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Soulmate Material by fallen_angel The ending was cute. The very long paragraphs made it a bit difficult to follow at times, however. It was a bit like a run on sentence and a little disjointed. thanks for sharing. blue Thanks. :-) 05/11/2010 08:31 am One Angel = Perfume. I LOVE it! Bloody Brilliant Thanx. By the way, I lovedKissing the Devil. It was easily the best oneshot I've ever read. lol...last line was perfect spike...lovely thoughtful little piece :) Thanx. So when are you giving us another Trusting You? Lillith_Evans 08/14/2006 08:08 pm One Wowza you write nothing like I imagined. It's sweet...yet its sour. You keep the balance from fluff to angst. Which is good cause no one likes to be too happy and no one likes to be too sad. ^.^ Great job! Thanx for the thoughtful review. ~*~Tasha~*~ 07/15/2006 06:15 am One I liked this. I liked how she looked back on the differences between Spike and Angel. I definitely loved the conclusion of her thoughts that Spike was her soul mate. Course the Immortal being dead is no problem to me. Glad you liked. Reviewers like you encourage me to write. tg1982 07/10/2006 02:02 pm One I'm glad the Immortal died. You seem to do gruesome things to him in all your fics. LOL tg1982 07/10/2006 02:02 pm One I'm glad the Immortal died. You seem to do gruesome things to him in all your fics. LOL. tg1982 07/10/2006 02:00 pm One I'm glad the Immortal died. You seem to do gruesome things to him in all your fics. Can you blame me? Woodstock 05/13/2006 02:34 am One This was really good. Made me laugh! Thankyou. Glad Icould dish out a few laughs. Harriet 05/12/2006 01:35 pm One Awww this is such a sweet fic (i think so anyway) Short and sweet. First fic? u sure? anyhoo good job i love it, keep writing!! thanks ever so much. Definitely sure this is my first fic. I'm working on a longer fic right now, I'm calling it Buffy Diaries. Robyn 05/10/2006 11:22 pm One I really enjoyed the introspection of Buffy and her comparisons of Spike to oxygen and Angel to perfume, they are probably some of the best comparisons I have ever read. And I loved the ending, in particular the last line. :D This is a great one-shot, but it would also make a great beginning to a longer fic if you ever decided to continue it. Thanx glad u liked the comparision. Your soulmate is supposed to be like oxygen to your soul. No ideas about continuing this yet but maybe as i mature as an author something'll pop in my brains. vladt 05/10/2006 10:29 pm One wonderful read, thanks Glad u liked it. Thanx 4 the review, it's what fuels us 2 write. Mickey 05/10/2006 09:27 pm One Just finished Holly's fic and hopped onto yours.*2 fics in 1 night. maybe i'm getting hooked* Loved the part where Buffy says she'll never outgrow her feelings for Spike. And Spike has also called Angel 'tall dark and forehead'. I told u i'll get u hooked 2 Spuffy fic. Now go check out Jack, The space between and jl1980. Then u can read OF LIGHT AND SHADOW, Aloha my love, Three for a secret.. err maybe i'll just e-mail u a list ok? Thanx 4 the review. Tina 05/10/2006 09:09 pm One ok i finaly got Tia off the computer. Who knew twins could be annoying too? Love the comparision between Spike and Angel. It was absolutely correct. Loved the last line, a good way to introduce Spike. Don't fret my sis is a lot more annoying than Tia. Thanx 4 the review. Angel is a perfume? LOL. Well i an never buying an Angel scented perfume! And yah Angel's really broody. Totally agree with you Spike is definitely soilmate material. Write some more. I'm going to out of town and witout internet for a while. Tell u what, if this ficlet gets atleast 12 reviews i'll post a longer fic. that's been knocking around my head 4 a while. Thanx 4 the review. Tia 05/10/2006 08:12 pm One OMG isn't it enough that we have to put up with your stories on campus now u have to post it on the net too! He he he.. just kidding. Sweet but couldn't you put in some REAL physical Angel bashing along with the verbal bashing? That would have been sweet*dreamy look* LOL.I'll leave the Angel bashing to Jack 4 now. I highly reccommend Penny and Paradox, gr8 fics and excellent Angel bashing of all sorts. Thanx 4 the review. very cute! I loved the last line - made me laugh so hard - :-) My very first reviewer!*sends you a basket of choclatetty goodness* Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review! | |||
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