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More Conversations with Dead People by confusedkayt Really find this intriguing, makes me ask questions and sets up suspense, which isn't as frequent as I'd like it to be in spuffy fic. So, I am really sad that you seem to have abandoned it. If you finished it elsewhere, or if you plan to, please respond. This is good, insightful, disturbing work. Blue DeepBlueJoy http://www.tthfanfic.org/authors.php?no=12717&list=profile nmcil 11/16/2007 02:12 pm Chapter 6 Great story - Best of Everything with your school work - thanks ever for bringing us this story - I like this Spike coming directly back to Buffy - will be very interesting to find out what happened after the Sunnydale cave in and what powers are involved in his return - that was unexpected. very good read, thank you. Spookier and spookier -- I love it! Yay! I was sort of aiming for horror movie tone, so I'm glad to know that's coming through! Nice chapter -- Spike apparently not too far gone in his state of whatever!! Here's hoping! Hee! It's no fun to leave him unconcious for too long. Storm 01/19/2007 11:02 pm Chapter 5 God this is fantastic! characterization is brilliant as is the storyline, ur obviously a genius! lol pls write more really soon! tired and confused buffy, sleep will help the one, but will anything help the other? very good read, thank you. Lou 11/13/2006 09:24 pm Chapter 5 Another excellent chapter. This is primo writing. I'm enjoying every word. Roby 11/11/2006 07:08 am Chapter 5 YAY!!!! I'm so happy to see chapter 5!!!! (:: bounces around like a crazed puppy ::) Just read all five chaps in one hit and I am loving this story. Poor Buffy and Spike, both so confused and so wary at the moment... hopefuly some sleep and then in the light of day things won't seem quite so daunting for them. nightshift 11/10/2006 07:10 am Chapter 5 I love the stream-of-consciousness Buffy babble; both verbal and mental. I'm looking forward to more of this story. I really hope that Buffy can move beyond her fear of Spike without his soul and allow some common sense into her thinking, although when you are as tired as she is common sense is usually nowhere to be found. I loved how perfectly it defined her when Angel said he could get her a plane, happy that someone was taking care of something for her, helping her, but unable to let anyone truly do something for her entirely. Thanks so much for the update, I really enjoyed it. Great to see an update! And a great chapter it was! Will be looking forward to chapter six slackerace 11/10/2006 12:00 am Chapter 5 You made me have to go back and read previous chapters again. Fortunately for you, they were a pleasure to re-read :-) Here's hoping some sleep helps them both... that was an excellent portrayal of buffy's muddled thoughts in this situation...but she *so* needs to get over the soul thing...spike's hurting and confused and insecure and most likely just needs to know that things are gonna be okay...he needs her support right now, not the distance she's giving him...great chapter, love :) Ah give the guy a break!! Poor Spike - hasn't he suffered enough? Good to see Buffy acting so wisely with the others. Spike always does seem to get himself beat up, doesn't he? Thanks, by the way, for taking the time to review each chapter. It really made me smile to wake up to an inbox full of insightful comments! Lou 11/13/2006 09:18 pm Chapter 4 Poor Spike!!! I'm hoping new careful Buffy will think before she speaks!! Robyn 08/01/2006 08:08 am Chapter 4 I love how careful and considerate Buffy is being in helping Spike and I really hope that she doesn’t turn horrible because he no longer has his soul. Thanks so much for the update. I just started this fic today and I had to tell you it's amazing. I can't wait for more. vladt 07/26/2006 02:56 am Chapter 4 great chapter, thank you. come on buffy, the lack of soul was never a problem for spike only tou and the scoobies. Hmmm. I thought Spike was fine (so fine) without the soul and I hope that Buffy remembers that and doesn't tell Giles or threaten to stake him. More story please. okay...i'm all talking myself through this as if *i* was going through it...deep breaths...this is gonna be okay...lol :P you are an incredible writer you realize that? but seriously...he could have done fine without the soul in my opinion...if only she'll see it...but they cant tell the others, not yet....i loved this update, so good, cant wait for the next :) Araedhel 07/25/2006 05:47 pm Chapter 4 Great chapter! Please write more soon. I need to know what happens!! Loving the mystery. :) I am afraid it will take a bit of time to unravel. Lou 11/13/2006 09:11 pm Chapter Three The awkwardness between Willow and Buffy is exactly how I'd imagine they'd be. Very well done! Robyn 07/12/2006 08:34 am Chapter Three I love how you did much of the action through Buffy's inner monologue. Thanks for the update and I am really looking forward to what happens next. I am so glad my Buffy pov is working for you. More soon, I promise! And many thanks for reviewing. vladt 07/12/2006 06:06 am Chapter Three wonderful read, thank you. horrible place to stop, thank you for that too. *grin* You're welcome, on both counts. More to come, probably also stopped at a horrible place. JEN 07/11/2006 08:45 pm Chapter Three Great start very original, please keep going !!! More to come, scout's honor. I'm glad you're enjoying! fanxstitch 07/11/2006 06:19 am Chapter Three This really and interesting story. Very well written. I'm anxiously awaiting more of this. I'm glad you're enjoying! More soon, I promise. great chapter. can't wait for more Thanks! More coming soon, scout's honor. Oh My god. I wasn't expecting this chapter to be so funny. I mean after all of the ominous warnings and stuff in the other two. But Buffy trying to feed Spike from an empty O.J. jug was just to hilarious. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Ominous indeed - I just know some folks are not so much fans of the post-torture, etc. It is kind of a funny mental image, no? :P Fran 07/10/2006 08:37 pm Chapter Three I am loving Buffy's inner monologue. I'm glad to hear it. The episode "Conversations with Dead People" really made me think about how much goes on behind her closed front. Hence, ficage. :) joan 07/10/2006 08:35 pm Chapter Three What a gripping chapter! Love Buffy's internal monologues! Yay! I am glad to hear it. More where they came from, for sure. :) had a couple of chapters to catch up and I'm so glad I did! But what a place to leave it! At least it won't be left for long. :) I'm glad you're glad! no...you so cant stop there!!! i have to have more! at least your updates are super-long...which is a really good thing...this chapter was so heart-breaking..wonder what happened to him, is he gonna be able to tell her? awesome chapter! :) *snicker* I think all authors have this mean streak about where to stop chapters. Or maybe it's just me. ;) Thanks so much for commenting! More soon, I totally promise. Yikes - I wasn't expecting that!! Suitably gruesome. "Suitably gruesome" would be an excellent name for a goth band. Glad my little surprise was actually surprising! Lou 11/13/2006 09:04 pm Chapter 2 A stunner of a chapter! Robyn 07/04/2006 03:43 pm Chapter 2 You did so well with the horror aspect of this that it made my stomach turn. I am finding this story very interesting and unique, and I am really looking forward to the next update. Is it mean to be glad that your stomach turned? In any case, I am very glad that your attention is being kept. :) The next update will be soon, soon, soon, scout's honor - in fact, it's all written and being vetted by my beta! great second chapter. thanks for the fine read. Thank you for reviewing! I hope things continue to please you. galatea 07/03/2006 06:54 pm Chapter 2 This is brilliant that you are continuing this story. More more more!!!! More soon, scout's honor. Thanks for reviewing! Lou 07/03/2006 02:36 pm Chapter 2 Ooh this is interesting! Yay! I am very glad you think so. wow. you have the whole horror thing down pat...how very awful..and yet i'm hooked...needing more of this fic, gotta see what happened to spike, if he's gonna be okay, etc...need more, please! :) Coming soon. Like, by the end of the week, soon. :) And I promise not everything will be all grim and horror-tastic as this fic marches on. Terra 07/03/2006 05:26 am Chapter 2 I started reading this story somewhere else(season of Spuffy, maybe?) and am so glad you decided to continue with it. I eagerly look forward to more updates. Season of Spuffy indeed... I have meant to continue it for all of this time, but life got in the way. Expect another chapter by the end of the week! Spikes Slayer2 07/03/2006 03:47 am Chapter 2 um.. can i just say.. eww? and OMG! Yeah, a little on the ew side... *looks shifty* Thanks for commenting! Tamara 07/03/2006 12:30 am Chapter 2 I think Willow and her friends distanced themselves from her when they threw her out of her own house. Spike's alive! But he's hurt. I very much agree - Buffy has never, ever, ever been the sort to just get over things quickly. I imagine she'd still nursing the hurt, in that repressed Buffy way. Thanks so much for commenting! EWWWW! Is this our Spike now or a construct of the First's? More story please. Coming soon to a theater near you. :) nmcil 11/16/2007 05:14 am 1. Game On great update - Lou 11/13/2006 08:51 pm 1. Game On Torture for Buffy - I'm glad she toughened up a little there at the end. It seems she's going to need it! Robyn 07/04/2006 12:53 pm 1. Game On Very interesting start with some real valid points made by the first. I am looking forward to seeing how this plays out. I'm glad you think so. A number of things bothered me immensely about Chosen, and this fic is one way to take those doubts and spin them into what I see as a sensible whole. it's a whole lot of fun - I've been planning this fic out for a while. :) wow...how terriby traumatic...this was an intense, terrifying, powerful chapter..very well doen :) Thanks so much! I just can't believe that "Chosen" had a quiet aftermath. :) Lou 05/13/2006 11:03 pm 1. Game On Brilliant. Time of Change 05/13/2006 05:07 am 1. Game On I love this. Time of Change 05/13/2006 05:06 am 1. Game On I love this. So glad! Thanks for responding! Interesting start not-so-confused. Not sure I can believe that Buffy would actually tell Giles something right away instead of hiding out until things are totally out of control. You are going to bring back real-Spike, aren't you? Thank you kindly. :) By the end of season seven, I thought Buffy had matured into quite a general figure. Her decision to almost completely over look the defection of her nearest and dearest because she needed their skills to fight her war gave me some evidence of that, I think. So I imagine her shoving her emotional issues to the side and seeking those resources again when the battle is rejoined. As for real Spike... I am all inclined to say "wait and see" coyly, but I suppose the fact that I am in a Spuffy archive kind of answers that one for me. Very, very strange. How will she keep the First out if that is what's really happening? Will this make Faith the head White Hat? I'm confuzzled. More story please. I hope you'll find these, and more, questions resolved in time. More is on the way. :) Thanks for leaving such a thoughtful review! You have me interested Hope I can keep you that way. :) Thanks for commenting. vladt 05/12/2006 08:38 pm 1. Game On very good chapter. looking for more. thanks for the read. Thanks for reviewing. More shortly, scout's honor. :) awesome, i know i've reveiwed this somewhere else...lol..but had to do it again! can't wait to see what happens! Perhaps at Seasonal_spuffy? That's where it debued (and where I debuted as a Buffy writer!) So double thank you for the double comment. It was so exciting to see feedback from an archive... I got all used to stingy Harry Potter fans, but this has been so very warm. Kat 05/12/2006 07:58 am 1. Game On yikes scarry thought. great beginning Thanks a bunch. Hope you'll find the rest up to scratch. :) Tamara 05/12/2006 06:26 am 1. Game On I am SO glad this isn't a one shot. You made a lot of valient points in just this chapter. Buffy whined plenty about not having a choice in her power and yet took away the choice of thousands. There will be a lot playing out in chapters to come, I promise. :) | |||
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