Brilliant idea so far and I hope there is more soon as I am enjoying reading this story and what will happen next with Riley?

Very good!   Would really like to read the final chapter(s).   I hope you will be able to post the rest of it here, but if not, PLEASE email me the site where I can read it.

THANK YOU for sharing your talent with the rest of us!

How can you just leave it there! I'm a huge fan. Read all your stories and am holding out hope that you will update. Email me if you do!!!! Boolka06@gmail.com

i love your this story a lot!
can u pls. finish it up though i know its been three years
i wanted to know how things are goin to be between spike and buffy in the end.
this is the best AR i've read!!!

this is fabulous, as I'm sure you've been told. I hope you plan to finish it.

sincerely blue

Hey! Brilliant story! lovin it, when is the next chapter out?

I have spent 6 hours reading this whole story. It is great! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Ok can you finish please I'm still hanging here...Its really good I hope you can update it soon!

plyz do write some mre!!!

this is really good! Are you ever planning on finishing it?

That was great!

Excellent story, something differant too Love it Please update soon

excellant story this is absolutly enthralling! I simply adore it - the traitors, the double crossing, the players, talk about fascinating work!

Wood huh! Forgot about him. How could Spike not sense The First in Buffy? or Illyria should have in both Shadow and the slayer? Hope you can update before your vacation, if not have a safe trip. Excellent chapter.

please get it up:) I have to know whether Spike can save Buffy:)!!!

Weee kill Riley and then bring down the US president and all that....you gotta end his terror rain :)

happy 4th, good read and evil cliffie. thanks for both.

So happy to see this chapter up. I can't wait to see what happens; you keep the suspense high without letting it thin through over-exertion.

Oh, yesss, an update, a big update! Congratulations on the new job, and good luck!

I loved it, I can't wait to finally be able to read the whole story. Its so intense, I can't wait to see what happens and if Dawn and Connor show up. Happy 4th and hope you have a good trip

wow incrediable - I am sorry to see Rupert die, but it made sense. Very sad but captivating chapter - this is really good!

So many questions in this near heart-pounding tale. Just a little humor when Spike asked Angel where Myoko put her sword. What Shadow didn't figure on was Spike and his amazing love for her, she's not totally made of stone anymore. Another amazing chapter.

I found this first on the BS diaries site and loved it. I'm soo glad i found it here and that you are still writing it! Can't wait to see how your going to finish this. Is Shadow gonna get his ass kicked by Buffy? Please!?

Fantastic cliffhanger. Ooohhhh...more please!

I found your story via the Spuffy Awards and read it straight through. Quite the nail-biter you have going.

I really think you are doing an excellent job of portraying the characters as fully developed three dimensional "people" which is so often lacking in many stories. You have managed to avoid the trap of characters that have one emotion/reaction and then beat it to death. Your characters are well-rounded and have more depth than that.

And because your characterization is sooo good, your story is able to maintain a plot that is complicated, multi-dimensional, and exciting. Actions and reactions are unknown quantities and not merely cliches but they also feel right.

Thanks for your efforts in sharing this great story with me.

Liz

fantastic update. enjoy that will, blue and spike knew at the same time. saves so many arguments. thanks for the wonderful read.

oh wow things are heating up now! *squees and bounces*

Awesome update Kyra! I love how the team is starting to gel together.

Well, at least no one has to spend a lot of time convincing the rest of the group. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Now the fight is on....this should be good :)

excellant story I really am enjoying this can't wait for more!

OMG! What are they going to do now with out Giles, and Buffy... one more preson to leave her, just when Spike was getting close again. That was really hard to take *sniff*. Still an excellent chapter

wonderful read. i was 90% sure of helena choice, but pixie surprised me. thanks for the fantastic read.

Caught up in the action! Interesting and original plot. So many twists. Very enjoyable despite worrying about the various characters difficulties. Looking forward to more updates!

Thanks for the update. I'm wondering if the blood that got on Willow will cause any changes in her? I'm looking forward to reading more.

Wonderful tale. You've done a terrific job of creating original characters that I'm actually interested in and weaving them into the Buffyverse. Intricate, intriguing and involving plot. Damn good storytelling. Thank you. Am looking forward to what is yet to come.

Brilliant plot!

I love it. The characters you have created and the BtVS regulars are great!

Grammatical errors aside, your storytelling is strong and brings the scenes to life you feel like it's taking place on the telly.

Wow. I just found this story today and... wow.

I was so happy to see an update. I still absolutely love this story. Can't wait to read more.

Thanks for the update. I had to go back and read from the beginning because I seem to have missed a number of new chapters and could not remember where I left off. I hope you give us more soon. Congrats on the nominations.

Wow! What an action packed, lots of stuff happening chapter!!!! Excellent! I'm glad that Pixie and Helena decided to change their loyalties; that Spike was able to get to Buffy for a bit and prevent her from getting to the coffin just yet. I'm happy that Dawn was rescued.

Again I reiterate -- EXCELLENT!!!

excellant story sweetie this is really good!

I can't believe Jason is being that evil and that Buffy knows a bit what they are up to. Shakes head - I hope she gets everything figured out and fixed!

This story's got me gobsmacked. Your writing and your characters are amazing, not since "Lost in Time" by Spikeskat or "Oringins" by Niamh, has left me nearly breathless with it's raw emotion and powerful characters. Love how almost each member of the teams, for either side, has his own and perhaps different agenda. Thank you for this amazing story.

Wowsers! I started reading this story on my own, and my husband wanted to know what I was so involved in. Well, I caught him up to where I was by just telling him, and then read the story from then on. I didn't know that it was unfinished at that point, so imagine our shock when it just stopped as things were really starting to rock again.

Please, please, PLEASE post us a little something soon?!?! My hubby hounds me at least once a week to see if there's been a new post, to which I get to tell him that there's been nothing new in 2 months. He's crushed, and I'm totally anxious to find out what happens next!

So, in case you didn't catch it, this tale is TOTALLY AWESOME! Keep up the fabulous, wonderful writing! And please give us a little something to get us going again...

Thanks!

Woohoo! I read this all in one sitting. It's a good story. I need more soon.

No problem sweetie, the story deserves the nomination.

This chapter was fabulous. I loved How Buffy stood up to Shadow - it's about time we saw that side of her. I understand Angel's frustrations because he really is more alone now, but this isn't about him and he needs to realise that.

The bit between Illyria and Spike was awesome as well. She's less robotic in speech and mannerisms and is becoming more... humane.

As for the end, poor Dawn!

Can't wait for more.

Wow! I enjoyed the interaction between Spike & Illyria; Illyria showing much more human emotions in the time she's spent on this plane. Also, I'm intrigued by Pixie and the Queen, and how Pixie's been affected by being around humans. Oz and the monks are a welcome addition. I like that Buffy has a clue about Shadow & his connection to the First Evil. I just hope that she snaps out of it before all this goes down.

This is a great story, please update soon!

oh poor Dawnie, that Jason guy really is a prat but maybe he'll turn out ok. so who's gonna die? one of those M girls? whatever happened to Emma? is she gonna die?loved Giles' line"destroying the world for love, how poetic"
really hoping for a spuffy ending *crosses fingers*. write more soon

thanks for the update. love the tale.

I was so happy to see your update! I love the new and improved Spike and can't wait until he goes aginst Buffy and the enemy. Poor Angel, it's so sad that he feels alone. I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter.

It's so good to finally see an update to this story. I had to re-read the whole thing to get here. I hope new, blue Spike can get through to Buffy before the Shadow tries to turn her into the Thunder Dragon. More story soon please.

Great story! I can't wait to see what Spike has truly become and what Buffy really knows! Please update soon!

Great to see an update to this story, it sure is entertaining.

oh i wonder what happened - fantastic story so far this is really realy good i keep racing to the next chapter!

Love these dream sequences. They're so raw and powerful. What will Illyria's blood do to him, can't wait to find out. Just love this story.

wheels within wheels. wonderful update. masterful telling of a tale. thanks.

I started following this story back at BSC last year. I am so glad to see it here. I don't see a lot of reviews, maybe it's the dark content, but I sincerely hope you will continue on with it. It is a very powerful story, and you will always have at least one review, from me.

Frantically searching for more chapters... why aren't there anymore chapters?... *pouts* will there be more chapters soon...? please???

Love it, not as dark as promised tho.....well that's my personal opinion anyway :)

This is one of my faves, brilliant really love it.

ahhh! amazing! can't wait for more of this!

oh that is so sad - poor buffy no wonder she locked away all her emotions - to have to remember that! *pets buffy*

Oooooh so good. This is so great, now how is Spike going to get through to her? He was so close, love this story. Brilliant!

this is a really good read. thanks

ok ur Hindu mythology is so messed up that it cannot be anything other than disrespectful, it's like saying Jesus never died on the cross or something. Shiv and Parvati have two sons- Ganesh and Kartik, both are Gods. Pralad was a little boy and his father was killed by an incarnation of Vishnu many years ago. Infact Vishnu had taken that particular inarnation for the sole purpose of killing Hirakashyap. By sugesting that Pralad's dad is still alive u r saying that a God failed to do his duty and secondly by having spike do that job u are giving him that statusof a god. Hindu mythology is very close knit and the myths have ptretty much a definite begining and ending. Such mythology can not be easily manipulated. Here u have given ur story flaws. u'll hate me for saying all this but i had to point this out cos i luv ur story and these flaws are kind of taking away the magic of it. contact me at: crazy-insane-girl@hotmail.com
if want a clear up or something cos ur manipulations of hindu mythology are like someone saying that Jesus never died on the cross and that in 2011 Spike had to do it.

powerful dream! I really enjoyed this story! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next - i love that buffy is the warrior of stone and everything that is going on

Oz? Wow, and once Conner comes, Wow, Everyone will be here, just not Harmony,OK? Now what's with Giles? Cancer I guess. Boy I hate that, with everything else, everyone around them is out to do them harm. Is Spike having a slayers dream? It sure seems so, really freaky. This story is so complexed on so many levels, It's marvelous. Thanks for the amazing read.

this is disorientating, wonderfully so. great read thanks

wow powerful story! This is incredably well done sweetie!

Wow! can't wait to see how you bring them together again. Wonder what Raven is going to say when she see the bite mark on him. That's a fine kettle of fish they're in and it's about to be put on the stove. Awesome story.

awesome fic. glad it's back. thanks for the great read.

OHhhh sweet story this is really good! I am enjoying this immensely and loving the chapter. I love the emails - perfect!

Geez, I'm almost speechless. Wow, That was great. Spike with
Raven, hate it of course. God, Buffy, What is she now? Really like having the Scoobies together again, and Riley with that neutralizing a third of them, kidnap two more, Holy Crap, they have to fight more then W&H, the First Evil and Thunder Dragon. If I didn't know better, I'd think it was Tuesday! Fabulous read!

well begun is half done. like it so far. and by the way Kathmandu is in Nepal not Bhutan.

Woo Woot! So happy to see you putting this fic up over here. Going to have to read it all over again! (And nudge even more for updates.) ::grins::

It's wonderful to see your update. This is one of my favorite stories.

Great to see you back. I don't know if I've read you here on the Bloodshedverse (Can't remember) but I know that whichever site I'm at if I see your name on the story, I read it. Good to see this and Legacy back. THanks for writing.