Leitmotif by yutamiyu

09/21/2008 02:41 pm
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Very nice piece, Y - I liked the use of present tense - it gives the story and odd, sharp-edged feel that goes with the subject.  Also, the thought that Spike saying he loves her is painful to her.

03/09/2007 12:22 am
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her thoughts explain all her actions. terribly sad, very good read, thank you.
Thank you!

time of change
03/08/2007 01:29 am
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This is brilliant.
Thank you!

daniel_nieves
03/08/2007 12:40 am
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all i can say is wow...
I've read alot of Spuffy smut and while some of it was good, this was crazy. I like the details you put in the first chapter, it's viciousness and roughness brings back certain memories of mine that were all too pleasant. Good stuff..

Daniel N.
Thank you so much, Daniel.

03/08/2007 12:34 am
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wow...intense, and heartbreaking...beautifully written, so very sad for both of them
Thank you so much! It was a bit difficult writing this story, because I've been so long in the mindset of Chirality-verse Buffy and Spike -- which is evident in the other works I've posted here. This was a complete divergence, and took longer to write. Thank you for reading and reviewing, as always!