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Dark Gift by Schehrezade duke6665 01/08/2013 06:12 am Chapter 37 come on!!! please I will beg you!! please come back and finish this Okay seriously you need to like post more ASAP!!! I know it has been forever scene you have updated but come on you cant just leave us like that!!!!! I will say the hole character death warning thing through me off a lot. I keep on thinking you are going to kill of one of the main characters or something. In fact after reading this chapter it took me minute or two to realize the character death in this chapter was Samantha. This is the first Buffy Vamp. story I have read, not because it was the first one I came across but because something about Buffy being a Vampire does not sound fun to read. But saying that in the story description you do not say thins is a fic were Buffy is a vamp so I started to read. And I have to say the way you handled Vampire Buffy was wonderful. You made it work. Buffy was still Buffy just with some new and improved bits. Therefore you have changed my mind on Vamp Buffy fics and I will probably give some of them a try now that I have read yours. Ohhh and the purple eyes and no bumpies so works!!!! FINALLY IF YOU DO NOT FINISH THIS STORY I MIGHT HAVE TO TAKE A CHUNK OUT OF YOU!!! ;) 08/22/2009 12:34 pm Chapter 37 I really hope this will be continued! And preferably with some Spuffy + Angel threesome? They both care for him, and he hurts and need them. Please? And do not leave the wedding out! Come on! I really look forward to see what you come up with here.. Angela Desmond 05/07/2009 09:40 pm Chapter 37 I really hope that you will finish this story. It is really great! I even volunteer my editorial skills. -Angie Cate 08/16/2008 01:15 pm Chapter 37 I'm loving this story at the moment! I've read it in one whole whack, but was stopped :( Please update!!! :) Please update i love this story! Ashley B 05/01/2007 05:41 pm Chapter 37 can't wait to hear more cause that was interesting, nothing like i thought it would be hope you write more soon cause i can't wait to hear what spike and buffy do to Glory :) i hope its soon dont wait out on us 04/23/2007 05:57 pm Chapter 37 OMG you sooooooo need to update....!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE I'll send you cookies and cake...!! Shadowsqueen 11/09/2006 06:57 pm Chapter 37 nooooooooooooooooooo u cant end there what are u crazy!!!!! u need to get with the writing asap love love love the story but i need more!!!!!!!!!! Stephanie 10/17/2006 04:25 am Chapter 37 I really enjoy this fic. I actually found it on another site and then found your site and then found this one. Can't thank you enough for that by the way. But can we please have more? I for one need to know what happens. Please?!?!?!?!?! I beg of you to continue with this story! I love it! Roby 04/02/2006 04:31 am Chapter 37 ...Me too... What Kimbclar and jl1980 said! I really love this story and hope to see an update... (cough:soon!:cough) :-) I can't remember if I've ever reviewed this fic even though I've read it before - so here goes... Love it! This is one of the best rewrite's of Season 4/5 that I've ever read. Spot on characterization! Hope to see an update soon. that's so sad...poor giles...but a least willow was able to help tara...loving this story, sad that i've read all there is for now, and can't wait for more.. :) lol, You and your evil cliffhangers :P Wonderful update as usual. More soon, please!
-Lisa jane 01/06/2006 06:33 pm Chapter 37 Super update I really love this fic. Poor Giles I really hope the doctors are wrong, maybe Willow can do something. Love it. Lou 01/06/2006 04:16 am Chapter 37 Mmmmm...gummy Angel. Nice. ComedyofErrors 01/05/2006 11:04 pm Chapter 37 Umph. I love Giles, too. Oh well, he's tough, like Spike said, and I'll wish him well. I'm glad Willow's back, and all on the right side. Interesting way of bringing Sam around to the story, works well. hehe Sam with the kinky hurt from Drac hehe... I LOVED the thing with Spike keeping Angel's fangs. That was awesome. oh my gosh...well at least Giles isn't dead...how awful...so i guess they're gonna head home now :) It was an excellent read, and dealt with lots of plotty goodness Kathy 11/29/2005 01:38 am Chapter 36 You are without a doubt evil incarnate for doing that to poor Giles & Tara. Thanks. Can't wait to see how it goes. Been enjoying this from day 1, sorry such a lousy reviewer. stephanie 11/26/2005 09:26 pm Chapter 36 great update. I enjoyed the blood oath and darla issues. I am very glad that Giles is not dead. I hope he survives, poor Tara. I really like how you have writtern anya and Tara in this story. Very nice! jane 11/26/2005 05:38 pm Chapter 36 I was really chuffed with the update, been a bit concerned given the way the last chappie ended. I'm always up for a bit of Angel humiliation, It couldn't happen to a nicer fella. Brilliant. Sara M. 11/26/2005 02:16 pm Chapter 36 Oh, my!! This chapter kicked ass!! All of it was so WOW! Can’t wait to see what happens next. ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/26/2005 01:06 pm Chapter 36 There is a lot in this chapter. Excellent follow up with the Blood Oath and the justice that was served when Angel broke it. I really liked how you handled all of that. Bravo!!! Desperately look forward to more. I thought Giles and Tara were both death. Although very grim, this does at least give a little hope that they can come out of it. Lou 11/25/2005 07:03 am Chapter 36 Top update! You got through a ton of action and exposition. And dominant Spike was delicious. WOW!! What an update!! I was afraid Giles was already dead. Nice Spike/Angelus blood play for retribution. Spike must be feeling pretty good now which he will need because Buffy will be frantic. More story soon please. ilpopi 11/25/2005 04:19 am Chapter 36 Loved the Darla bashing. It was very funny. But Spike was right in punishing Angel. He put them all in danger. Perhaps Angelus would have honoured the oath but Darla could have killed everyone by then. Awesome update! Love the little tidbits about the watchers. So glad to see more of this one! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
-Lisa Angie 11/25/2005 12:24 am Chapter 36 More please! Shady 11/24/2005 09:45 pm Chapter 36 ooo look, I'm the first review!
Fab Chapter Schez. Love Angel Pain! What a wanker! But OMG, Tara and Giles, and Guilt!Buffy...oh the angst!
Update soon *not holding my breath* oh my gosh!!! did you just kill giles??? i mean...i've done things like that in my stories so i can't talk..but that's just awful!!! but the story's awesome :) Oh yeah glory have your fun while yo can:P ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/08/2005 06:49 am Chapter 35 Oh no ... poor Giles and Tara. {Frowns and cries softly} What a horrible way for him to go. Hope you are able to update soonish. Lou 10/17/2005 10:54 pm Chapter 35 Excellent gruesome violence! Athenewolfe 10/16/2005 07:35 am Chapter 35 What? NOOOOOOO.... grabs shez and holds on... want more ficcy - how evil EVIL more more more .... sigh love the story as always cannot wait to fid out more. jane 10/15/2005 10:33 pm Chapter 35 Oh no I certainly didn't expect that. Poor Tara but at least it looks like she'll live I'm not holding out much hope for Giles. Was that Xander back from his exile? I can't wait to find out. Absolutely love this I don't care how long we have to wait for updates I could never lose interest. Esther 10/15/2005 01:40 pm Chapter 35 I'm screaming "No" at the end....oh my, please tell me Giles isn't dead. And poor Tara!!! Spuffy smuttage was FAB!!! Oh please, Schez, please let there be more soon....I beg you.... Of course I loved the smuttage. LoL.
the Glory carnage was all sad, though *pouts* much angstyness oh my god you are truly evil grrrrrrrr IO love it. Kathy 10/15/2005 06:46 am Chapter 35 Spuffy-smuttage very good. Sad for Tara to be insane again. Bad for you for hurting Giles so. And who was the caped crusader screaming "No." Okay, may not so much with the cape...
spikespet2002@yahoo.com Mystery arrival is Dawn???? Or Willow? One or the other. *whip* End evil cliffhanger! OK, liking the Spuffy smut. Who is the mystery person? Is it Willow? Lots of enemies now; Glory and minions, Drusilla and Darla, Dracula and bride. Did I forget any? Lots of bads to defeat. More please. Sara M 10/15/2005 02:07 am Chapter 35 Oh, oh, thats just not right. Poor Giles, and Tara. More please! wow...how sweet...they're gonna belong to each other in every way possible...love this story :) LOL I loved the Angel bashing and even the Spuffy scmhoop :P Richard 01/05/2006 11:47 am Chapter 34 "Groaning slightly, he willed the incipient erection away; he hated that his cock liked pain and perked up whenever it appeared on the horizon." LOL!!! It does explain a few things though, like why Angelus is such a sadist.. Mandythemusician 10/12/2005 05:01 am Chapter 34 A freakin' wonderful and creative story...as if Dracula, Glory, Dru and Darla all weren't enough by themselves...yeah, lets put them all together and yeah, while we are at it let's give the added stress of Buffy being turned...lol... Love it...good writing, good character work and unique angle. I especially liked Angel healing Joyce... Spike and Buffy need a mommy... hated that they killed her off. It takes major spunk to have no powers in the midst of supernatural champions and still stand strong and fearless. ~*~Tasha~*~ 10/11/2005 11:08 am Chapter 34 Reread this chapter. Can never get enough Dark Gift. {grins} The whole scene with the Fang Gang plus Willow and Xander walking in on Angel and Darla was just perfect. I cracked up the first time, and I cracked up again now. I can picture all the green faces and Cordy going off on Angel. Look forward to when you are inspired to write more. awwww...now i think its time for that claim!!! :) LOL, doofus Buffy, it must be a scoobie trait :P loved the reunion between buffy and spike...hate darla and angelus...as if glory and dracula weren't bad enough :) Ya know Inow get why Darla turned Angel.... She is dumber than him :P Lou 10/06/2005 09:53 pm Chapter 32 Post coital Angel is a hoot! oh no...i hope he doesn't lose his soul again...i actually felt bad for him during that talk..and i'm glad the others didn't let spike back down...buffy *was* wrong...great chapter!! LOL, yeah real smart peaches :P drunk Spike and Giles was hilarious!! love it!! and now maybe buffy and spike will actually talk this out...so loving this story!!! LOL, make Angel suffer, please :P wow...this is getting heavy...i think he did all he could, she's just so confused...poor thing...need more story now :) Oh god poor Spike women are just bloody evil why?? why isn't he ready?? grrr... great chapter though OH shit stoopid Buffy :P awww...i thought she was gonna get to kill him...spike's still in for it though, isn't he? glad they both got to thoroughly kick drac's butt though!! :) LOL, get him Buffy :P oh no!!! i knew his lying was gonna cause trouble!! and here she is getting caught by dracula!! this sucks!! next chappie please :) Dun, Dun, Dun Great lead in to the nexy chappie Damn good chappie all around i love the developing friendship between spike and giles..and your anya is amazing, i love her!! i'm getting a bit nervous about all the stuff with glory though...and for angel to make a sacrifice like that...wow...too powerful Poor Giles Damn good chappie :P well maybe they wont need to contact travers or d'hoffryn then...but spike shouldn't be lying to her, that never works out well for him does it?? love the chapter :) "We're screwed," Anya sighed. Yeah Anya but I bet its better tan Xander :P uh-huh...now they're catching on...that bride deserved that...i dont blame buffy a bit...great chapter :) Oh yeah damn good awww....that's sad..and they know joyce is sick, don't they?? how sad...i love how you write the characters without bashing them...it's awesome..on to the next chapter now :) LOL, women and there need for the phone maybe they'll be safer in la...you make me actually feel sorry for angel here...just like you did with riley earlier...you write this extremely well... thanx for another great chapter!! LOL, damn good chappie :P oh angel is so toast!! spike's gonna kick his butt for messing with buffy...and then buffy can kick his butt for messing with spike....i am thoroughly addicted to this story now!! Angel is an idiot, can we turn Riley and make them claim each other as Mates :P you actually made me feel sorry for riley...he was starting to sort of see the light there before glory got him...and buffy can make other people disappear too...cool...on to the next chapter :) LOL, can we kick Riley a few times now :P i love the way you write the original scripting into it...it gives the story a weird sense of nostalgia, even though everything is so different....can't wait for more!!! LOL, great chappie :P okay...so who got riley??? i have to know!!! his reaction was unexpected...but makes sense...now buffy's "perfect for him' what with his thing for vamps...perv!! loving this story!! Riley is an idiot :P Nuff said Charlene 11/25/2005 04:27 am Chapter 17 Just wanted to say, that i love this fic!
Thankyou for giving me the chance to read it! :) i feel bad for dawnie...and joyce...the whole thing is really sad...can't wait to see what happens next!!! LOL, can even the Powers that Be Help Xander so spike is the only one who knows dawn's not real? this could get very complicated! loving this story, but done for the night! will read more tomorrow! LOL, great chappie nice way of welcoming themselves back to sunnydale...and she's about to go see her mom!!! LOL...on to next chappie!! gawd will Drac just leave :P okay...i have a feeling here's where things start to get hard...besides spike that is ;) lol LOL, great chappie how awful...i feel bad for xander because he seems to have completely lost his mind...maybe this way evil willow will be out of the way for a while...guess we'll see :) Oh yeah Xander got part of his :P awwww...she loves him! and now he can see her thoughts and feelings too...i'm still worried that things aren't gonna stay so nice for them for long :( Oh yeah Iloves it :P you know, i feel kind of sorry for xander in spite of it all...but not riley, riley's just wrong!! and i hope he doesn't try anything to hurt buffy and spike!! man, between dracula, evil willow, riley, and maybe glory...they're gonna have a lot to deal with!! Oh yeah Doofus Xander is found out not Glory???? hm...this could get really interesting...and Dark Willow on the horizon too...loving this story very much!! LOL, Xander is to stupid “You know to catch him? Like the cartoons?†Anya explained. Completely unaware that the others were staring at her as if she were insane. She was used to the looks and ignored them as usual.
Pure d Anya I loves it poor spike...glad they got that straightened out, he's so insecure about her feelings...loving this story lots... LOL, more plot help :P wow that's hot...love that last scene there...hope the next chapter picks up where that left off... :) Oh yeah Buffy go for it :P okay that last bit was kind of ominous...i love buffy's reaction to his being her sire...the whole thing is so tender and sweet, just love this story!!! I'll read more later!! LOL, I love your take on these characters :P yep...she took that well...riley dusted harmony! can't say that i mind, but i really think he's gonna be a problem here!! "Oh, my God! I'm a vampire!" Buffy wailed. I have always loved that line :P things should get pretty interesting when she wakes up..and riley's gonna be a problem, i know...on to the next chapter!! Kiiiilllllll Riley :P Ya know I love this fic :P well at least she has her soul!! and he chose to make her strong..wow...he could be in for trouble! on to the next chapter! LOL, little does the Euro trash know that he'll be getting his ass kicked soon :P "My simpering pet? I think I may keep him for a while before releasing him." Dracula grinned wickedly. "He has his uses when I tire of female company."
"You mean…" Spike threw his head back and laughed.
Of course he means it Xander is a butt monkee after all :P oh no!!! spike has to take her out of there...but is she going to be loyal to dracula now as her sire?? on to the next chapter!! Drac may be stupider than Angel :P Kur 11/30/2005 12:08 am Chapter Two Wow! What a shock for our poor Spike! Love it! Damn, I love this fic. But you know this. ohgodspike 11/12/2008 12:36 am Chapter One There has been no movement in this story for well over 2 years! Take it down already and spare me the torture of checking every couple of months to see if there is any progress. My Christmas wish: Please beloved archives, of which this is only one - take down the WIPS that have not been updated in more than a year. Or, move them to a separate section dedicated to WIPS. wow...this is weird...why don't they know her? what has dracula done?? *gasp* or maybe its riley!! have to know, reading on now! LOL, poor Spike dealing with the idiots :P Great story! It must be really confusing for him to be the only one who actually remebers her. What's wrong with the rest? I loved it. Kisses, Kur Oh yeah, the best thing about all this fic getting uploaded, much easier to reread. :P | |||
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