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Dark Paladin by Thianna No! You can't let it end like this! It was really good too. Loved how you had Buffy and Spike get together. Avalon 02/25/2007 05:00 pm 21 - Not the End but the Beginning I'm lovin' this story. Poor Spike!! More soon, please?? Araedhel 11/17/2006 01:12 am 21 - Not the End but the Beginning I NEED AN UPDATE!!! I love this story!!! I need more! I'm addicted. fantastic read, thank you. Stella 11/12/2006 08:45 pm 21 - Not the End but the Beginning WOW! Very moving! Can't wait to see where you take this after this heart-breaking chapter. This is an amazing story...such an ingenius idea. :) Emilee 11/12/2006 04:53 pm 21 - Not the End but the Beginning Oh, I'm actually crying. That was so sad. Will you bring Buffy back? What's going to happen now? Can't wait for the next update. I feel so bad for Spike. now post the chapter with me in it, lol, i gotta make spike feel better sirc 11/12/2006 08:03 am 21 - Not the End but the Beginning well done :) fallen_angel 11/12/2006 07:11 am 21 - Not the End but the Beginning I didn't see that coming! Update soon please. Cas 11/11/2006 11:17 pm 21 - Not the End but the Beginning Glad you are back to posting this story - its been quite a while, but then I am not one to talk LOL! But a lot happens in this chapter and it seems like you are rushing. I can't imagine where it goes from here. Ewww... someone loving Angel... that's just not right! *gags* vladt 07/24/2006 03:25 am 20 - What Now? great update. thanks for the read. i just *knew* if the tale was long enough angelus would show. thanks again OMG. Is the mysterious female the lover that Angelus drained? Did another vamp turn her? More story soon please. Who's the girl? update soon please vladt 06/08/2006 05:22 am 19 - If I Pass On very sadand beautiful chapter. isuppose the pretty brunette with the devilish grin means trouble. thanks for the great read. Thank you for the review... yup she's trouble who is it!?!? and omg that chapter made me cry so much!!! Hehe.. you'll find out soon enough I like Niko too! vladt 05/27/2006 02:58 am 18 - Claimed Fully excellent chapter. thanks for the fine read. Thank you. SpaceLord 05/26/2006 06:41 am 18 - Claimed Fully Oh now they've done the dirty....I guess there will be a lot of smut in the upcoming chapters :) Well hmm.. we'll see Now kill her and bring in Marie, muhahahahahahahaha lol... just wait patiently... *hands you a Spike plushie* here you go for now. LOL. Spike's simply the best. Ilike Merrick better than Giles sirc 05/19/2006 06:02 pm 17 - What I Asked Him to Do great chapter Thank you I hope Merrick lets Spike and Buffy stay together and that he doesn't tell the Wankers' Council. More story please. Merrick does care about Buffy a lot. vladt 05/18/2006 03:55 am 17 - What I Asked Him to Do very good read. you obviously did not pattern merrick after giles. thanks for the enjoyable read. Thanks.. yup, tried to pattern Merrick as to how I saw him in the movie. Hurry with the sparie, post a bunch of chapters at once. I want to see Marie!! Hehe.. sparie will come soon vladt 05/06/2006 02:31 am 16 – Incomplete or Complete wonderful update to a great tale. why do i believe the next few chapters will not be pleasant for the slayer and spike? love the tale! thanks Uhm.. you might be surprised... ^_^ thanks for following this story. pretty_in_fangs 05/05/2006 02:27 pm 16 – Incomplete or Complete YAY! Complete! Thanks.. yup they are together now. now what will mr. brood and mr. guy frm council of wankers do? Next chapter will show how they will react She had a wonderous vision quest. It seems that the previous slayers approved of Spike and the claiming. More story please. Thank you. SpaceLord 05/05/2006 09:37 am 16 – Incomplete or Complete Now the shit will hit the fan for sure. Yup... though I think you'll like the next chapter. AHHHHHH! YAY!! Yup.. goodie they're finally claimed and closer to Sparie.. we're getting there... Of course updates are loved, as is this story. Thank you so much. *yeeeeeh sunnydale* well first of all love the chapter title and second love the chapterespeciaaly the dancing in and out of mystical cirlcles part. can do without Giles but Will ans Xand would be nice to have. Thank you. No Giles, but have Willow somewhere in there.. ^_^ SpaceLord 04/26/2006 09:13 am 15 - You Were a What? Nice to see an update to this story. I guess that there will be no Giles in this story. Will there be any scoobies at all? Nope.. sorry no Giles... as for Scoobies, right now all I have is Willow Then why the hell does he stick around? Why don't they start a coup? Lesser of two evils I guess... that or I think he feels guilty about Helena. lol they're the tools that shape america.. lol hehe great update!! Thank you Kat 04/17/2006 08:01 pm 14 - Yours oh nice story. I really really like it alot Thank you. I'm glad you like it. fallen_angel 04/16/2006 12:15 pm 14 - Yours let's go to sunnydale! no seriously, i wanna see Will and Xand's reaction to slayage and the vamp guards and everything and wanna see Giles interactions with the vamp guards too. They will go to Sunnydale, but unfortunately no Giles in this fic. Sorry. Hot chocolate with marshmallows! That's pretty cute. More story please. Thank you. awww. thats so cute that joyce is all understanding like.. :P and lol spike is so adorable.. :D Yes he is isn't he. vladt 04/16/2006 04:07 am 14 - Yours good chapter, fun tale. thanks for the read. Thank you. Get to the smut! LoL And the Sparie! hehe *lol* I will. I will. fallen_angel 04/05/2006 12:43 pm 13 - Something is Missing yeh! claim's not broken! i really hate Angel right now wish someone would dust him! *lol* I know.. he's so serious and broody. SpaceLord 04/05/2006 12:02 pm 13 - Something is Missing So whens the cat gonna get out of the bag? Might take some time... Strange semi-claim effects. Interesting that the other vamps will not force Spike to do what Angelus wants. More story please. Well the way I see it the other vamps don't always agree with Angel. Niko likes Spike a lot and Caden treats Spike like a younger brother... ohhhh poor Spike... just dust Angel and make a run for it with her, hehe ohhhh poor Spike... just dust Angel and make a run for it with her, hehe Yup... poor Spike but I'll fix it somehow... Cewcew 03/25/2006 03:24 am 12 - Next Best Thing Sweet chappie! I shall be awating the next. Thank you. so he didn't break the claim, just blocked it? should make for interesting future chapters. thanks for the fine read. Thank you. Yup, I guess that would be the best description. fallen_angel 03/24/2006 07:31 pm 12 - Next Best Thing i wait 4 ur story like mad. the last para made it seem like spike broke the claim. so is sunnydale in the offing?still waiting 2 see who the girl in the black n white shirt is. Aww.. thanks. Sunnydale is still in the horizon... it is the Hellmouth afterall. Thanks again. Dar 03/24/2006 03:09 pm 12 - Next Best Thing Angel broke the claim didn't he, darn all that forehead an nothing to show for it. Wanker.. great Update *lol* Well Angel is a wanker but he didn't break it. He wants Spike to break it. How is Spike going to break this incomplete claim without Buffy's presence? I get that Angelus is jealous and Merrick is a true Wanker but I don't get what Spike is supposed to do. Does he yell "repudio" or something three times? Wouldn't he have to do it to her face? Blonde here requesting more. Yup, the claim is incomplete especially since Spike wouldn't let Buffy respond to it. I see Merrick as just being quite protective and Angel just has his views on how things should be. awww.. did angel break the claim??? No, he wants Spike to break it. Oh noes, what did he do? Nothing really bad... just what he thought was best for all parties involved. fallen_angel 03/24/2006 07:04 pm 11 - A Solution ok what's with Angel?and what the implications of the claim gonna be? u have me totally hooked u know that. I'm glad you're liking this fic. Angel is very serious and professional acting in this fic. What a great story, and such an original idea. I'll keep my eye on this one. Thank you. I'm glad you like the plot bunny. SpaceLord 03/17/2006 08:22 am 11 - A Solution Well now Spike has done it :) That's Spike for ya! OMG! Spike saved her by claiming her? Now he'll have to fight for his life against Angelus. Seems like a pretty solid claiming. More story please. Thanks. Hope you'll like what happens next. Did the three stooges sense the new claim?? Yes they did and Angel ain't happy. vladt 03/17/2006 04:57 am 11 - A Solution very good chapter. am sure it's going to cause problems. looking forward to reading about them. thanks. Thanks. *GASP*.... oh no!!! he wouldnt?!? um one question.. why is avril on the banner?? *ponders* Well all vampire guards have been given authority by the Council to dispose of the Slayer if needed. As for Avril in the banner... hehe SpaceLord 03/10/2006 09:23 am 10 - Warm Feeling Ohh fight to the death, that should be fun. Hope you'll like what will happen next OMG!! What kind of thrall does Lothos have? Buffy is still a bimbo and she must be pretty easy. More story please. Well I'm assuming that Lothos was more of a vampire that used thrall... especially considering his age. fallen_angel 03/10/2006 08:21 am 10 - Warm Feeling too short!need more please write more fast! who's the girl wearing the black and white shirt in the banner? Will try to update as soon as I can. The girl wearing the black and white shirt... part of the eventual twist. vladt 03/10/2006 06:12 am 10 - Warm Feeling very evil (good) spot to leave a very good update. enjoying the fic. thanks for the read. Thanks. Eeep! No beating on Spike..... except for me....... *grins* Don't know yet but you might get the chance. awww.. did anyone think of cinderella story? lol i can hear it now.. "... on sleepless roads the sleepless go, may angels lead you in..." awww.. too bad about the fighting bit.. ^_^ part of me saw the cinderella story... or maybe I just wanted to have Spike in a suit. SpaceLord 03/02/2006 09:37 am 9 - Saints and Dances Ohh things are heating up now, so will Merrick die? Will things change alot from canon? This story is very interesting. Thanks. Hope you guys won't hate me for what I'm planning on doing. ACK!! Just when the Spuffy is getting started, some trumped up vamp interrupts and you leave us with a cliffie! I'm really enjoying this story and want more please. Thanks. Yay. I was a little nervous about this chapter. vladt 03/02/2006 07:29 am 9 - Saints and Dances how could spike lose buffy? enjoyed the update. thanks Lots of demons... a fyarl and a number of minions grabbed her. gaaaahhh I hope she sets Lothos on fire for breaking up the make out section... *grins* You'll see. well things are heating up nicely...i want to know what happened to buffy!!! will they find her in time?? loving your story still :) Thanks. I'm glad you're still finding it interesting. SpaceLord 02/23/2006 10:30 am 8 - Slayer Blood Well that was a nice chapter....so she got over Angel pretty fast :) Well he's all broody and boring... ^_^ Yummy, the Spuffy is beginning. Will she have to burn down the gym in this AU? I think having vampire guards for the Slayer is such a good idea. More story please. Yup.. spuffy loving... as for the gym... hehe hehehe i like them annoying each other cool... guess it sounded better than I thought. hehe vladt 02/23/2006 05:08 am 8 - Slayer Blood good update, enjoying the tale. thanks Thanks. liked this chapter a lot, their conversation was good...i like how you've changed the history of Spike's relationship with Nikki...i could see that happening...even in the show their dynamic seemed similar to Spike and Buffy's...this story is very very good :) Thanks. I just hope I don't run out of steam... *pets muse* vladt 02/17/2006 10:29 pm 7 - Meeting Buffy good update, despite "an apparent taste for poofters" I know ... icky Angel SpaceLord 02/17/2006 09:59 am 7 - Meeting Buffy ewwww.....Buffy drooling over Angel is just wrong ;) hehe.. I know... just completely wrong. I'll fix it soon. Ack! She's got a taste for poofters. Spike is still funny and Angelus is still broody. Will Buffy get smarter? More story please. Thanks. I hope I can keep Spike entertaining. ^_^ Ewwww.... bangel..... I know... icky.. This was suppose to be bangel for a bit but I decided against it. i like this so much!! I love the way you've brought all the characters together in this very unique world, i loved Buffy and Spike's first meeting, but please let her get over the whole angel-crush thing really quick!! :) lol She will... just couldn't write bangel... nikolai, like spike, probably does not take direction well. good read. thanks Yup.. and he doesn't care for Angel that much either. LOL, you gave swpike an equaly obnoxious friend???? Damn good ficcie :P ^_^ Yup, will hopefully flesh out Niko's personality a bit more in the coming chapters. Will there be Spuffy soon? Will Angelus emerge as his true scummy self? More story please. Spuffy will be coming soon. mamadd 02/14/2006 05:53 pm 6 - The New Slayer very different from anything I have read. really liked it, please update soon Thanks. I'm glad you're liking it. SpaceLord 02/14/2006 11:00 am 6 - The New Slayer well this was fun....now things will get more spuffy....I also hope to get some more story of some of the slayers that has come and gone since Helena Glad you enjoyed it. Will see if I can incorporate some more slayer backstories. Ewwwww.... Nikolai..... *giggles and turns to run from Niko before he catches her* Get back here bella ragazza! o0ooooh i like it alot.. i love how you incorporated scenes from the buffy movie.. very nice.. lol Thanks. More pre-Sunnydale Buffy coming up. still loving this story and really excited that we're on the edge of spuffiness (i hope)... your original characters are very believable and engaging...really love your story :) Thank you. ... Caden and Niko are glad that you like them. I'll hopefully be able to flesh Niko out a little more. Damn Angel is a cold bastard Yup.. Angel will be all business in this one.. which is ironic I guess since he's the one with a soul. arggghhh!!! its great!! love it.. but i really need to see some spuffy!! Don't worry. Spuffy will be coming soon. SpaceLord 02/09/2006 09:56 am 5 - Chosen One How very sad, loved the Helena character she seemed like such a wonderful girl. Thank you. I liked her too. Thanks for reading. Pretty sad. Can Spike stay tame enough to go with Angelus and Caden and guard the new Slayer? More story please. He will... party feels guilty Helena is dead so he'll stay with them. wow..that's harsh :( poor Spike, poor Helena...love the dialogue with the children...can't wait to see what happens next :) Yup... Angel's all business. Hope you'll like what's coming. vladt 02/09/2006 04:56 am 5 - Chosen One great update, even considering helena's fate. very enjoyable read. thanks Thank you for the review. Hope you keep on reading. are we closer to sparie??? Slowly but surely... still a ways though. oh yeah loving this one so far :P Thanks. I'm so glad you're liking it. I wasn't sure if people will like the plot bunny. sooo good!! I love the trial thing, didn't see it coming til the end...love the sparring match...i really love this story! :) Thanks. Glad you liked it. ^_^ Can Spike be tamed so soon after his turning? I think some other kind of dance with the Slayer might work better but that's just my DOL talking. *grins* Well I'm sure that other kind of dance will definitely get Spike to follow the Slayer. I think the reason he's changed quickly is because he actually cares for Helena like she's family. Thanks for reading. SpaceLord 02/06/2006 10:09 am 4 - Retribution I love this chapter very nice, how much more will be spent in the past and when will it move to Spuffy? Not that I mind I like these new characters of Helena and Caden. Just a tiny tiny bit more. Thanks for being so patient. Awwww, you mentioned me *faints* When do we get to the sparie?? You deserve it! But you know things take time.. hehe just started this fine fic. really enjoying the read, thanks. why am i sure that helena, who i really like, is n't going to be around long? Thanks. Hope you'll enjoy where I'm going to take the fic. oh i hope he doesn't get in trouble!! :( *worried* please change canon when it comes to what happened with his mom! this is so good, i'm on to the next chappie :) I thought about that... was actually contemplating on turning her but decided against it. Thanks for the review. I love this twist on canon...so good....you dusted Dru! Bit of a shock but it's interesting, having him turned by souled Angel instead...and I love how his Slayer friend actually brought about the events unknowingly, urging him to tell Cecily how he felt....hooked on this :) on to the next chapter :) Thanks. I'm glad you're liking it so far. Oooo yay! Dru dust!! *cough cough* Yup.. didn't want her being in this fic. Pin 01/28/2006 01:19 pm 2 - Change Very interesting turn of events. How will William react?? Looking forward to more. thanks Thanks. Hope you'll enjoy the plot twists along the way. SpaceLord 01/28/2006 09:12 am 2 - Change Well interesting to say the least. Love the twist you put on it. Can't wait to see where this leads. Thanks. Hope you keep on reading. Spike Pratt?!?! Is this going to be a funny story? *lol* I don't think it is...hope you keep on reading. very interesting first chapter... i'm off to read the next now :) Thanks Is this the one with me in it? *dances* Yes it is. ^_^ so sit back and enjoy. Jenna 01/24/2006 01:37 pm Prologue and Chapter 1 - The New Position I like the concept! William as watcher, very nice. Thanks.. though he won't be a watcher for very long. | |||
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