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Do-Over! by Caro Mio
I love the team of Dawn and Andrew making it better. I do wonder w got the tranqualizer though and what Andrew was up to .
Really nice what if.
Kathleen
Really nice what if.
Kathleen
It was Warren. Andrew knocked him out so the police would have the time to find him. No dead Tara, no psycho Willow. :)
Thanks.
Thanks.
Excellent story! I loved this!!
Thanks! It was fun to write. (long time no see:).)
Nichbuket
05/06/2007 10:42 pm
One shot
Oh dang. It was just begining and then it stopped. :( You should expand this into a longer tale. Could be really good.
Maybe some day. Thanks for reading. I need to finish my WIPs before I think about starting off on something new.
I wish this wasn't a one-shot, I would love to read more, this was very good.
Thanks. I'm trying not to get into a long fic, because I just don't have the time right now, but I might come back to this later.
Loved the fic! However, people do not change that much in looks from teens to 30! At least not for women..
Normally, yes, definitely......but she didn't want him to just say "Bit! What are you doing here?" Post-apocalyptic societies can change people......
Awww - Don't we wish? Nicely done.
Thanks. I had fun with this.
Nice that it was Dawn and Andrew coming back to try and make things better between the two of them.
At first, I was just thinking Dawn and some anonymous partner, then it clicked that it would be perfect to have Andrew be it. It wouldn't have taken much to persuade him to come along.
That was so cool. Dimension hopping Dawn and Andrew. But what about his soul? Everyone wished they never had that episode, including the actors. You made it happen, thanks.
He could still get it at some point, but not with a traumatic event as the catalyst....or maybe, he and Buffy can gain their friendship back, and she'll admit her feelings....endless possibilities.
awwww...very sweet, very excellent way of changing things...i love it :) and i'd love to see where this verse would have gone from there, had spike been along for everything that happened after that, and never gone to get the soul, and so on and so on....in short..
more more more!!! :)
more more more!!! :)
Nope, no soul...at least, not for that reason. He might have chosen it later, for a non-traumatic reason....But who knows? That's the fun of this! Any guess on who got tranquilized?
I really liked this. I like the fact that it was Dawn that made his stop and think.
Good job! Very well written!
Good job! Very well written!
Yup...Wouldn't any of us like to go in, press pause, and stop that craziness before it leapt off the cliff? Spike's whole problem there was that he was so worked up, and Buffy was in the worst mood to deal with it.
Bigbird
02/07/2007 04:04 pm
One shot
Shame it was a one-shot I actually really like the idea of a non-whinney Dawn trying to fix things!
That's the neat thing...we can imagine all the possible directions the little clues could take. I'm in a hopeful mood.
Ooo, I liked this much better. Wish this happened for real. *sigh*
Don't we all....Thanks.
Cool. :)
Though a sequel with Buffy and Spike's much calmer conversation would be nice. ;)
Either way it was a good story. :)
Though a sequel with Buffy and Spike's much calmer conversation would be nice. ;)
Either way it was a good story. :)
I had a feeling people would ask for more.
Thanks for reading.
Thanks for reading.
Pin
02/07/2007 01:33 pm
One shot
Fabulous! I loved this and you did a wonderful job structuring it to be this little vignette with huge potential impact. Very clever; thanks!
Thanks....Got the idea yesterday, wrote it last night, and posted. Flyin' by the non-betaed seat of my pants!
Lou
02/07/2007 12:20 pm
One shot
A sweey little slice of if only!
Thanks!
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