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Can You Feel Me? by Morrigan
*thumbs way up*
spikette55
11/12/2008 03:26 am
Can you Feel Me?
What a wonderfully sad story. I can hear him speaking to her. Well done. thanx luv.
Thank you for the review! ;-)
Eskarina
10/13/2008 07:47 pm
Can you Feel Me?
it was so niiiiice.... and then so, so sad...
what a strong sense of loss
I'm normally a sucker for happy endings but well done!
very well rounded
what a strong sense of loss
I'm normally a sucker for happy endings but well done!
very well rounded
Thank you for the review! :)
alým
02/10/2008 03:12 pm
Can you Feel Me?
That was...wow! I loved it:)
Thanks! *hugs*
There were a few tears. Sweet!!
Aww! *passes tissues* Thank you, sweetie! :)
spike'smrs
07/22/2006 07:28 pm
Can you Feel Me?
oh my god thank was tearjerkingly wonderful i felt as if i was actually there, the words drawning you into the raw emotions of the scene well done give yourself an A++
Thank you, so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)
AHHHH that was so sad! Very lovely, I liked it a lot!
Thank you, so much! :)
Verda
05/29/2006 03:13 am
Can you Feel Me?
Even though it's been a few months since you wrote this, wanted to leave you a review anyway. Beautiful and so sad. I forgot it was post-chosen, it hit very hard. Good first try at NC-17.
Thanks, so much for taking the time to review my story. It means a lot to get feedback from those who have read my writings, even if they have been up for a while. Also, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you, again!
This is beautiful and so heartbreaking. At the end you can truly feel Buffy's sense of loss.
Thanks. This bunny hopped through my window one night, and refused to go un-noticed. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
~*~Tasha~*~
03/23/2006 05:44 am
Can you Feel Me?
So hot and passionate and so sad at the same time.
Thanks for the review, girl!
teenuH
03/16/2006 11:44 pm
Can you Feel Me?
aww!! that was too sweet -- the end i had to read twice and then i finally got it hehe forgive me im slow AWWW!! loved it i wish it continued to maybe.. spike having the same dream O__O i duno
please keep writing :D
please keep writing :D
Hehe *L* Thanks, girl... Your wish was already granted, kinda. I have another stand alone out called "Always" which is a Spike POV and it is a prologue piece to a new WIP I'm starting soon. Glad you liked this one!
Soul of the Rose
02/25/2006 02:14 am
Can you Feel Me?
Wow. I can't believe that was your first fic. Very well written, very sensual & hot. And then you gut me with that final line! Much more than a PWP - nice turn of emotions in the last few lines, very moving. Well done!
Thanks for the wonderful review! It wasn't my first stab at fic, (that would be my WIP *It's Not Enough*) But, it is my first shot at anything sexy... Glad you liked it!
2zen2
02/18/2006 06:13 am
Can you Feel Me?
Very nice - just what I needed for a Friday night! :) I thought the imagery was very good and ultimately, a sad story...
Thanks for the nice review! Glad to be able to add a boost to your Friday!
Lou
02/18/2006 12:27 am
Can you Feel Me?
You don't know what you had till it's gone.
Very true. Thanks for reviewing!
vladt
02/17/2006 10:19 pm
Can you Feel Me?
wonderfully sad fic. thanks for the read.
Thank you so much!
wow, hot and sad at the same time, this was great! you did a wonderful job!
Happy that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
astrodex
02/17/2006 05:20 pm
Can you Feel Me?
Beautiful and sad and sexy all in one. Really nice take on post Chosen. Thanks.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
luxferi
02/17/2006 04:49 pm
Can you Feel Me?
Wow... that was really... sad and hot at the same time. At first I was confused when Buffy thought she couldn't turn around and start riding him... then it hit me in the end that Spike was gone... post Chosen. I'd forgotten about that. Then when realization dawned it almost made me cry... she missed him so much! Great fic...
Thanks! I was kind of going for that effect. I had hoped that the element of confusion and/or/surprise would nail the point home about how alone she feels without him now. Thank you for the kind review!
oh I liked! Very nice little ficcie indeeed. (There were some formatting errors - spacing/returns etc. - thought you might want to know). happy sigh. yummy!
I know, they are there. I'm frustrated about it too. I post this on an msntv (I can't recall if I mentioned that before) and no matter WHAT I seem to do to take out all those extra spaces, etc. There are always some left after all is said and done. GRRR!
On the up-note, I'm so glad you liked my ficlet! Thank you for reviewing! :)
On the up-note, I'm so glad you liked my ficlet! Thank you for reviewing! :)
Lovely! LOL... I kinda figured the 'twist' out pretty early... but I have a bit of a warped mind! Very beutiful piece.
Hehe! Thanks! And hey, a warped mind is a good thing, in my book!
Irina
02/17/2006 11:27 am
Can you Feel Me?
Wonderful story. So sad at the end, but I really enjoyed it.
Thank you for reviewing! I know, the twist is kinda angsty. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Nice bit of smut, but, WTF? Is Spike there or not?
*L* Nope. He's not. Buffy still thinks he's dead. It's just her all alone, in her fantasy. Thanks for reviewing!
*cries* He's not really there! Oh wow sweetie that was fantastic! It was sweet and loving and heartbreaking and hot, all smooshed into one.
This is the first piece of fiction by you that I've read, but it certainly won't be the last.
it was beautiful, keep up the excellent work!
This is the first piece of fiction by you that I've read, but it certainly won't be the last.
it was beautiful, keep up the excellent work!
Thank you, thank you, thank you! *HUGS* *blushes* I'll be checking out your stuff, tonight!
That was beautiful! I loved it. Thank you for writing it.
Rae
Rae
You welcome and *thank you* so much, for reviewing!
wow. just wow. that was amazingly good and so touching there at the end! kudos!
Thanks! *jumping around all happy!* I'm finally starting to breathe a little easier about this one. Thank you, again!
oh wow...that is so beautiful!! It's sexy and sweet and heartbreaking....i figured out about halway through that he wasn't really there, and its so so tragic and beautiful...thanx for writing this pretty little piece :)
Thank you, thank you! It popped into my head tonight, and so my other fic had to wait. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Oh my, I wasn't expecting that ending. Hit me like a ton of bricks, our poor girl is all alone. How devastating, yet still so romantic. That poor girl left with her beautiful fantasy... I could almost hear Spike answer her. That was wonderful.
Thank you! I've been a nervous wreck, because I've never written a sex scene before... Much less one that turned out to be a solo act. But, it jumped out at me, so I wrote it. So glad that you liked it, and that the end came across how I had hoped.
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