Another great chapter. im absolutely aghast..i mean..i know spike was evil, but...man...that was harsh...fascinated though, and reading on :) Pretty bloody. How will Spike keep Sera from Angelus and Darla and their perversions? Sera is shaping up to be quite a vampire, thankfully she listens to Spike more than the other members of their family. Can we dust Angel and the wenches yet? Verda 07/08/2006 07:34 am 7 - The Party That chapter answered a few questions. Thank you for the wonderful read. chilling and disturbing and fascinating all at once...excellent chapter :) Verda 07/08/2006 07:19 am 6 - Winged Angel I guess Angelus, Darla, and Dru are a kinder, gentler group in this story, I keep expecting them to start bitting and riping at her as she would be shared among them. I like the peace between them, it's nice for a change. good chappie. this is beautifully written, and fascinating to think of buffy in this way...very very good story, though i am just now picking it up again after a long break :) on to the next chapter :) HUM... Interesting chapter. They are all an interesting bunch of ppl. can't wiat to read more. I hope Elizabeth works out for Spike. I'm afraid that her demented sire will make her want Angelus. He is such a ponce *sticks out tongue* Verda 07/08/2006 06:58 am 5 - Always Surprised they didn't torture her, but I guess that's more of Angelus' thing. Good chapter. very good still, very enthralling, i can't wait to see how the family dynamic will change now with Elizabeth in the mix... loving your story so much :) Thank you. I'm glad you're liking this story even though it's in Spike first POV. Ewwww, Dru kisses *gags* Verda 07/08/2006 06:47 am 4 - Presents To bad that he didn't turn her himself, I guess he'll just have to claim her instead...oooh I hope he does, just love a good claim. Another good chapter. oh no!!! I was hoping he would be the one to turn her but maybe it's better this way...crazy Dru, mucking things up!! Well, now you've got me well and truly hooked and i'm on to read more! that's so sweet of dru...in a bizarre twisted way of course lol. I hope Dru and Darla get what is coming to them. And why is Elizabeth afraid to meet Spike's eyes? stake dru, stake darla!!!! eeeee!! Verda 07/08/2006 06:34 am 3 - Gentleman So Elizabeth wanted him as well and knows he is something else, something other than human? Horny Elizabeth. Good chapter. love that last line...perfect...and i love how he seems to be having trouble taking what he wanted, at least in the way that he intended originally...i'm completely intrigued and drawn into this story and moving on to the next chapter now :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/18/2006 04:20 pm 3 - Gentleman Oooooo loved that update. Excellent work. I so look forward to more and more and more. {Grins} LoL, loved the last line!! Verda 07/08/2006 06:18 am 2 - Comfort If Spike takes Elizebeth, does he has to share her as well? Very good chapter. i like how Spike was with Darla, not letting her intimidate him... but I have a bad feeling about Angelus, he didn't get back at Spike just then, so he's gonna try to use the girl Spike wants against him...on to next update now :) still great :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/03/2006 12:59 pm 2 - Comfort Definitely a fic worth continuing. I look forward to the udpates. can we dust Angel again? *nods* and Dru for good measure.... and Darla just cause she has an annoying voice *nods again* Verda 07/08/2006 06:08 am 1 - My Hope Very beautifully written story. Can't wait to see what style of writing you chose, because writing in the first is very hard to write. Enjoying it very much. very good story so far...you make the reader feel Spike's desperate need for Dru, it almost hurts to read it...very engaging, well-written...like this very much :) SpaceLord 01/31/2006 09:58 am 1 - My Hope Well nice start but I think I prefer a third person perspective. margaret 01/04/2006 02:18 am 1 - My Hope like how the story is starting out, pov is fine interesting actually...please write more and it would be great if "elizabeth " could be sired by spike rather than any of the others(imho) thanks ~*~Tasha~*~ 12/26/2005 08:27 am 1 - My Hope In answer to your POV question ... either way is fine. You're doing a pretty good job of writing from Spike's POV. {Smiles} It gives the story a particular slant and air about it that is nice. Writing third person is often much easier to write, but you can still get things in there about how a character feels etc. So, either way is good. Always up to the writer of what they want to do or accomplish with the fic.
The story itself is awesome. I love it. This is already shaping up to be a very interesting one. I look forward to more chapters. vladt 12/24/2005 11:43 am 1 - My Hope love the chapter. spike pov very interesting, and difficult for the writer; third person easier to lead the reader to the mindset you want them to have. from reading other of your works, i know pov doesn't matter, this will be a well written, enjoyable fic. thanks for writting. P.S. this is probably the longest review you will ever receive from me. thanks again Thanks for the review. I know it might be a little difficult but I hope I'll be able to capture Spike's thoughts well. idk5743228 12/24/2005 12:27 am 1 - My Hope I love the beginning. I think third person does open the story to more possibilities. However, anyway you write it is going to be great. I can't wait to see where you take it. I'm lazy and third person is easier to write (at least for me) so I'm going to have to say whatever is easiest for you! I don't mind the Spike POV. ^.^ Can't wait to read more. | |||
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