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Elysium by Devin
sirc
04/15/2007 10:57 am
Welcome
Great start! :D
Thanks very much! I got swamped with schoolwork, but I have a little bit written and may be updating sometime within the next month. :( Not very promising, but the muse has been DEAD.
seems like both Buffy and Anya are feeling incomplete. Too bad only Anya understands why. Interesting that Anya would have known someone who works for Heaven when she was a vengence Demon. I wonder when Buffy will figure out Beatrice and the Powers real agenda for her.
Yup, Anya and Beatrice's relationship will be explained later. There's continuity, I swear. :) It won't be too long in the making (Buffy only spent circa 5 months in Heaven), but it'll take a little bit of time for Buffy to understand why she's there, etc. Thanks so much for the review, it was quite observant. :)
I'm rather surprised that Buffy is being so ?passive? about all of this. Your premise is interesting and you have written Anya very well. (Buffy is good too, just not as feisty as I'm used to. That's not a complaint, just an observation. I'm curious to see where you go from here.)
I understand what you're saying, and just know that it was intentional. :) It's weird writing Buffy like this, but there's a few factors that are making her so withdrawn (some that we know now-- she was prepared for death, she feels like she's missing something-- but others we'll learn later). Thanks so much for the interest and your observations! :)
DeanSamWinchesterfan
03/29/2007 10:09 pm
Welcome
Good story so far.I feel so bad for Xander and Anya.Update soon.
Oh yeah, I'm very glad that she didn't really die in the show-- but I had to play around with it! :) Of course, fanfiction lets me actually orchestrate a happy ending, maybe. Thanks for the review!
Great beginning.
I'm guessing Spike will be the one to make her whole again.
I'm guessing Spike will be the one to make her whole again.
Thank you very much! :) Yup, he will definitely play a role in the whole-making. And vice-versa, maybe...
silverwolf
03/29/2007 04:20 am
Welcome
interesting, i believe i have read at least one btvs fic about dante's inferno, but not about the heaven portion of it. interesting!
Hey! You're the only one who got my reference. :) I haven't read the Paradise portion of The Divine Comedy, but I did a bit of research when looking for a good guide figure for the girls, and Beatrice of course was perfect. :) Thanks so much for the review!
kim
03/29/2007 02:53 am
Welcome
Very interesting.....
Thanks! :) I'm working on the next chapter right now, hope to keep your interest.
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