Twilight by PassionFish

09/05/2006 02:21 pm
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nice ficcie - a comment - this is just my opnion and for all i know no one could agree with me - but it is distracting to me to have a bunch of one shot sequals. If it a series could you keep it together as chapters? Course like i said it could just be me so feel free to ignore but i thought i would let you know that is was rather distracting for me.
Hey - I'm glad you liked :)

As for the series together thing - I completely agree as a reader, but I'm uncomfortable to do that until I'm sure I've got plans for a proper story. Right now the ficlets are just one-shot glimpses into another world - if I ever have plans to do a proper continued plot I'll move them together, but until then I'd hate to get people's hopes up on yet another WIP! I hope you understand :)

MARGARET
09/04/2006 02:06 am
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WANT MORE? YOU BET! VERY LOVELY FIC, THANKS
Thanks :)

~*~Tasha~*~
09/03/2006 08:46 am
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I would enjoy seeing another sequel. This is a good story series, and it has me intrigued to see where you go with it.
Thanks :) I have another one-shot vaguely planned, just have to get down to writing it!

Isabella
09/02/2006 01:32 pm
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Oh so sweet, I love it. Out of the ordinary but so lovely. Yes for the sequel that would be great!
Thank you :D

Robyn
09/01/2006 09:37 am
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This is really quite beautiful and moving. I love how although he is usually the strong one she is able to be there for him when he needs it. I am really enjoying these ficlets and am looking forward to the next one.
Thanks :D I'm glad you likes - I was in an 'otherly' state of mind when I wrote it, I hope the next is in keeping :)

09/01/2006 12:30 am
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that was so beautiful and sad and touching...a lovely, haunting, heart-breaking fic, pet :)
Thank you. I must admit it gets me when I read it (I never think it quite sounds like my writing style so it's always different to me.)

I'm glad you liked it :)

08/31/2006 09:42 pm
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Love that they're together but sad that he's once again vunerable to something causing him pain, like the chip. If thier going to be here and not in SunnyD, I hope in your sequels they can be released to a "normal" life and be allowed to live their life together, without supervision. I hope you do continue this I'd love another sequel, Love whatever you write P. Thanks.
I've got some ideas for a sequel, nothing too mapped out yet, but I'm thinking on it :) Glad you liked it... as for a 'normal' life...I'm not promising anything :)

Tamara
08/31/2006 07:29 pm
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Definitely want sequels! I love this world of thiers.
Thank you!