Moving On by Grave Tidings

10/02/2006 02:55 am
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hehehehe very cute and sweet and wonderful. I love that she screamed Spike's name when she was with the Immortal. hahaha.

10/02/2006 02:54 am
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hehehehe very cute and sweet and wonderful. I love that she screamed Spike's name when she was with the Immortal. hahaha.

~*~Tasha~*~
08/31/2006 08:13 am
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Awesome reunion. ROFL on the bartender at the end. I like how you worked everything in and made the actions of Buffy and Spike both make more sense too.

Lou
08/22/2006 11:02 pm
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Lovely fun.

Robyn
08/19/2006 12:57 am
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When I read that Duncan was the Immortal I started laughing so hard that I couldn’t even see the screen. It wasn’t anything I had ever considered but it really struck me as funny and it puts a whole new twist on what kind of person the Immortal is. I really enjoyed this story, thanks for posting it.

08/15/2006 05:22 am
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wow, another great fic!

Tonia
08/14/2006 10:20 am
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I do like this story and I would have loved for things to turn out this way on the show. I have one problem though. Duncan is not "The Immortal". That is the only thing that put me off.
Besides that one point, I did like your story and would like to see more from you.

Lynda
08/14/2006 06:09 am
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Now,this is a reunion I could visualise. I just love it.

Carrie
08/14/2006 03:28 am
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I pretty much liked it but I don't see Duncan ever acting like that - not the noble and honorable highlander. "The Immortal" was portayed as an egotitical womanizer and playboy - Hell, he calls himself "The Immortal" and is the kind of guy who tortured two men just to screw their girlfriends and spent a large amount of time planning and setting up that complex and elaborate run around Rome for Angel and Spike in such detail that they even saw Buffy across a room but she never noticed them (either her "Slayer sense" was blocked or she didn't care about feeling the presence of two very old and powerful master vampires)just so he could show them up once more in a JUVENILE pissing contest of showing them that he once again is screwing someone that they cared about. Eh, that episode was so messed up - besides I'd like to know why Buffy, the icon for "girl power" and female independence and impowerment was being the latest in a long line of sluts for an a****** like that.
I don't think we know what Duncan would do after losing Tessa in the long run. We have seen a glimpse of how mischievous and wicked he could be with Amanda. I didn't see him torturing the vampires - just chaining them up to get them out of the way. I like Duncan as much as the next HL fan and debated whether to make it Connor, but he's dead. And so, eh. Sorry for stepping on your Duncan toes. Adrian P. is 1/2 Italian, so I just couldn't resist. :)

vladt
08/14/2006 12:52 am
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fun read, thank you. little out of character for duncan, but fun read.

08/13/2006 11:18 pm
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good story...nice reunion for these two, all things considered...closed a lot of loose ends...good job :)

08/13/2006 07:17 pm
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nice story! I enjoyed it!

08/13/2006 05:44 pm
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"Do you think I was lying when I said that I love you, down there in the hellmouth?" - Now that I think of it, you can't lie when you're standing in the Hellmouth about to die. Excellent story

ct114
08/13/2006 04:39 pm
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Good story. I don't see Duncan doing that, Methos yes, not Duncan but then again, that is what fan fiction is all about. You put what you thing would be good for the story. Good story. I like it.