The Bottom Line by Dirktavian

Cate
08/22/2008 02:57 pm
Three- I'm drunk.....         
I am imensley interested in this fic... and that's strange because I'm not usually into the heavy smutty fics... however to be fair I can't really call this smut, because the way you write the love scenes seems brilliantly and beautifully written; tender and so sweet. I would love to read more when you have time to update!
Hello!  Sorry this is so late, but I was randomly checking in on what Spuffy websites were still up.  Saw the new feedback, and ~ WOW!  Thank you for your kind words and encouragement.  I like to think of this as "soft-core" smut...    More like a "bodice-ripper," though I never read those types of books~ only that kind of fanfic.  I'll see if I can work on another chapter for you. 

03/11/2007 07:36 pm
Three- I'm drunk.....         
loved "maybe later." should have gone that way. wonderful read, than you.

JO
03/10/2007 05:33 pm
Three- I'm drunk.....         
I JUST READ ALL 3 CHAPTERS AND LOVED IT . IF IT WILL INSPIRE YOUR MUSE AND GET YOU TO WRITE MORE I;LL REVIEW EVERYTIME, PROMISE. I'LL BE LOOKING FOR YOU.

03/10/2007 01:59 pm
Three- I'm drunk.....         
Wasn't that a nice twist to "Life Serial." That could of easily went that way. They had one night together to act like a normal couple and she had to get sick, hey, it's a Buffy day and Spike doesn't get many breaks. Great work. Hope you can keep updating. Thanks again for sharing your fic. I'm really enjoying it.

Cate
08/22/2008 02:47 pm
Two- Trust me?         

That was a perfect chapter. You chose the absolute perfect thing for Buffy to do for Spike. I love how you described their intimacy, and how clearly that it was a rarity. I also loved how intense you made Spike, with his hands trembling from the sheer implications of Buffy's trust. Beautiful.

03/10/2007 01:37 pm
Two- Trust me?         
Those brief moments of happiness to enjoy, William must be thrilled. Even out of guilt, he'll take whatever crumb she's willing to give. Hate that she still can't bring herself to apologize but I guess second best will have to do. Wonderful chapter, thanks.

08/07/2006 10:28 pm
Two- Trust me?         
very good read, thank you

05/26/2006 07:08 am
Two- Trust me?         
very, very sexy... like this fic very much

~*~Tasha~*~
01/06/2006 05:49 am
Two- Trust me?         
nice ending. Wish she would have told Spike she wanted to stay. Didn't she see that he was only giving her the clothes to keep her from being all mean with how she normally did it? Poor Spike. Good story. It isn't marked as complete even though you have it listed as fin at the end. To mark is complete just go into your account click on edit/delete stories and then click on the completed NO area. It should then reset it to yes. {Smiles} Look forward to seeing what else your mind comes up with for stories.
Tasha-- Thanks for reading and leaving feedback. Trust me, Buffy makes me want to go "UGH!" all the time, but I felt I had to write her actions this way to stay true to the story. Thanks for the hint about marking the story completed!

Cate
08/22/2008 02:31 pm
One- I'll Follow You         
Aww that was so sweet. It is so lovely to see a season six Buffy being so tender with Spike... I just want to reiterate... awww

03/10/2007 07:50 pm
One- I'll Follow You         
awww..this is kinda sweet...hope she can make it up to him, loving this so far

03/10/2007 01:09 pm
One- I'll Follow You         
If you wanted for them to have makeup sex, where she was doing the groveling for a change, this is about as perfect of a place to start. Great beginning. Nicely done. Looking forward to seeing her make up to him for a change. Now yo get caught up. Thanks for sharing your first fic with us.

08/07/2006 10:19 pm
One- I'll Follow You         
excellent read, thank you. great start to her silent apology.

05/26/2006 07:06 am
One- I'll Follow You         
how very searing hot this story was!!! loved it! beautiful and tender...and incredibly sexy! off to read more

Syd
01/13/2006 10:36 am
One- I'll Follow You         
I just wanted to say I really enjoyed your story. Great work!

~*~Tasha~*~
01/06/2006 05:30 am
One- I'll Follow You         
Like the chapter. I just wish that Buffy would really apologize. She's doing so in her own way, but saying the words for her would have even more of an effect on Spike because she doesn't use words. Good work.